confessions of the heart (pt 4 on pg 1) - Page 5

PART 3:

recap:
the docotr has asked everyone to leave however jai has said that everyone can go and that he is going to stay because bani is his patni...he then tells the doctor "meri bani koa bachaloa."

Part 3:

The doctor gives Jai a hopeful smile. He proceeds to check Bani stats. Notices her blood pressure is lower than normal. He asks jai what she ate the whole day.
J: Bani ne kuch nahi khaya...voh karva chauth ka vrat rakh rahee the mera liye...lekin mujhe kaam parh gaya tha...

Dr: Mr. Walia aap very lucky hoa, kis in times mein ve koi larki apna farz samajthee hai....
J: I know Dr.
Dr: Acha mein Mrs. Walia koi yeh thakath ka teeka laga doonga...aur thora sa paani ve ose pilana kee koshish karta hoon....
The dr. moves towards bani, when Jai suddenly realises that he should be the one to feed Bani and water or any type of food.....He asks the doctor:
J: teek hai agar mein osse paani pilana kee koshish karoon...
Dr: of course mr. walia...
Jai carefully hoists Bani up and moves behind her so that she is leaning against him...he takes the glass water and carefully puts it too her lips...bani slightly reacts and takes a little of sip of water.....Jai continues this and bani continues to take the sips of water from Jai's hands. After a while Jai puts the glass down and lays bani back on the bed. he moves to speak to the doctor...
J: Dr. aur kuch karna hai
Dr.: Nahin Mr. Walia mein khal subah aajaon ga...ik aur teeka lagana...agar in hosh aajaye toh inko zaroor thodee se roti woti deene ke koshish karna....
J: teek hai dr aur aapka bahut bahut shukriyah.

The doctor leaves. Jai looks back at bani...and moves outside their bedroom and speaks to the rest of the family.
J: Bani teek hoa jayegee. Thodi see kamzoaree he...lekin voh bhilkul teek hoa jayegee.
Ab aap sabh jao aur mein inke sath rahoonga....
Good night!
Jai turns around and moves back into their bedroom.
Shocking Roshini and Jigyasa and making them wonder what has come over Jai and why is he being so attentive.
When Jai goes inside Bani slightly opens her eyes...Jai smiles at her and Bani also very weakly smiles back. Jai moves to her side and brushes her hair away from her face....
J: bahut dharaya he tumne sabh koa....ab kuch math kaho, chup chap araam karo, subah bath karengai.
Bani slightly nods her head and closes her eyes again.
Jai lies down next to her carefully leaving enough space between them so that Bani is completely comfortable. However Jai does not go to sleep as he cannot stop looking at Bani, and trying to think why did he worry so much when he saw her lying on the ground....why did he feel the life drain out of him, why was he ready to destroy everything if something happened to Bani...he had never felt this way....and for the first time in his life Jai was scared to think of what type of power did bani have over him...

to be continued.

hey soni2004! that was great! pleeez do continue! ill be waitin!!

i'll continue sooner than before....coming up..

Roshni tells Bani that Jai did not come to the roof to break her vrat but to get divorce papers signed...

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it is soo good!!

nice promo!!

keep it up!!

👏 !! awesome 3rd part!!
pls pls continue soon! 😃

That was great. I like the fact its all on one page.

👏
please continue sooooooooooon...

great job. can't wait to read more!

will hopefully write the next chapter tonight

i will continue very soon, just have some stuff on my plate which is quite time consuming. There's not enough hours in the day......I kind of wish I had that same remote control that Adam Sandler has in Click. I could stop the world, get everything done then start the world again and feel in control of everything while maintaing the superwoman feeling I like to have.....