KYA JODI YAAR ch 45-115,46 end -116 mar 24

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: niki_rbo
hey friends...next one is like that of love story...i have little scenes...it comes to 4 to 5 ..can u give some romantic scenes in some places with some situations...

hey niki u r master in writing rom scenes...wht suggesion cn i give u n id u wnt i wnt sme scary situation romance😆😆

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Fantastic update

loved it simply loved it

my fav was the part where they told each other abt their feelings

especially when he apologized and explained y he did that and how sorry he is for all that

gosh he cant wait to make love ... but they have waited enough so they need to be restless

and shanak n betaabi ka to purana rishta hai

the kids are always hovering around them

but finally everyone knows and like the reception part and his flirting wid her

the last part was super cute ... something that started with chillies ended with chillies and sealed with a kiss

lukin fwd to more ff ss and os from you

keep writing