FF- Frm Kiss to Night of Bliss- Morning After Pg10

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

its beautiful...but sorry just I cannot like the last portion where Ram kisses Priya...as far as both are concerned they are too private people and very matured so even though they discover love lately I donot think they can kiss outside their bedroom...its just my opinion that has got nothing to do with ur imagination, ur writing was superb and please do continue with ur writing, may come up with other FF as interesting as this one

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crazyfats

@crazyfats

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its beautiful...but sorry just I cannot like the last portion where Ram kisses Priya...as far as both are concerned they are too private people and very matured so even though they discover love lately I donot think they can kiss outside their bedroom...its just my opinion that has got nothing to do with ur imagination, ur writing was superb and please do continue with ur writing, may come up with other FF as interesting as this one

Hi Jineejiggs! Thanks for your frank feedback. I appreciate that. I understand the two characters are very private. That's the reason I made sure that Ram guides Priya to a secluded location inside the Park... he takes to the top of the cliff where nobody is around and the lights are extremely dim for anyone to see what's happening.

Hope this justifies the kiss :)

Thanks again. I genuinely appreciate it. Such observations suggest that the FF is read with interest.

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crazyfats

@crazyfats

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Hello Evryone!

Thanks a ton for all the appreciation messages. And also for liking the FF. I would like to say this on behalf of every FF writer that we all put our hearts & soul into churning out that perfect story for the FF. However, nothing brings us much happiness as feedback & comments from you all. Even a simple 'loved it' reply is more than enough to make us realize that our efforts are really appreciated.

Thanks again!

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

lovely @veryyy romantic last part was a pleasure to read luved it to the core neha👍🏼 and dadi part was hilarious wowww🤗

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saniya9919

@saniya9919

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Loved it... Loved it...Loved it...It was very sweet, cute & hilarious..The bathrm scene was the best. 🤣Can actually imagine Dadi with her cute expressions standing there & Ram-Priya's awkwardness..Hope Cv's will come up with some cute RaYa moments like this.😛

Thanks a lot.Plz keep writing.