Series of OSs: Unbelievable updt! ( current track)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...little moi is back with an OS...I know I know...I still haven't forgotton about my ffs..." The trip" and " I need you"...u see schools are starting and plus I had to work so been busy...anyways this idea just came into my brain and I couldn't help but experiment with it...let's see what I make out of it...and what ur feedbacks are...
I may continue, depending on the likes and comments...( Yes its necessary for motivation...not only its necessary for me but all the IF writers..:) )

This OS is based on the latest spoilers:)

Oh its completely from arnav's POV...so be prepared to read the What the phrase...hehehh

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He couldn't believe what he just heard from his utterly wierd wife.
" What the-...Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada...are u in ur senses?" He asked angirly...
" Yes!...Mr Raizada...I am. I'm going to be sleeping inside here...and that too ON the bed!...and not only will we be sharing the bed, but the bathroom, the dresser, the closet etc..." She spoke firmly as though she not was going to expect a no.
" Khushi!...why do u suddenly want to sleep with me..." He spoke softly while coming closer.
" I'm helpless...and don't think for once that I WANT to sleep with u...now stop advancing towards me...I have to go take a shower...oh by the way ...BYE!" She struck her tongue out and ran in the bathroom quickly all the while giggling like a kid.

Arnav quickly got out of the little shock of having his wife stuck her tongue out at him, and proclaiming the bathroom first
* HOW DARE SHE!* he thought, anger taking over him.
" KHUSHI!...how dare u...its my bathroom open up!..."he said while banging on the door.
" Not anymore...remember I'm ur wife now...hahahaha" she said while laughing.

He involuntarily turned the door knob, without realizing before that it was opened. He smirked as he noticed that his prankster of a wife forgot to lock the bathroom.
* silly woman* he thought as he entered the bathroom, only to find it steamy. He saw a figure behind the glass wall of the stand up shower stall. His smirk grew wider.

* well well well...wifey* he thought naughtily..all the anger out the window. He strode over to where she was. He couldn't see her properly due to the steam on the glass. He wildly wished the steam hadn't been there. He then smacked himself ...* what are u thinking...ur here to get her back...not to think of taking her right here* his brain told him.

He turned his face around to where her towel was. He immediately took it and wrapped it around his neck. He heard the running shower close.

He saw as her hand reached out to grab her towel. He then heard her mutter..

" Hey DM...where is this stupid towel..."
He tried his best not to burst out laughing.

" Thankgod!...there is an extra towel in here.." He heard her speak loudly..

His smirk vanished from his face...

" Unbelievable..." He muttered to himself, but then he smirked again at his another mischievious thought.

He saw her come out of the shower, with only the towel wrapped dangerously low on her heavenly body.

He completely lost his self contol, upon seeing her trying to pull her towel up, exposing her sexy long legs to him.

She still hadn't noticed him, thanks to the mild steam.

He saw her move towards the mirror. He slowly moved towards her and circled him arms around her waist making her shriek. Before she could scream louder, he covered her mouth with his hands.
" Shhh...relax Khushi!...its me...ur Husband..." He removed his hand, sure of her full attention on him
" Hey DM...what are u doing here?..." She tried to pry his strong arms off of her, but eventually failed.
" Didn't u say Mrs. Raizada that u want us to share the bedroom, bed, the closet, and the BATHROOM...that's what I'm here for..." He said while turning her around, his hands still tightly clasped around her waist.
" Arnav...let me gooo...or else..." She said warningly, moving her head backwards as he was leaning in on her.
" Or else...or else what?" He said challengingly.
She dug her finger nails into his hands, making him almost scream but he controlled himself.
" Unbelievable..." He muttered loudly, but nothing usually was believable where his strange wife was concerned.
He felt her move out of her hands, but he was too quick for her and grabbed her wrist and yanked her hard against his chest, making her back collide with it...

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Alright imma leave it here...it was just an experiment like I said before , that's why I didn't continue...but if u guys wish me to continue then hit the like button and do give ur feedbacks:D

Ps: if u wish to receive pms for my updates regarding my ffs that were mentioned at the beginning and my future work, all u have to do is hit the buddy button and duh!...buddy me:d

Love- -Simran- ( love u Arhians!!!:))


ChApTeR InDeX

Part 1: up there:)
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lara3110 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb OS👍🏼 - Please continue soon.

PM me too.
Gargee thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice!👏

You gonna continue that? PM me if you do won't you? And thanks for the PM!
banditqueenn. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What the "EFF "? I think It was going to turn HOT ! Continue Darn ! so cruel of you to Stop here ! 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_rockstar

what is this simran...??
how can u stop on SUCH a clifhanger...???

oh i loved the OS...
as well as the title...lol!
i can perfectly visualize it happeningg in the show...
no i cant..!!
simran is gettingg tooo naughty with the updtes nowadays..!!

n im lovin' it...
hehe..

thanks for the pm...
hope its an SS !

~esha~


Hahah esha...I say this everytime but imma say it again..I love ur comments...hehe and about the naughtiness...I think its just a coincidence that I'm having hot scenes coming up in both my ffs and this one...oops I just told u that I have a hot scene coming up in this Os...dang!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey its superb...do continue...we just cant get enough of ArHi now, can we? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CUTE N AWSOME!
it was so much fun to read ur os...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os! thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uff..you are certainly evil...again a cliff hanger. U know how to get comments.🤣
Loved it when he said "Didn't u say Mrs. Raizada that u want us to share the bedroom, bed, the closet, and the BATHROOM...that's what I'm here for..." so when is your next update...waiting...

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it.
I wonder what ASR will do to Khushi now?
Thant was like wow. Awesome work.
Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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