Series of OSs: Unbelievable updt! ( current track)

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Di! Thanks for the mention!

Okay, and now the update!

Sorry for the late ass comment, but you know why *wink wink*

Oh. Em. Gee!!!!! That was HOT! Im so happy that this wasn't a dream, and there is something insanely sensuous about being under a sheer fabric... That detail reminded me of their perfect Teri Meri dance... Loved it!

And the line at the end fit in perfectly... It wasnt cheesy at all! Loved it! Best. Gift. EVER!

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andru_sk

@andru_sk

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Beautiful written and i love the tease also :D. Eager to know what will happen next. Continue soon. Take care.

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@-Spirited-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

hey simran read this one too

n hey yiepee this time he isnt dreaming, that make me love this update more than the previous one though the previous one too was extremely hot.

I love these hot updates n the concepts u come up with

n u actually end up writing what i actually want to see in the show *Keeping my guttermind away * i really want the show to progress n i guess todays episode did show a progress

n i am sure there would be a day when ur predictions n what is actually happening in the show would match

nikki