GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
hmmm
m having lil problem geting involve in such life style n theme ...😕'


but m realy loving your writing style ...yopur hard work can be clerarly seen .

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
edit my comment on page 9.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
@kheya.. its okay sweety if u r not comfortable u donot have to read it... chill

thanks for liking the new way of mine
pardon errors...

Chapter: 4

The front two cars move to either side at once making way for mayanks car..and this was it

Mayank: shit…

His car was in such speed that he could control it and in front of him was a truck full of cars, his car went up in the air and bang on crashed with it,

The track stopped and soon the police joined to..ben stopped his car and rushed towards mackz car…

It was not at all a good sight…

Ben: oh man,..take aside, he made his way and went near mayanks car, the ambulance came and the rescue people carefully pulled out mayank from the car, he wasn't conscious, his body was all in blood and his face has glass piece on it..

Police: do u know him…

Ben: no ..i just stoped by so thought of checking who he is, and he seems to be my neighbor..

Plice: ahan…so did he was drinking and driving

Ben: I donot know he is a very nice boy, I won't think he will drinking at this hr..

Police: let's see ..we have to check, speedy driving and two cars crashed of this man, he will be charged…

Mayank was taken to hospital, Benji was looking at the truck and he can clearly see that it was all planed, how much he warned him still he did tht. Truck who was suppose to take atleats 10 cars, just had two, plus the ramp was down too, so that mayanks car went straight into it and get crashed with it

Ben: hey cop

Police: ya

Ben: isn't this against traffic rules, look at this, this lever is down , and that made his car went in ..

He came forward and looked at it,..

Police: hmm ..ur right but still he will be charged….

Ben took his car towards the hospital and was praying tht hopefull mayank is fine, though as per he saw him, it doesn't seems to be…he never thought addy will play such game in wch he wants to take his life, if that he ever hinted he wouldn't have let Mayank race.

Benji and mayank has been friend from past 2 years since when mayank has taken up the car racing thing seriously, mayank has been great support to benji and so as benji in his life, they are set of two true friends always together no matter what happen…

Reaching the hospital mayank was down with the initial treatment, doctors told that his arm n leg is fractured and he will not be able to get away from hospital atleast for 15 days…

And his hand will take a month for recovering so as his whole body..

He moved inside his room..

Ben: I told u not to take part in it

Mayank: shutup I am not dead…but yes addy will be, I wanna be out if this..

He tried to sit but he wasn't able to, he was in pain and that to much..

Ben: out of here, police is after u there cuming to ur way in evening, I am going to check the car left overs ,hopefully we have something to do with it that can make u free..

Mayank: chill dude I am fine, but addy will not be..

Ben: forget about him mackz, look at urself… ur were almost dead, cant u see, I warned u but no u have to take challenge.. God knows which deed of u worked for u…

Mayank: when I can drive back

Ben:sigh… not before a month,.,.maybe more than that..

Mayank: crab man…so am I gonna stay here..

Ben: I am afraid yes…BTw..donot worry their loads of hot nurse here

Mayank: really, the one that checked me was of my mother's age…get something for me else I will die here

Ben: mother is not a good option dear…get urself back piece atleast than will do something..i ll be back…

Mayank: is my car completely gone…

Ben: I am afraid yea

Mayank: crabbb man…she was my first love…I did so much to get her…

Nurse: hey u lost her…

Mayank: he pouted..ya I lost her…see such a girl she was, she said she will never see me again….i so love her…

Ben shocked his head

Nurse: oh poor baby, donot worry I am sure u will get a better girl…

Mayank: ya really you think so….ben u were going somewhere na go..she …

Nurse: Julia…

Mayank: ya Julia dear will take a good care of u..ur gonna dear nah..

Julia: ya sure..

Ben: ya ya I am leaving….bye….wht a luck u have man, even in broken condition u get girls and I being in perfect piece even donot…

…………

Bribing the area inspector where mayank's car was kept benji, was able to make the report tht mayank's car break where out of function, and the gear box got stacked so tht he couldn't lower the speed..plus the cars around him did'nt allowed him

,…………

Ben: ur looking so fresh, seems ur not in a mood to leave this place

Mayank: I am getting so much of the love and care anddd , why should i…so whats the scene

Ben: got it done….ur car gear was stuck and breaks were failed

Mayank: ur the man ben…thnks dude…

Ben: the cops will be coming soon u just have to be sure of ur words…

Mayank: okay I am lying down and I am dam weak….

Police: hey mayank..ur name

Mayank: ya..he said in torn weak voice…

Police: will u explain why on this street u were driving on such high speed

Mayank: my gear box seems to stuck and my breaks were not working so I was trying to find a clear area where I can stop the car with other help, yet two cars more in speed came from back and hited me

Police: mr mayank…still ur speed was to high, tht doesn't justify it…we r not arresting u yet u have to pay the destruction u have caused

Mayank: but that wasn't my fault

Police: donot tell me wht to do and wht not to…ur in our list now , one more time such racing speed and you will be in, its ur first time thts why I m just making u pay for it…$10,000..

Mayank: WHT..i cant pay it….its too much

Police: so either u spend ur time in jail or pay it….

Mayank: but make it low

Police: donot argue with me else I ll make it both jail and money got it…

Mayank: fine..he said in uter anger….

He left…

Mayank: wht the hell it is ….its completely ridiculous

Ben: it was too well planned mayank, everything, area, how much u will be charged, and tht ur life will be almost gone,

Mayank: but how I am gonna pay for it..

Ben: race that's all you can do the only thing u know..…5 races to win..or u can bet more….

Mayank: how can I , u know I am not in position

Ben: mayank relax, panicking is not the solution, get urself recover

Mayank: I even donot have car man, and plus I cant race in NY

Ben: so what, there are so many city were we can …first get urself in working position

Mayank: I will, and I have to…its just not me, I will tell addy to what I am…u have ur people in Miami na..

He smiled..

Ben: so finally u want to go there..yes we have people, very honest and helpful..

Mayank: yes.let me get out of this hospital than will have to look for a car and than to Miami ..Miami will now see mackz is cuming to honor them

Precap: Nupur's entrance


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesome update API...
sukar hain ke he is fine bt god!!!!!!!!!! yeh kabhi nhi sudhrega...
yeha bhi nurse ke sath shuru ho gaya...😆😡🤣
woa...so he is going to miami nice...
n uss Ahdha-Raaj ko toh baadmein dekhlungi...huh
waiting eagerly for d next part n Nupur's Entry as m sure ke yeh wala Nupur meri Fizu API ke writings mein sabse jyada different hoga...n han i want description abt her clothing too ok!!!!
as i really want her in modern Avatar...😉
loved it lodsss
update soon...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: plzzz update "MY"😳

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

poor myank but thank god he is fi9... that cheatre how could he do ths?

now he is going to miami wow...
eagerly waiting for the nupurs enterance...
loved it dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
lovedd it
amazing g
looking forward to it
finally my wait will be over nups is comming
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
heyy amazng update but was ltl sort plzzz
thanx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
nice update
i am happy mayank is safe...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: vinan2050

heyy amazng update but was ltl sort plzzz

thanx fr pm



sorry abt that
i know they are abit small... it was suppose to be a quick updater... 6 chaps already written..yet me and my late updates...
but surly will try to make them along...
thanks for liking it

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
lol fiza m not gonna leave reading this story .
you have no idea how much reading freak i am .
i love tasting all kinda story ...n m gonna read yours ofcrs as its gonna give me totaly diff taste.

this update was good .waiting for next update finaly nupur will enter .

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