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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys guys im here wht my othr os ..purely imagination
continuation frm yesterday's episode
as we all have seen how naitik gets irritated n goes to bed ..
now the scen is ..akshara decorates room wht candels n n n...wears her nightgown(nov 9th )..and goes near naitik with a rose in hand .and to wake up naitik by moving tht rose around his face .as naitik is a bit ..irritated ..without opening eyes he move's here n thr ..yet akshi dosnt stop ..for a instance naitik gets up n shout "kya hai akshara may soa raha hu na "
thn he looks around room ..whch is decorated with candels n ..akshara in nightgown ..
as naitik shouts akshara gets up n go n stand near window facing it ..
naitik realises this n ..slowly go and hugg akshara frm back(my moving his hand around akshi's waist slowly )...☺️☺️
akshara feels the touch (due to air akshi's air go n touch naitik's face )
(imagin bright moon light with cool breeze around n naksh near window .under tht moon light ..the big one akshi in nightgown..😍)
naitik n akshara both cmplitly mesmarized .in thr dreamy world ..
akshara turns towards naitik ..,naitik starring at akshara ..n akshara ki aankhe sharam ka maare jhuki hui .☺️
naitik lifts akshi's head n akshara blushing like anyting ..both abt to kiss each othr ..
thy hear a knocking again(ya its g3.😡.🤢)
g3:knocks door calling munna ,bahu ..
naksh:in thr dream world
akshara:naitik maa..!!
naitik :in his dream world ..kya..??
akshara(in slow tone):naitik maa aagai hai ..aab kya .??
naitik:maa abb..??..aab kya akshara..?/
akshara:naitik ..may (n she moves her hand towards her dress n show ki she is on gown na )
naitik :hah akshara aab kya kaarenga
just thn ..rajbana cum out near g3...he wll be kya hua ..?(naksh r able to hear)
akshara:naitik bauji bhi hai
(she wll be about to respond naitik keep's a his fingure on akhi's lip's n by nodding say's no)(both again starring at each othr)
g3:munna bahu ..
akshara:may abhi change kaarle thi hu
naitik: abhi.??mera samane??...☺️☺️
akshara:naitik ..bahar maa aur bauji hai aur aap..aapbhi na ..hamesha mujhe phasa detha hai
g3 to rajbana:hah ji ..bahu ko kuch kehna tha
akshara:starts changing it ..she removes string of the over coat .
rajbana:aab.??g3 ji ..bacche soga hunge..dekhiya light bhi baand hai
g3: per ji
rajbana:per kya..?? abhi chaliya subaha kehdena
(akshara just un tied her over coat string ..listning to this gets reliefd ..n was again going to tie the string)
naitik:catch's her hand ...n say rehna dijiya na
akshara:cmplitly out ..
naitik goes near to akshara n removes her overcoat(nov 9th)
n akshara turns off the other side ..
naitik hugg's akshi frm back ..n move her hai r aside n place a kiss on her neck with full to passion
n wll start talking abt (nov 9th ki ..how he got surprised seeing on this n all n all ..)
akshara :naitik ..
naitik :hah akshara
akshara:aapko nahi laagta hum time waste kaar rahe hai.?aagar duggu utgaya toh ..?😲☺️
naitik:hearing to this ..shocked.confused,blocked is it akshara..😲 😲😲😲
akshara:comes out of naitik n by saying this she run's frm thr n sit's on bed in cmplitly romantic posture (..by keepng her righthand away ..a very wll knw romantic posture hope u all go it )
naitik:cums n sit's back of akshara and move his hand over akshi's hand frm back n .keep his finger's in middle of her's(hope im able to explain it)
just thn duggu gets up ..naitik see's tht n say him my sign's plzz sleep of .(litreally begging )..(duggu also as if he understood ,,wll sleep of again.)
thn place a kiss on akshi's neck .n thn turn her towards him ..and makes her to lay on bed ..thn naitik wll be side of her(valentine's day pose almst ..but diff this time akshi wll be sleeping straight)
naitik takes rose petals n shower thm on akshi ..thn slowly slowly he wll be removing all rose petals ..frm her face ..by kissing her
n last one he. wll ..(i kwn u all understood very wll nw ..)
sunrise's akshi wll get up ..n find naitik starring at him ..
akshara:naitik ..aap itni jaldi utgaye .??
naitik:nahi toh😃😊
akshi:phir..?/
naitik:phir..??
akshara;matlab aap puri raat nahi soye..??
naitik:kuch aisa hi.?
akshara:per kyu
naitik:koi itna ..khubsraat laagraha tha ki ..un per say naazre haati hi nahi
akhara:blushes..n keep a big smile
just thn thr wll be knock knock a door ..
..akshara try to get up but naitik wnt allow her ..sum how akshi manages to cum out of naitik ..naitik also get up ..but he makes face ,,akshara takes her clothes n all out n ..wll be leaving..but see's tht naitik is a bit upsent cums to him ..place a kiss on his cheeks n go near to naitik's ear n say i love u ..n run of from thr
after sumtime ..naksh in room naitik wll cum to akshara n say ..akshara plzz say ur last nite line na ..i wll record in phone
akshara:konsi..??
naitik:acha aapko yaad nahi hai..??
akshara:nahi naitik konsi..?
naitik:"aapko nahi laagta hum time wasteee.."
akshara:bas naitik aage nahi ..duggu hai idhar
naitik:toh..??
akshara:aapne hi toh kahana kaal rato ki ..bache sarri baate samajna laagjata hai
naitik:per akshara ..pata nahi kaab phir meri kismat itni aachi hogi..??
akshara:wll poke naitik's nose n say .."you never knw "(n gives a naughty smile n run for frm thr )
end .,..hope i was clear wht my explanation .😕.😕
hope u all like it ..n do share ur views
guys plzz kharab hai toh jutte maat maarna 😕



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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
me first me first

yar awesome os...loved it a lot


show main tho SMP milne ki naam hi nahi le rahi hai kamse kam yaha tho mili...kash monday ko CV's ye dikathe...
.tum bohuth ache se likhi hai...muje bohauth pasand aaya...do write more...waitng 4 nxt






Edited by ammu4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kal rat bht mushkil se apki os parhi, kisi b time cell off ho skta tha 😭but TG os complete hone k bad off hua. 😉
loved ur os. amazing, if cv's show this then i will hug u,😃😉 keep writing such romantic os, because now i can read os instead of books😊

Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u guys ..reserved it advance as if u all r gona ..like it for sure ..😕😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow prachi mast hai :))) kash scene continue hota and yeh hota lekin hai hoga tabhi cv's ne monday ke liye raka cv's ko humara popat karne mein maza ata hai :)
PS: night gown scene 9th ko tha 7 ko nahi :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree4ru

wow prachi mast hai :))) kash scene continue hota and yeh hota lekin hai hoga tabhi cv's ne monday ke liye raka cv's ko humara popat karne mein maza ata hai :)
PS: night gown scene 9th ko tha 7 ko nahi :P


wll edit it now nly ..
thank u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_chopra9


wll edit it now nly ..
thank u 😊


sad kyun baba it was nice wish show bhi akshi yahi dialog bolti 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree4ru


sad kyun baba it was nice wish show bhi akshi yahi dialog bolti 😆

tht is next to not possible ..
bcozz impossible ek baar ka liya possible hai
per not possible is nt possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

me first me first

yar awesome os...loved it a lot


show main tho SMP milne ki naam hi nahi le rahi hai kamse kam yaha tho mili...kash monday ko CV's ye dikathe...
.tum bohuth ache se likhi hai...muje bohauth pasand aaya...do write more...waitng 4 nxt




thankss alt 😊
kaash kaash cv's yeh dekhaye
toh maaaze hi maaze hai
atlst 20%
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_chopra9

thankss alt 😊
kaash kaash cv's yeh dekhaye
toh maaaze hi maaze hai
atlst 20%

no chances at all...cv's kabi nahi sudheregi😡

ps:plz pm me when u post nxt os

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