inshi ff:love@challenge

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PROLOGUE

In the busy street of chadnichwok he struggled through the crowd of people and stood infront of the only place he wanted to be.he stood infront of the gate and re-lived all those moments he spent in dat very place 3 years ago.he closed his eyes n remembered his lady love.he saw the vivid picture of dat beautiful yet stern face.a smile crept on his lips recalling all the moments with her.it had been three years but still there was not a single change in his feelings 4 her.
Buzzing noise from a group of people brought him back frm the trance.he opened his eyes 2 c a group of people there discussing about something.
"excuse me..y is this house empty.y r u here?where are all those who live in dis house?"
Man:"r u talking abt the sharma family?"
"yes"
Man:"they shifted frm dis place 2 yrs ago after the death of the family member..umm..2nd son in the family."
"what?vidhit is dead?do u av any idea where they're rt now?"
"well..."
B4 the man cld answer he was disturbed by another man.
Man 2:"the boss called.the project of demolishing the building has been postponed 4 a week."
"wat r u talking about?do u mean 2 say dat dis building is goin 2 b demolished?"
Man:"yes.dis building is being demolished under the instruction of Deewan construction."
Rishi closed his fist in anger.the name initiated the rage stored deep inside his heart 4 his elder brother.
"SAMEER..."

Rishi was stopped by two guards infront gate yet he managed 2 enter the office.he hadnt anticipated 2 b treated as 1 of the deewan as he ad been disowned frm the property by his own mother.
"excuse me...i wld lyk 2 meet mr. Sameer deewan."
"sorry sir.mr. Deewan is nt avilable bt if u wish 2 meet mrs. Deewan,c is in the cabin."
"mrs deewan?"
Rishi was confused.his mother was never interested in office works.
"yes sir.mrs. Mallika Deewan,mr. Deewan's wife."
"ya sure"

Rishi was surprised 2 know dat sameer got married despite his strong attraction 2wards indira sharma,hitler of chadnichowk.the receptionist signalled him to enter the cabin.rishi stood infront of the door.
"mrs. Mallika deewan.lets c who u r?"
The door was open.he could c a woman standing infront of the window with her back turned 2wards him.she was wearing a knee length backless black dress.her hair was gathered at one shoulder leaving her back exposed.c had a cigarette in 1 hand.from her high heels 2 her dress,every inch symbolised dat c had great taste in fashion.rishi thought dat his bro found his perfect match at last.hearing his knock c signalled him 2 come in widout turning her back.rishi entered the cabin and sad down on the couch.he was anxious 2 c the face of his sister in law.
"excuse me mrs. Deewan."
She turned back and luked straight into his eyes.wat he saw knocked him off his feet.he cldnt bilive whom he saw infront of him.his lips dried out as he was flabbergasted.
"m..ma-kaan-malkin...indira shar-ma?"
"sorry its mallika deewan.nice 2 c u again MR. RICKY DEEWAN.


Its my first ff on inshi or say first post on HD forum.hope u all like it.tel me if I sld continue or nt.
With love
Srija.

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saijahnavi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz dont continue dis type of story inshi is forever and no one cn seperate them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey congo 4 ur ff.It was awesome start-really unexpected.Very interesting.sai.janu350 dont worry dear.She said its inshi ff.So somehow she'll reunite dem. now its looking very interesting.
Plz do cont it n pm me
all d best
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sai.janu350

plz dont continue dis type of story inshi is forever and no one cn seperate them.

i too biliv dat inshi r 4ever n in my ff they r goin 2 b together.theres a mystery.sorry 4 the separation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

Hey congo 4 ur ff.It was awesome start-really unexpected.Very interesting.sai.janu350 dont worry dear.She said its inshi ff.So somehow she'll reunite dem. now its looking very interesting.
Plz do cont it n pm me
all d best

thanks faria.i wanted 2 start fe wid separation n progress to reunion.glad u liked it.wil update 2maro
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari117

Can't c inshi as such :'(

dnt worry.wil reunite dem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachidew

pls continue soon
i'm waiting

wil update 2maro.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one dear ...cont soon ..
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amzing concept dear...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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srija continue this one asap and the other ones too!

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