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Silence followed after Rey left. Few seconds later, Swayam kept one hand on Sharon's shoulder, silently motioning to her that he's leaving. She nodded and looked at Kriya. Kriya looked back and said, "It's not your fault." She then left the room.

Kriya felt like she just had to say it. If she knew Sharon the way she thought she did, then she also knew that Sharon would blame herself for everything that happened, which isn't right.

***

Sharon walked to a distance from the lake in the back of the house. She knew she'd find Kriya there and sure enough, she was there. She saw her figure in the distance as she walked up to her and sat down next to her.

"Kriya, you sure you're fine?" she asked with concern.

Kriya turned to look at her and put on a convincing face. "Never better, I'm fine Sharon. Don't worry about me. The past is past. It's always been there and nothing that happens now can change it. You have nothing to feel guilty about."

"But I do!" Sharon said, exploding his limits. She then sighed to calm down and after few seconds, continued, "It's not about me or Swayam or us anymore. It's about you. It's about what you went through."

"Like I said, I'm fine and no change. See." She put on a bright smile, in spite of the suffering she had.

"You will be the same as before?" Sharon asked, not able to grasp the thought. How can anyone respond so cool-ly after anything like this!? Was the question she asked herself, looking at Kriya for a hint of pain. None. She only found a smiling Kriya gazing back at her.

Kriya stayed silent for a second. Then with a deep emotion arising on her face, she picked up a stone close by. Playing with it, she asked, "See how calm the lake is?"

Sharon was confused but nodded a yes to the question. Kriya continued, "I was like that once. Calm…minding my own business, stretching out of my limit to reach my dreams. I wanted to do something. I wanted to show my passion to the world." She threw the stone in the lake. "And what happens when I throw this is?" the stone bounced a couple times before settling at the bottom. As an effect, the water rippled in circles.

Sharon listened quietly till then and asked the second Kriya paused, "If you wait long enough, the water will calm down."

Kriya smiled and replied, "The water will calm. But the stone is still in there. It doesn't belong there. Still. It's there. It wasn't needed. But it did come. From the surface, things calm down. The stone is still there though. Neither me nor you or anybody can do anything to change that now. The lake's course has forever been changed. It's the same with me. I will never be the same again. The pain will never go away, just like the stone. It will move away, go to the bottom, but I can't stop it if it ever does come up again." She got up saying, "Now I'll see you at night."

She patted Sharon's shoulder before turning to leave.

Sharon sat there thinking of the mystery Kriya just revealed to her. The whole past was in front of her. Her feelings, her pain, her suffering, everything. Her silence had spoken it all to her. Kriya revealed it all to her and only thing she could do was listen to it all. She wished she would have done something.

If not for her, that stone would have never gone inside of Kriya. The stone… the whole problem… which in this case was Shivam. If only she had told Swayam about her feeling, Kriya wouldn't have felt the need to make her realize. None of this would have happened then. As much as Kriya told her that it wasn't her fault, her heart wouldn't allow her to accept that. She did feel guilty.

She considered herself the worst friend. The worst sister one could have been. The worst one could ever have. She laid her head back in frustration. Anger towards herself. It all began with her. She realized another thing. The reason why Kriya didn't tell her. She then started scolding herself, "See! This is exactly why she didn't tell you! She knew you would feel guilty if you found out."

"Oh Kriya! You've suffered a lot. All because of me. Stupid me! Like you said, I can't do anything to change the past, but I can and will change your future." She continued with a glitter of happiness in her eyes. A desire to do something for someone else took possession of her.

"I will give you back all that you have lost. All the four years… that will be hard to give back. But I can give back what is in my power. The power is in my hands and I will use the stone to throw it again. But in a positive way now. This stone will now make your life instead of ruining it."

She picked up a small pebble and grinned to herself. Kriya, my darling sister, you told me a story. Now let me do the honors. Haven't you heard of the crow and the pebble? The thirsty crow was so intelligent that he threw as many pebbles as he could to bring the water to the top. I will do the same. Throw so many pebbles your way that you and Rey will have to meet again and again. Despite your wish, you will have to.

"I will fix everything. This is a promise from one sister to another." She finished with a determined look on.

***

Kriya gathered up all her courage and opened the door that opened to the rehearsal hall. She was supposed to be there half an hour ago. She just hoped she won't be getting in any sort of trouble for that.

Everyone, including Rey, turned to look towards the door as she entered. Seeing her, rest got back to what they were doing. All except Rey and Vaibhavi. Rey held Kriya's gaze till she walked up to them.

As much as Vaibhavi hated the idea, she knew she'd have to be strict if the others were to follow the rules. "You're late."

"I know. I had some personal problem. Won't happen again. I'm sorry." Kriya apologized with an open heart.

Vaibhavi nodded and said, "That's fine. Now go get dressed fast and meet us back here."

She nodded and turned to leave. When Vaibhavi looked away, Kriya mouthed, "I'm fine." to Rey, who then took a sigh of relief. He felt better seeing that from her.

***

Neha asked, "Sharon! What are you looking for? If you tell me, I can at least help instead of just standing here you know!"

They were in Kriya's room for the last 10 minutes. The whole time, Sharon was going through whatever she could find in sight. Sharon stopped to turn to her. "I'm looking for…" she trailed off making a realization. "Of course! Her laptop! So silly of me." Sharon now knew what she was looking for.

So did Neha. But she had no idea why Sharon was looking for Kriya's laptop. "What are you doing?" she asked feeling irritated at being ignored.

"Oh Neha. Quiet for now. I'll tell you later." She replied not understanding her anger. Opening the laptop, she did some searching and ten minutes later, shut it close with a satisfying smile on her face.

Neha was sitting cross legged on the table, fuming and pouting, when Sharon looked up. She moved her head back seeing her in that state. And then, she realized why Neha was like that.

She went to her and spoke in a teasing voice, "Remember how we always suspected Rey and Kriya to be a couple?"

Neha beamed and nodded as she continued, "Well, we were right. They do love each other. But something went wrong." Sharon got quiet.

Neha put a hand on hers, asking her to continue. "That's why Kriya had left without telling anyone. I'm going to bring the love back in her life and you're going to help me right?"

Neha immediately jumped down the table. "You have to ask? I sure will help!" she said as a matter of fact. "She's my best friend. But that doesn't explain what you were doing with her laptop…"

"I sued that to send an email to Sonia asking her to call me and told her who I am. Over the last four years, Kriya has changed a lot whether we like it or not and Sonia will be the only one to help us right now."

Neha realized Sharon was correct.

Both grinned from ear to ear satisfied with the thought brewing up in their heads.

***


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Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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Kriya entered the rehearsal room again after getting dressed. Vaibhavi got up and announced, "Alright guys. We can begin our rehearsals now. I want you all to see a performance by one of your participants. Her dance is just flawless and I request her to dance with our very own Rey. Kriya, if you would please?"

Kriya looked up from where she sat. That came as unexpected blow. She looked at Rey who was looking at her as well.

The others cheered her on and she got up nervously. She wasn't nervous about dancing. She was nervous about dancing with Rey once again. It had been years since they set foot on the stage again. She walked till the middle of the floor and looked at Rey again. He got up well after she gave a slight nod.

***

Credit: Sanjna


From here on, I'll be jumping from present to past and back to present to show Rey's P.O.V. Try to keep up with the pace throughout the song'

Aa...

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka, ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

They started the dance so perfectly that everyone watched in amazement. It wasn't new for either Rey or Kriya as they were used to having this sort of reactions.

Rey looked at Kriya and wondered how he could have ever doubted her. She was dancing with her eyes closed. Yet, he could sense the pain. He had been heart broken when he saw Shivam and Kriya closed. He shut off his mind and reacted on the spot, not thinking about the effect of his actions.

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Aa...

That night he had seen them, he had been so hurt that he felt like breaking everything he could find. He yelled his misery out in the open air, letting it echo back to him. He asked himself, "Why?"

The pain inside of him at that moment of time was unbearable. Inexpressible. Unspeakable. He had to let the silence talk for him.

Tumse dil jo lagaya, toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun, meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqeeqat mein usse todna tha
Aa...

They danced, looking into each other's days, matching their step with one other as if already knowing what to do. Neither of them was in their senses as past took possession of them.

The next day, after Kriya came to talk to him, he had gone to the locker room to vent out his pain. He knew things will never be the same. He wondered why she even came in his life if all she was going to do was backstab him. All the dreams he dreamt were all for nothing. Nothing at all. It was all just a game for you

Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Back to present, they danced standing behind/front of the other. She moved her hand along his check while in front of him. There, right then, they were meant to be. Only if there was no such thing as past. It always comes back to haunt them. Both of them know that love is still there, but the reason to stay apart was vivid.

Rey remembered the graduation day when he saw Kriya leave. The look on Swayam's face was telling him that it was more than just a temporary leave. He wanted to find out. But then he asked himself why he should care when all she gave him was pain. Now, he knew who wrong he had been.

Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se rangjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai, har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Aa...

Vaibhavi watched them and wondered what could have gone wrong. Both of them just loved each other. Others might not see it, but through their dance, the way they looked deeply into each other's eyes, she knew they still loved the other. She knew something big must have happened. She just couldn't figure out what. that was one of the reason she had smartly asked Kriya and Rey to dance together, but she was getting to no conclusion.

Saara din bit jaaye, saari raat jagaaye
Bas khayal tumhara, lamha lamha tadpaaye
Yeh tadap keh rahi hai mit jaaye faasle
Yeh tere mere darmeyaan hai jo saare

Rey remembered how the days after he read the letter passed by. It was a letter that Kriya had written for him. The letter in which she explained it all. she knew she shouldn't be writing it as there was no trust left. But if after going away, he realizes his mistake, then it's better than leaving him in the dark about the event. As time to time, she had proved to him that she loved him and no one else. Similarly, once again, she proved to him that she loves only him, indirectly, through the letter.

Ik dooje se hue judaa jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

He had regretted so much about his actions after he found out about this. There was no point in looking for her as she had cut off her connection with everyone. No one knew where she left. From their group, only Swayam and Rey knew why she left. Where did she go? No one had the slightest clue. Not even Swayam.

Rey decided he'll have to repent by accepting his faith. The faith that he himself choose by pushing Kriya away from him. It's better you stay away from me. All I seem to be doing is hurt you.

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

As they ended in a still, close to each other. Rey whispered in her ear. "I'm sorry." She took a deep breath, the words ringing in her ears. She stepped back after the rest of them stood up in claps and cheers.

Rey continued with the whisper, "Meet me outside the changing room after everyone's gone."

She looked at him for a brief second. He looked at other and murmuring, "Excuse me." he left the hall. She smiled to others as they came to her to tell her how brilliantly she danced. No surprises there, but she did feel good knowing that her passion still exists.

***

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Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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So you all already read the previous note correct? If not, then it's on or around page 100. Well, this note is different.

First off, hope you all enjoyed the update. 😳 It was long and the last one for the month. You, you guys read right. This is the LAST one. 😈 I'm taking this FF on a seasonal break. 😎 Will be back in April with the next season 😉 You all know what seasonal break is right?

I just need some time to rethink about this FF. And if I get 70 or more likes on this part on either of the 2 posts, then I'll surely be continuing this. As I say, I hate leaving things incomplete. So if I don't get the likes and comments, then I'll just share it with myself. 😳

The response is one reason I'm going on a break. There are two more. Second, I'm trying t finish off 3 of my FF's. I'll do them over the next week as my spring breaks are going on 😃. And last one is that I need to take care of myself more. I've been worse and during this time of the year, I always have to be careful as Ive had a record of falling seriously ill during this month.

Now you all know all three reason for going on a break. And yes, I'll post a Prologue or a preview for next season before the beginning on April. And just because I've said that next season comes in April doesn't mean that as soon as it's April 1st, I have to post an update. I'm just saying that I'll start it some time in April.

Leave me your comments and likes 😳 Oh, and feel free to spam the thread every now and then so I know you guys have't forgotten the FF 😛

Love you all. Khushi.
Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24



arre y u shouting at me.

mujhe kya pata tha. u shud have told before.

main tab se chakkar laga rhi hun. iski kadra hi nhi hain.

mujhe sapna thodi na aa rha hai ki u r reserving for varios parts.


SORRY!!!!!😭 I did it again.😳


Sorry re. I was trying to post from a long time and finally using the common laptop since mines isn't working. just posted the comment in frustration of that.

Lol you did. I had to edit again. Now you can post ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


Sorry re. I was trying to post from a long time and finally using the common laptop since mines isn't working. just posted the comment in frustration of that.

Lol you did. I had to edit again. Now you can post ...



but ab kya i cannot even comment first.
now will be reading fully and then commenting and usmein bhi probs as mom is shouting at me.

u broke my heart
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was beautiful just beautiful.

the way u described everything was perfect.

let me get this: everything is clear from kriya's side but the mark is still there.

sharon wants to bring back the love such that the mark is no more visible.

rey is still feeling guilty despite kriya telling him not to.

but PERFECT.

padhne ke baad kiya as u shattered my dream of commenting first.😆
so ab pata nhi yeh comment kahan aaega.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was gr8! Finally they danced together. It's always magical when they dance together. Thank you so much for such an awesome update. I also liked the analogy between Kria and the lake. Her character has really matured in this ff. And YEEAAH!!! Sharon and Neha are going to help Rey and Kria to get back tohether. Fun times ahead.🥳 Please Please Please don't discontinue. Will miss this ff sooo much if you do. Keep writing! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was awesome part khushi...loved it very much
the story which kria told to sharon about the stone and the water was really superb and very touching and then sharons plan to get kriyansh back is superb
and the kriyansh dance its superb and the way you linked present with past was really amazing
awesome👏
cant wait to read next part, continue soon

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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

but ab kya i cannot even comment first.
now will be reading fully and then commenting and usmein bhi probs as mom is shouting at me.

u broke my heart


Sorrry again for that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read it before u pmed n commented too...thnxx 4 d pm...😊
Update was really fabulous...😊
Was checkin out from d tym u kept d topic UPDATIN!!!😉

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