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Till now everytime i wrote sumwere realted to show ..but this time its a bit romantic one and funny(at the same time bit big to) hope u all wll like it
Its like naksh go for a naitik's friend's function to SHIMLA
duggu is okay big nw around 2years ..and as we all knw shimla is a cool place and g3 nature to ..so she wll be like i wll keep duggu wht me how to it is matter of 2days nly na ..
so fine naksh in shimla at frnds party (actually it was like bachlor , spinster party )
so naitik along wht frnds wll be gossiping like how thing wll change after marriage n all n all ..
seeing akshara around thm for teasing akshara he wll be saying ..
after shaadi na u wnt have any freedom ..u got to give ur wife all details wht u doing where u going everything (he wlll be saying out loud wntdly so tht akshara hear's tht)
listning this all akshara wll get angry ..and a waiter wll be passing near by wht a tray ..she wll pick up a glass (thinking its water,she wll be seeing towards naitik toh she wnt be able to see wht's thr in glass) actually it wll be whine ..akshara wll drink tht (now akshara is cmplitly drunk n she is behaving like a kid complitly)
naitik see's akshara position n will be like akshara "aapne sharab pee hai"
akshara(cmplitly drunk):naitik aap pagaal hogaye hai kya ..?? may ne toh pani piya hai ..!!
naitik calls the waiter and checks out thn he come's to knw she drank wine
akshara wnt be able to walk properly also ..naitilk was trying to catch her but she dnt allow him bcozz she was angry on him
naitik :akshara u wait over here i wll bid byee to my frnd n cum ..
akshara not in her senses ..naitik come's back but he wnt find akshara
he wll look around ..for akshara ..he finds her out playing in heavy rain ..naitik goes near her catch her and make her sit in car
they reach hotel it wll be late nite ..so thy wll be waiting for receptanist at reseption
akshara wll be standing side of naitik cmplitly wet(here she goes)
she wll suddenly start playing wht naitik's hair ..
naitik:he removes her hand ..but she wnt listen
akshara:starts ..naitik "aapke ka baal kitna soft hai "(naitik wll be feeling akward as whl staff wll be looking towards him).."per aapke baal itna geela kyu hai ".(naitik wll be beating his head).she touches her hair "arrey mare baal bhi geela hai " .."naitik hamera baal geela kyu hai ..hum na abhi snaan kiya kaya ..??" "hum kahi jaarahe hai..??"
some how naitik stops akshara and takes to room ..
naitik: akshara aap change kaarli jiya ..aap puri bheeg gayi ..n he catch's akshara n leave her in bathroom n cum's out n rest's on bed
akshara(in bath room ):seeing herself in morrior "may bhi pagaal huh bina kaapde liya he change kaarne aagayi "..abb kya n she wll be seeing around whthalf opend eyes (she wll find a bathrobe) she wll wear of tht nly ..thn starts shouting naitik .!! naitik..!! from bath room
naitik wll run in bath room
akshara:naitik may kaise laag rahe hu..?? laag rahe huna ..cutiee cutiee(naitik wll just staring at akshara ..she wll be in baby pink color bathrobe wht wet hair imaginnn..)
akshara:kahiya na naitik may kaise laag rahe hu ..naitik kahiya na (naitik blank seeing akshara .in .so stunning n sizzling avatar)
naitik:he come's out of his taughts
akshara ;even now repeatedly asking same thing
naitik:hah akshara aap cute laag rahe ho
akshara :kitni cute?? ..kis ki tarha.??
naitik:(to himself) yah kya naya natak hai abb
akshara:naitik..(shouts)
naitik:akshara bilkul duggu kitarha cutiee cutiee laagrahe ho
akshara:listning to this starts crying loudly
naitik:aab kya hua ..?/
akshara :mujhe duggu ka paas janahe ..i need duggu nw
naitik:aab woh toh ghar per hai
akshara:toh hum kaha hai phir,..?/
suddenly door bells rings ..
akshara:crying
naitik:shshshsh chup hojiya akshara koi aaya hai
akshara stops crying
naitik goes n open door waiter wll bring water .naitik takes water n close door n cums to bathroom
akshara wnt be thr
naitik:akshara ..!! akshara..!!n goes to balcony
akshara in balcony standing by keeping her hand backside(like she is hiding sumting)
naitik:akshara y did u cum here ..?
akshara:aap mujhe duggu ka pass lejarahe hai ya nahi..?/
naitik:no
akshra:toh phir (she wll be having cockroach in her hand)
she keeps tht hand infrnt of naitik ..n wll be moving towards naitik by showing him cockroach(we all knw how much naitik is scared of cockroache's) naitilk wll be taking back steps
naitik:akshara nahi ..cockroach nahi .
akshara :hah ya nahi
both wll be running all round ..akshara trying to catch naitik ..naitik trying to save himself
suddenly akshara hits a chair n falls down
naitik:akshara ..(shouts)
cum near her ..n wll be trying to catch her leg but akshara wnt allow ..
naitik :shout let me see..
(actually her leg got tiwisted the othr side)
naitik wll be catch her leg n wll be trying turn it ..akshara catch hold of naitik's shirt titly .
both ..starring at each othr ..naitik suddely turns her leg ..akshara shouts ..n she wll be like wow ..im fine nw im fine nw bolke she wll get up
and kiss naitik on cheeks n say "thank u naitik aap hamesha meri madat kaarte hai "
n huggs him titly .
.naitik( mesmerised ): slowly moves akshara hair to one side n kiss on her back(during nandini's marriage how he did like tht)
akshara brings herself out of naitik n wll be staring at each othr ..naitik keeps akshara's hair back of her ear..n both wll be so close to each othr ki ..thy wll be able to hear each othrs heartbeat ..
both wll be going to kiss each othr ..suddenly something moves on naitik's leg (ya ya tht cockroach)
naitik shouts out loudly n both wll be running n suddenlt thy wll slip n bed ..naitik wll fall on akshara (bed ..12th oct scen)
both wll be starting each othr ..n n n (remaning u all imagin its getting to private nw)
morning..!!!
akshara wake's up catching her head n suddenly see's her self in window n shout out loudly ..
naitik gets up in shcok ..
akshara:wht im doing in this bathrobe ?? frm when im on this.??
naitik(with a naughty smile):akshara aapko kuch yaad nahi hai.??
akshara:nahi ..mujhe bas itna yaad hai ..ki may na waiter say paani ka glass liya tha ..
uske baad kaab hum hotel aaye aur kaab may na change kiya mujhe kuch nahi pata
naitik;acha madam ko kuch yaad nahi hai .?
akshara :nahi ..aur yeh kamra itna bhikra bhikra kyu hai ..aur yeh(she finds lipstick mark on naitik's neck)..omg...!! n starts blushing like anyting
naitik:narrates her whl story wht wht happn ..rite frm thr to last scen
akshara :may na sharab pee thi..?
naitik:hah rukhiya rukhiya hame wapis ghar toh chalne dejiya
akshara:blushes n huggs naitik titly 😊😊
....finshh
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