KriYaansh OS : The Circle of Life :) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Aarti...thank you sooo much! I was half afraid people wouldn't understand what I meant to convey through it, which unfortunately does seem to have been the case for some, but I'm really happy you liked it! 🤗
@kriyanshfan...thank youu...!! 😃
@sweetapple2995...thank you so much for saying that. I'm always terrified of boring people to death with the descriptive style I keep slipping into. 😳
@sana.Magic...thank you so much for reading! 😊
@Tania92...you know, I did realise that I'd end up confusing a lot of people with this one. And I realised only after I'd already posted it. Sorry! If my estimation is correct, then this explanation should clear it up: the dream is meant to be a sort of symbolic narrative of their story together. Which is also why they both dream it...it gives them a different perspective on their time together so far, which they've either been taking for granted, or have been too busy tit-for-tat-ing to really look within and figure out what they really feel for each other. If you read it that way, you'll see a whole new meaning to the darkness thinning out when they decide to walk together instead of being confused alone, their hesitation to walk towards what they know is the source of light, and then the gradual brightening with each step they take until finally, there is sunrise. And this is what they themselves come to understand. To put it in the most straightforward way, it's a dream that's supposed to convey to them both that they're meant to be, and that all their conflict is only their way of denying their own feelings which, once acknowledged, can only give them happiness...hope that helps!
@Saumya...thank you sooo much! I'm so happy you liked it! And that bit you quoted, lol, I couldn't not put something like that in. It's one of those things that goes so well with how Rey and Kriya are, always fighting for no particular reason...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nandini
yup that i can see lolzzz
even i was a bit confused when i started reading at eventually it was all cool
u c thats why i say ur work resemble sookie's even her work is really tough to crack believe i haven't all of her fics coz it used to sound too high class thingy to me but ya i have read sum , the one swhich i was able to understand n they are phenomenal
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen

hey nandini

yup that i can see lolzzz
even i was a bit confused when i started reading at eventually it was all cool
u c thats why i say ur work resemble sookie's even her work is really tough to crack believe i haven't all of her fics coz it used to sound too high class thingy to me but ya i have read sum , the one swhich i was able to understand n they are phenomenal

Lol...I see what you mean though. Sookie does some really profound work sometimes, that's true. Although I think my OS being confusing is more my fault as a writer than that of the subject matter I chose. Oh well. I learn as I go, as they say. Hope the next one turns out clearer. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinidev

Lol...I see what you mean though. Sookie does some really profound work sometimes, that's true. Although I think my OS being confusing is more my fault as a writer than that of the subject matter I chose. Oh well. I learn as I go, as they say. Hope the next one turns out clearer. 😊

u know but thats why i liked ur OS
it was different
believe me i don't like tooo lovey dovey ffs
m generally looking for sumthing unique
like ur work
hannah's blues(love it . i never knew of PND but after reading it . i did a lot of researching on it😆)
annu di's it all depends on love
bheegi di's work
cat di , sazy , swanza , sushmita di
oh god i have to stop here i have along list😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES!
Might take time to Edit! :(

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Wowo..nandini that's an awesome OS..and thank's for the explanation..we do get the idea of u'rs behind writing it..ofcourse i see that both u r OS deal with Dreams turning to reality..where in Swaron OS..sharon n swayum tried to face their dream n somewhere change it as sharon did..
But here kriyaansh tries to go away ..escape from eachother even though they know they can't live without eachother n only when they are together makes them complete n individually they are just alone,confused😕!I hope they understand itsoon n the see the sunrise(light) soon!😃
Where Swaron is Mystery couple..Kriyaansh is Confused couple 😆(Though i also call them Magical too
😍).
Good wishes n waiting for many shots!🤗
Sri:-)

Edited by Xx.Sri.xX - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW one word Nandini U R A BEAUTIFUL WRITER👏👏😳
dis is sooo FREAKING AMAZING😃...its really MINDBLOWING😳
i've never read anything sooo amazing as dis one😳
the way u hav xplained the whole dream...which made Kria feel so real nd den when she meets Rey and when they think they r lost nd both of them realising dat dey had d same dream WOW it was all soo beautifully xplained😍
but wen u added d xplanation of d dream at the end OMG i was lyk HUH...u hav xplained it sooo nicely everything den perfectly sat in my head and i jus fell more in LUV wid dis OS😳
gosh i feel soo SPEECHLESS aftr reading dis it was sooo AWSUM😃
plz keep writing more nd do pm me wen u write sumthing wud LUV 2 read ur work😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really so sweet👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was amazing. the concept of the dream was interesting. pm me wen u update next time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome os 😃
Just loved the way u fantastically shown n described each moment n thought perfectly 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one I have not read it fully but I will complete reading it soon

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