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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 6:



Maan saw that brij shot that guy n he is lying dead on the ground. All the people in the flight are shouted due to fear.

But brij pointed the gun to the air hostress pari n shouted all of u quite. If anyone tries to move from here then u will also be dead.

Geet: brij leave her (to passengers) guys plz calm down, we should not take any risk now. Plz all of u be seated in your places. (to brij) leave her NOW.

Seeing the passengers calm brij left her n he kept a small TV watching the news about the HI-JACK.

Here maan informed the officials that brij killed a person n he is lying there. Immediately they send a ambulance there but its too late that guy is dead.

Here shashank n maan are furious to see that n called brij.

Shashank: what the hell is this brij? R u crazy? U gave us time then why u r doing all this? Why u r behaving like this n killing people?

Brij: I am watching news channel, there is no news about your decision.

Shashank (shouting): media will tell many things, will u believe in all these? We r not allowing media people inside, so they dont know anything about the news. So dont believe them.

Brij: even u r also not saying anything and we cant discuss here sitting idle. So this is the sample for u to take decisions immediately.

Shashank: u r mad..

brij: if we dont tell us immediately then the next will your hero raj.

Saying so brij cut the call. Just then maan's mobile rang he excused himself and went out.

CM: now there is no option officer we have to release that dev. We cant take any risk now.

All the other officers just nodded.


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Outside all the reporters are creating hangama about that guys death.

Reporter: flash news flash news one of the passenger is killed by those criminals. See this is the condition of the officials. The flight is hi-jacked by them 24 hours back but still there is no action from officials. They are just passing the time, they dont care about the passengers. Even they are not reacting for the sake of hero RAJ n cop Mrs. geet khurana. This is really unexpected. We dont know what news we have hear after sometime.

The reporter is going on n on about the incident.

Reporter: from this incident we came to know that officials wont do anything for passengers. What the 500 passengers have to loose their lived for the officials irresponsibility. We cannot expect from them anything. Even the commando maan singh khurana is not able to do anything. Is he afraid of his wife's live n backing off. This is really a disappointment for all of us.

Public1: my son is going for his job n all this happened. Nothing should happen to him. Plz release that dev n save my son. Nothing is important for me other than my son.

Public2: yes what he is saying is right. They should release that dev. What is the use of arresting him n prisoned him somewhere. Its just a waste of money for the govt, anyways he wont open his mouth n tell his illegal activities.

Reporter: even the public also demanding to release dev. So lets wait n see what will officials do. For instant news keep watching ******** news.

That reporter drank some water. Just then his boss came there.

R: sir what r u doing here?

B:what is this we r telecasting the news which all other news channels are doing? Do something new man. Click the photo of that flight n show to the public. Our TRP will increase. We have use this oppurtunity man.

R: sir how can we go inside? They are not allowing any one inside the airport.

B: am I paying u for giving such type of excuses. No na do something n get the news.

R: ok sir.

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Here maan went out n picked the phone.

Hello told maan angrily.

Papa.. came a sweet voice of his son.

Maan composed n told abhi aap??

papa, mama didnt call still. I want to talk to her told abhi almost in the verge of crying.

Abhi beta mama called me, she reached there beta n mama is busy talking with other uncles. Once she is free she will call u. ok beta??

but papa I want to talk to mama now.

Abhi u r a good boy na. See do homework immediately, n mama will be very happy na if u do ur homework. Then we can talk with mama later. Ok abhi??

yes papa, mama will be very happy if I do my homework. I will do immediately n we can talk to mama told abhi excitedly.

Ok beta, I am talking with adi uncle na. After coming home we will talk with mama. Bye abhi.

Bye papa. Come soon n I love u papa told abhi.

Love u too beta told maan n cut the call immediately.

Dadi, papa told if I do my homework then I can talk with mama. I am going now. Abhi went to his room n opened his books to do his homework leaving his daadi behind.

Maan's mom(st): mujhe pata hain maan how u r feeling now. Abhi is so lucky he dont know anything that his mother is in danger. Babaji geet ko kuch mat hone dena. Tears rolled down her cheek.

Here maan closed his eyes after talking with abhi.

Maan: geet dekha abhi wants talk to u. what should I do now? I just told some excuse now but what should I do when he calls again. These people are not allowing me to do anything. How helpless I am now. Geet ke babaji plz mujhe kuch na kuch raasta dikhadijiye.

Adi: maan dont worry. Officers are waiting for us.

Maan n adi went in.

shashank: maan.. wo.. wo..

maan: what happened sir?

Shashank: maan we had a talk with CM n others offcicials. They decided to release dev.

Maan: what is this sir. Then what is the use of arresting him n put him somewhere. If we handover dev to them what is the guarentee that they will release the passengers. Sometime back we saw that brij killed a person.

Shashank: maan there is no other option now. He can do anything.

Maan: we also can do sir. Just give him some excuse n extend the time sir. Today night we can do commando operation.

Shashank: maan, nothing is there in my hands. What the higher officials told we have to follow them.

Maan: what is this sir? Ok sir when u decided to release him I cant do anything. But I cant accept him too. U r proving that media is correct that we r useless. U r giving them chance to point out us. Do as u wish sir we r here to obey ur orders.


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In the flight:

passenger to one of the brij men: see we r doing what u told plzz just ask them to clean the washrooms. It really became dirty. Plz try to understand us, we r not able to use it.

He told that matter to brij n he agreed to it. He called the officials n asked them to send some cleaner.

Maan came to know about this matter. A lady took the cleaning materials n was about to leave the room just then maan entered n asked her to wait.

Maan: ji ek min.

lady: yes sir??

maan: u r one who is going to that flight right??

lady: ji sir.

Maan: listen carefully, normally how u go just go like that only. But u have to do one thing.

Lady: kya sir?

Maan: see u have observe how many r there in that flight? I mean who r having weapons n all. But they should not doubt u. ok??

lady: ji I will do that work. I will not let them doubt me.

Maan: thanku very much.


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Meanwhile shashank called the others in kashmir where they prisoned dev.

Officer: hello..

shashank: hello officer, this is shashank from delhi NSG.

Officer: hello sir, boliye.

Shashank: I think u know the news about the flight hi-jack, their demands are to release dev. And the govt have approved for that.

Officer: ok sir. We will bring him to delhi with our force. But sir here whether condition is not so good so we have to come by road.

Shashank: thanku officer, start as soon as possible.

Officer: sure sir. Bye good day.

Shashank: good day.

Here in kashmir the officer has informed the police n they arranged the van to bring dev to delhi. They went to prison n handcuffed his hand n covered his face with black mask. They made him stand n he is surrounded with 8 constables n the officer is walking in front.

They all got into the van n started their journey to delhi... but after 30 min of journey... there was a BHOOOMMM...



precap: wat wil happen nw?

hw dev wil reach airport?

keep guessing. 😉



hello hello hello so here is part 6. hope u like it...

plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT..

waiting eagerly for ur response..



love

-jyothi, mona 😉







Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
abhi is so cute...😳
ab kya hoga😕...plz update soon ...
thanks for update jyothi and mona...😃
tnanks for pm...
Edited by anisha_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear😃

hope that bas***d Dev died🤢

come on Maan killed that bas***d Brij 😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part..
Channel's conspiracies r well shown in this part..
They concentrate on trp ratings only..
Loved maan-abhi talk..the way he consoled abhi was a touching scene..
Even that cleaning aunty s more brave than the officials..
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
it was a touching part
loved the way maan consoled abhi
continue asap guys
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear sorry for late reply .Even my works r pending...Coming to this really good Maan n his son convo that is really emotional.Media is always responsible for every thing for good n bad to extreme even in reality Public frustration is genuine upto which extent some one can bear.Maan is he doing rite ..hav to wait.But both of u r really covering this type of incident in ur work in extra ordinary way .

😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n lovely update dear...

m feeling bad fr abhi...he is sooo cute knwing nothing want to talk to his mother...m crying fr him...its really amazing...

feeling bad fr maan also...helpless cant do anything...

i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a beautiful update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great part well written dear..thx a lot for pm and this part
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Posted: 13 years ago


so Maan is making his move...

but here there is explosion and I think Dev is killed and that will force government to take Maan's help for commando operation before Brij comes to know of Dev's news...

situation is really serious...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear...
maan and abhi's convo is really very emotional...
you have beautifully shown the true colour of the channel people ...because of the TRP they can do anything...




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