kriya+reyansh=KRIYAANSH!(ss)COMPLETED

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OK GUYS HERE GOES MY ANOTHER SS OF KRIYAANSH

MY FIRST OS WAS "KRIYAANSH -YOU ARE MINE ONLY MINE MY BAATCUTTER" IF U WNT CHECK OUT DE LINK-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655

kria n reeyansh are married ...and they are living a loveely married life...kria and reeyansh finally became "kriyaansh".Rey had to take up his father's bussiness.kriya n rey r living with reeyansh parents.As rey became a "bussiness man" he bacame busy with work ..frm bussiness man he bcame a "busy man"..he is frustrated with the work bcoz ther was something problem in the bussiness,becoz of the prob he became busy.he always felt sad that he culd nt spend some quality time with his wife his love of life his EVERYTHING kria.on the other side kria gets irritated bcoz since a month rey was not talking to her properly not spending quality time with her no ROMANCE😔.she felt that he is bored with her ..n also frm a month he was soo frustrated with the work that he becomes serious n let out all anger on kria sometimes n not speaking to her properly.his actions makes her very sad .
Finally problem in the bussiness is cleared now rey is free he need not tention or take stress about anything .he thinks of making this night special for his baatcutter .
He reaches home...
then his mother n father wer having their dinner..as soon as they see rey they say him to come n dine with them ..
mom:rey beta aao kana kake jaoo
rey:ha mom aaraha hun...
he sees to his left side his baatcutter walking towards him with a bowl in her hand.but she has look of somewat lik fear.rey doesnt understands why his baatcutter is having a frightened expression as soon as she saw him.he gets seated n says to kria "kria thumne kaya?".then his mother says "nahi beta woh toh tera intazar kar raha tha".rey smiles at her n says her "aao baito thum bhi kao".then kriya replies "its ok rey aap kalijiye".by the time rey's parents completes their dinner n leaves the place (note:no one was ther in that hall except kriyaansh😃)
rey see's kria n says "arey baito aur kaao na"..kria replies"rey aap kao mei baadh mai kalungi" rey says "badh mei aise kaise?tumhe mere sath baitkar kahana acha nahi lagta?" kriya says"waise kuch nahi hain mei toh bas..." rey says" jab tak tum nahi kaoogi mai bhi nahi kaoonga!" kriya gets annoyed n says "rey yeh aap bache ke tarah kyu kar rahe ho maine kahana muje nahi kaana hai".rey shouts at kriya lik somewat he is giving order "maine kahana chup chap baitkar KALO!"(kriya felt that he was angry on her n so shouting at her .she was afraid so she immediately sits in the chair next to rey n starts eating ,rey asks her to pass the curry while passing bymistakenly spoon which was in the curry fell on rey's shirt .kriya was full too afraid n she starts apologising .by seeing her feared expression rey says "its ok kria ek chota sa mark hi tho hai na leve it itna kyu dar rahe ho??" kriya replies by keeping her head downwards "woh woh kuch nahi...".while the time of eating rey feeds kria but that expreesion of fear was still on her face ,he doent understand y is she behaving so wierd ?y his baatcutter is feared?.they complete their
dinner n kria started keeping all the bowls inside the fridge n was arranging the table .Meantime rey see's his baatcutter ,comes n hugs her from back n rested his chin on her shoulder n says "baatcutter kitne dhino baadh hume aise mauka mil raha hai !i mean tum aur mei akele " kria jus smiles .rey starts going upstairs ,on his way he gets an idea and a mischevious smile was spread on his face he comes back to kria n comes so close to her n pins her to the wall .kriya says "rey ye aap..." he doesnt allow her to speak he keeps his hand on her mouth n his other hand was holding kriya tightly ,her hands wer resting on rey's shoulders.he comes forward n whisper in her ears "mei uupar jaraha hun jaldi aajao,by saying this he smiles n goes away from ther .
Then kria starts talking to herself "ajeeb baat hai kabhi pass athe hai kabhi chilla the hai?hey universe ji ye kya ho raha hai (kepps a sad face)...
Then after completing her work she goes up enters the bedroom n goes straight to the cupboard murmuring something to herself without closing the door .rey just then entered from the washroom(he was wearing night pant n was not wearing shirt 😛)see's his baatcutter seriously walking towards the cupboard leaving the door behind opened ,he smiles to himself n goes n locks the door turns back n see's kria doing some work ..
He goen near kria n hugs her from back n whisper in her ears "I LOVE U" .then kria suddenly turns by n without knowing her hands hits his cheek (not too hard jus slightly ) rey shouts "kriya aise I LOVE U bolthe hai kya??" .kria got afraid bcoz since a month he was shouting at her for silly reasons so she doesnt understands that he was the old romantic reyor the new one ,she still thinks that he is still a "typical srious wala " rey.kria immediately says sorry (with a feared exp ).rey says "its ok daroo mat!"..she jus nods her head .rey wanted to clear his doubt as why she is behaving strange he goes near her n pins her to the wall n moves few strips of hair which are fallin on her face with his hand n his other hand is resting on her waist.he pulled her very close against him n asked "baatcutter tum mujse darr the hoo?" then kriya replies " nn...nahin ...bilkul bhi nahi...aapko aisa kyu lag raha hai?" (she pretends as if she is not afraid .then rey replies "mujse jhoot bholna bandh karo.muja pata hai ki tume mujse jhoot bolna aata nahi hai.saach bolo kria tum mujse dar the ho?".kriya looks down n replies "ha...haan" .rey gets confused n asks" par kyun?"..she was cing down n says "agar aap gussa nahin hoga tho batadhunga".rey slowly lifts her chin n says "bhilkul bhi ..aur tumse gussa mai ho nahi saktha " kria gets annoyed by his words because n she recollects all the scenes wen he shouted at her for small things (note :all scenes means since a month nt before that ...before that they used to hav cute fights😊😊)
she gets annoyed n pushes him n shouts "aap mujse gussa nahi ho sakte??kyun aise lines kehte ho joo aap nahi follow karthe hoo??" rey was shocked at her because he did not understand wat was happening n he comes near her n tries to hug her but she pushes him ...he says"kya hua aab maine kya kiya??"..she gives him a look n says " aapne kya kiya...mai bataungi ki aapne actuall mei kya kiya ..ek hafthe se dekh raha hun aap mujse acchi tarah se bat nahi kar rahe ho..mai jo bhi kehtha hun aap muj par sirf chilla rahe hoo..mujse aapse baatkarne se ...baatkarne sa kya dhekne se hi dar lag raha hai" by saying dis a drop of tear fllowed down her eyes.As rey cant see kriya crying he immediately hugs her n says "am sorry baatcutter !am extremely sorry..muje tumpe chilane ki koyi iradha nahi hain ..actually hamare company meain kuch prob hai(he says her wat the prob was n y he behaved lik this ) aaj sab problems katham hogaya hai.muje pata nahi ki maine thume ithna hurt kiya" tears flowed down his eyes .he broke the hug n she saw him crying ,by seeing him vry she felt bad that she had hurted him soo much but not knowing that he was facing bussiness problems since a month.he started slapping cursing himself for being rude to her ,she holds his hands n says "rey tumhara galthi nahin hai mei hi gusee mei..." then he says "nahin mera hi galthi hai agar maine thumko bata diya hota prob ke bare mei tho tum itni hurt nahin hoti " then she feels bad for him n says "its ok rey jo hogaya hei wo hogaya its better ki hum dhono uss matter ke bare mein baat nahi karengi" then rey says "ok .bbut pehle thumne muje maaf kiya ki nahin?" then she replies "haan baba kiya hai aab rona bandh karo bache ki tarah" he smiles n says "mei toh thumahara saath tho bacha hi hun"...two of them smile n she realises that he did not wear shirt so she says "rey aap ne shirt nahi pahni?" rey smiles n replies "kyun hot lag raha hoon?" n rey holds her waist tightly n pulls her towards him n says "yeh sari tention mei romance karna toh bul hi gaya humne " by saying this he plants a kiss on her cheek kria was blusihng to the core,n he kissed her jawline ..kria bended her neck towards other side giving rey more space for him to kiss her neck..he kisses her eyes n slowly bites her ear n kriya moans with pleasure.he slowly whispers "kria am i hurting u?" then kria closing her eyes replies " aap muje hurt ker sakthe ho kya?"..then he smiles n lift her in his arms n places her on the bed n placed himself over her.he started kissing her neck,cheeks,eyes n he started aiming for her lips n kissed her with full passion n made the movement memorable.their kisss lasted for 5 min.he kissed her face n was moving his hand on her bare waist .they want each other soo much that their hunger was not stoping..their lips found each other's n started kissing ..kria moved her hands over the bare masculine chest of rey n they get apart from the kiss n rey places himself side of her n they wer breathing very hard.then he saw her rolled over her n whispered in her ears "its not over yet baatcutter"
n he came close to her lips n...
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Lights off
note:age ke story aap log imagine karna...😃

hope u ppl will lik it ...yar agar acha laga tho bade bade comments dho na yar muje bhi satisfaction ho jayega.aur encouragement mila tho aur bhi ss's ,os's or ff's lik dhungi ...agar acha nahi lagatho chapals math marna plz

chap 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54403419
chap 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed?pn=6
chap 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed?pn=8
chap 5(a):https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed?pn=11
chap 5(b):https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed?pn=18
chap 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed?pn=20
chap7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed
chap 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed
chap 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2862427/kriya-reyansh-kriyaansh-ss-completed
chap 10:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68802624
chap 11:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2862427&PID=71435276&#71435276

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love it yaar
i lyk dis kindda ss
i love it i love it i love it
👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was cute and romantic. continuue writing and plz pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do pm me if you write more..:)..
good stuff this is..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was so cute n romantic..loved it..
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loved it n plz plz plz write more nad pm me when u do plzzz loved it to the core
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Awesome OS yar...luvd it...
Plz pm me nxt tym u write sch thngs...wud 2 read it...
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of course loved it
plz do pm me
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Its awesome, romantic...luved it...write more such os would luv to read them n do pm me next tym if u write...

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