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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART - 21 (part 98)

Geet looked at Maan who was busy niharofying them, at the same time preoccupied with some thoughts. She silently gestured him and asked him what was bothering him with her eyes to which he nodded a NO.

She suddenly realized that it was quite late and Dadima and Vicky must be waiting for her. She didn't want Vicky and Dadima to confront each other before this Rimi issue is solved. Right now, she had a tough task ahead...Making Rimi meet Papaji...

"Mujhe lagta hai abb hamein chalna chaiyeh…. Dadima intezaar kar rahi hongi…."

"Vo to sahi hai puttarji….. par... maaji ke samne main iss tarah achaanak…."

"To kya hua Papaji….. Ye ghar to aap hi ka hai na….."

Maan sounded hurt and Papaji quickly clarified himself-

"Haan Maan bete…..mere kehne ka yeh matlab tha ki hum unhe kya batayenge kyunki vo to abhi tak sach se anjaan hain…."

"Arre papaji….Tussi phikar na karo…. aap bas yaad rakhna aapko kya kehna hai baaki ka sab kuchh main sambhaal loongi…."

Maan squinted his eyes as he saw the mischievous gleam in Geet's eyes. He asked apprehensively-

"Tum karne kya waali ho???"

"Offo baba….main kuchh nahi karoongi, jo karna hai vo chudeil karegi….."

"CHUDEIL???"

While Mohinder and Rano were confused as to whom Geet was referring to as Chudeil? Maan just shook his head and hid a smile while pitying that Rimi….nahi, nahi….chudeil….😆

KHURANA MANSION

Vicky had told Geet to give him a missed call when she comes back with Bade papa. He wanted to avoid meeting Savitri devi for now. There were many hidden pasts that were best laid untouched till possible. He jumped when he heard the shrill ringtone of his phone. He saw the missed call and headed downstairs.

Dadima and Rimi were already in the living area when Maaneet made an entry along with Rano-Mohinder. Dadima was the first one to notice Mohinder. She immediately sprang up from her seat.

"A….AA….AAAP…."

That was when Rimi turned her head towards the door and what she saw made her freeze on her spot.

"Yeh….ye..h sab kya hai Maan….???"

"Maaji…. aap apni aankhon par vishwaas kar sakti hai….Main Mohinder hi hoon Geet aur Maan ka Papaji…."

With that he bowed down in front of Dadima to take her blessings but dadima instead pulled him up in a motherly hug.

She clearly remembered how much love he had showered on Maan and she took him for nothing less than her own son, the son she wanted but never had. The day when she had got the news of her demise, she had felt she had lost her son but still she stood up strong for the sake of Maan. But now seeing him once again in front of his eyes made her feel overjoyed.

"Beta….mujhe to abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha….aa….aap...k..ka….kaise…."

She stuttered while a fresh layer of tears made way their way down her wrinkled cheeks. Everyone including Papaji was quite taken aback to see her getting so emotional.

"Bass aapke aahirwaad aur aap sab hi ke pyaar ne meri jaan bacha li…. aur babaji ki kripa se aaj main yaha aapke saamne bhala changa khada hoon…."

"Par beta….aap itne saalon tak..."

"Offfo dadima…..aapke saare sawaal jawaab baaad mein….mud de ki baat yeh hai ki yeh bhale change hain….abb pehle Papaji ko apni laadli Geet se to milne dijiye….."

By then, Vicky had also reached there. He was extremely glad to see his Bade papa reunite with his family. He adored and respected his bade papa a lot, after all whatever he was today was because of him. He looked at Rimi who was still rooted at her place. He smirked and thought-

"Beta Rimi…...Lagaa naa zor ka jhatkaa….just wait and watch dumbo….your countdown to your doom begins NOW…."

Papaji advanced toward Rimi and spoke to her tenderly though he was boiling with rage inside-

"Geet beta….apne Papaji ke gale nahi lagogi?"

Rimi kept on staring at him and she was turning white by the second as if she had seen a ghost. She came out of her thoughts when she heard the ghost err….Papaji speak to her. She saw everyone was looking at her expectantly; she dreadingly went forward and hugged him lightly, when she heard him whispering into her ear-

"Main achchhi tarah se jaanta hoon ki tum kaun ho aur bass tumhe itna batana chahta hoon ki Mohiner Handa ki eklauti beti ke saath jo tumne kiya hai wo tunhe bahut mehenga padne waala hai….tumhe har tarah se barbaad karne mein main koi kasar nahi chhodne walaa….."

He plastered a smile on his face and broke the hug while patting her cheek sweetly. Though everyone except Dadima knew that, it was also a warning signal for her. Rimi was scared like hell and her face had lost all colour. She thought frantically-

"Hey bhagwan yeh nayi musibath kahaan se aa gayi. Pehle hi wo Geet kam thi jo abb uska baap bhi aa gayaa….Mujhe jald se jald Brij ko yahan bulana hoga….Brij ne to kahaa tha ki yeh Buddha mar chukka hai….Abhi bhi Maan yeh nahi jaanta ki main Geet nahi hoon….aur main Maan ko paakar hi rahoongi….kisi bhi kimat par…..Nahi to yeh log to mujhe…."

She gulped when she saw Geet's three saviours- Papaji, Maan and Vicky giving her warning looks as if they could murder her right now without hesitation. She looked at Maan's red blood shot murderous eyes. If looks could kill, she would have turned into ash right now And then she knew, Maan knew everything. EVERYTHING….

PRECAP

GEET's Moodswings….Bechara MAAN...😉😆

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww That was awsome Ruchi 😃
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Papa ji meeting Dadi awww 😊
Vicky ki kya mystery hai ? 😕
aab tou beta rimi tu tou gaeee 😆😆
Hayee precap😳
Geet kay mood swingss 😆
Beachharaaa maaan seriouslyy 😆😉
Updatee soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
now rimi will geet a deadly reactions from everyone

precap is good
geet mood swings

god know what will maan do?
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
ha ha bechari chudeil zor ka jhatka laga haan laga
waiting for the next part
awesome precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving it . every update gives us wide smile on our lips . fultoos entertainment . 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its so senti senti update.
But chudeil's encounter was superb. I so love it. She is a comedy piece
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Posted: 13 years ago
want to see the mood wing so badly so update btw loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
waiting to know vicky's mystery...
precap sounds very interesting...
geet's mood swings 😉😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update dear. So rimi is all dead

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