Maaneet FF- Twisty Deewangi - Link to THREAD 2 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..that was so superb..
entry of mohinder was so heart touching..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mohinder is back. Loving his come back. Interesting events going to take place.
I have a slight doubt on this Raj. Since u love twist and surprises, I think he might be Raj's dad.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey twisty in that di deewangi papaji will die cause of heart attack na
but anyways this thrilled and new love it dear
and now the time for those filthy ppl who destroyed this beautiful family
wow maaneet baby
awesome haan
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
just finished reading all the parts..
there are just fabulous.. i loved it..
please add me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating in few minutes!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Or kitna tym lage ga??pls tel
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting dear
plz update soon na
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me also waiting her plz update na
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hope you had a rocking Holi!!!!!!😆

alots of thanks to all those who commented and liked!!!!😳
thank you so much dears!!!!!!!!!!😳🤗

For all those got confused about Papaji's death….i want to clear that in Muski di's deewangi, Papaji had apparently died in an accident and not from heart attack…...😳

please buddy me for PMs...😳

PART - 20 (part 97)

Rano was the first to break the hug. She formed small fists and started hitting Mohinder lightly on his chest while still crying. Maaneet were quite taken aback to see her like this.

"Aap bahut bure ho... Itne saal main aapke bina kaise rahi hoon aap jaante bhi ho??? Aapke picche se yahan kitnaa kuchh ho gaya….Agar Maan nahi hota to hum to…."

"Shhh….kitna bolti ho tum…"

Her endless rant was silenced by Mohinder's finger on her lips. She finally looked up to see in his eyes and gradually lifted her hand to run over his face, as if making sure that he was truly there and not a figment of her imagination. They had a sweet eyelock and kept assuring each other with their eyes.

"Ahem….Ahem…."

They were brought back to earth only when Geet finally interuppted and then started giggling. They both smiled at each other, while Rano turned a deep shade of red.

All this while, Maan had not said anything. He was a mute spectator of all the proceedings till now. He kept looking at his Papaji, still unable to believe the best reality of his life. Mohinder slowly went towards him and kept his hand on his head.

"Maan bete…."

That was it. It broke the dam of emotions that Maan had secured behind strong walls in his heart. He hugged Papaji and started crying incessantly. Everyone was taken aback to see him breaking down like this. Even Geet was quite shocked.

"….Bete…. Shhh…..dekho ab main aa gaya hoon na…. aur ab tak tumne hamari Geet ka aur apni Ma ka jis tarah se khyal rakha hai, uske liye mujhe tum par garv hai…."

Maan looked up at him and could see the contentment and pride on the old man's face. Maan's face lit up like that of a child when he receives his favorite candy.

"….Haan bete….. Tum aaj zindagi ke uss mukaam par ho jahan par kabhi main khud ko dekhna chahta tha…. aur vo bhi khud ke bal par….. Phir bhi tum iss sab mein unn rishtn ko nahi bhule jo tumne apne bachpan ki kachchi umar mein banaye the…... Aaj agar meri Rano aur Geet mehfooz hai, khush hain to sirf tumhari wajah se…. mujhe bahut khushi hai ki meri Geet ne apne liye ek heere ko chuna hai….."

"….Aap bhi to mera parivar ho naa….."

"….Bilkul….aur ab main apne bte ko kabhi bhi akela chhod kar nahi jaaoonga…."

"Sachchi…."

"Muchchi…."

Maan hugged Papaji as if depending on him for his dear life, while Rano and Geet had tears in their eyes after seeing their amazing bonding. Finally Geet spoke up to lighten the atmosphere.

"Haan…. Haan…. ab aapko bhi apna beta mil gaya hai to main kaun hoon??? Pehle mamma ne mujhe ditch kiya aur abb aap bhi... Meri to koi value hi nahin hai…."

Everyone laughed at her cute cribbings and fake roothna. Maan went towards her and side-hugged her.

"Iss se kya farak padta hai…. aakhir end mein main to tumhari hi team mein hoon na…."

Geet blushed badly listening to his sweet claim while Rano and Mohinder giggled seeing the Joru ka Ghulaam.

"Main.. main.. haan papaji ko pyaas lagi hogi main paani le kar aati hoon…."

She badly wanted to run away from there and escape from all the teasing that were about to come her way. She had barely reached the kitchen door when her head started spinning. Mohinder was the first to notice that Geet was losing her balance.

"GEEETTT….."

Maan immediately sprang up and held her before she could touch the ground. He picked her up and made her sit on the sofa, while Rano hurriedly got a glass of water for her.

"Geet, tum theek to ho na???"

"Haan puttarji…. ye achanak aise tumhe kya hua….."

"Beta.. tum bilkul dhang se khana nahi khaati ab dekho weakness ki wjah se tumhe chakkar bhi aa gaya…."

Geet looked up to see three very concerned faces looking at her.

"Main bilkul theek hoon…. aur Maan yeh sab normal hai…. aapko yaad hai na doctor ne kya kaha tha…."

"DOCTOR???"

Ma and Papaji shouted in unison. Maaneet looked at each other understanding that they have some serious explaining to do.

"Ummm.. Wo…. Papaji…Maa….. Daraasal aap Nana-Nani baa na waale hain…."

"WHAT???"

Maaneet jumped. Geet had her eyes on the ground as if observing floor patterns was the most fascinating thing in the world. Next she knew was, both her and Maan were encaged in a bone-crushing hug by their parents.

"OH MY GOD!!! Meri Pari, itni badi kab ho gayi??? Aura b tujhe hamari kya zaroorat, ek aur team member to teri list mein add ho gaya"

Geet blushed furiously, while Maan chuckled seeing her like this.

"Hey babaji main to yeh soch rahi hoon ki iss bechare Maan ka kya hoga??? Bechara abhi tak to ek bachche ko sambhal ne mein hi iska dimaag kharaab ho jaata tha aur abb Do- Do bachche??"

"DO- DO??"

Maan, Ma and Papaji started laughing seeing her bewildered expression. It was then that Geet understood what Ma meant. She cutely twitched her lips and turned her face away in anger. Everyone laughed even more seeing her cutely pouting.

Maan looked at his happy family and silently promised himself-

"Ab main yeh muskurahat inke chehre se jaane nahi doonga aur ink ek-ek aansoon ka badla soot samet loonga…."

PRECAP

RIMI- Zor ka jhatkaa haaye zoron se lagaa…..😉😆


so dears hope you liked it!!!

Really glad you all are happy about Papaji's entry...😳

Next update sooon...😳

Have a rocking weekend!!!!😳


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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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