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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics...
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN WAS SO MEAN TO HER
BUT SHE HAD GUTS AND DID IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww lvd it
maanu kitna crng bro hai...
oops kya saza d geet ko😉
lvd it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


oh god wat a condition


precap-looking forward 2 it



do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update
maan n is anger luvd his condition
plzz cont soon x
Edited by soni4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE!! DO CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago


yeh Maan gussa ho chahe khush ya romantic mood mein...ek hi baat pe dimag atka hua hai...☺️

so he went to inquire about Rathods and Arjun for his sister...

amazing update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
When r u planning to do the next update??

Please update soon... WAITING
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy Holi to All of you
--Anu
Part 50
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"Now stop crying Geet'. You troubled me so much, main bas thorda pareshan ker raha that tumhe"

After making her calm down he brought her to bed. He looked into her face and smiled naughtily.

"see being your husband its my duty to complete the half done job by you" he winked.

Geet hit him on his chest and hid her face in him.

He then did not leave her for whole afternoon as if he was not getting enough of her. Same was condition with Geet though she was more shy then him but she herself was dying to be with him.

Late in the evening Maan and Geet got ready to come down the hall to discuss about Annies marriage.

Dadi somehow was passing by and saw thenm coming down and was surprised to see how both were lost in each other and Geet's cheek was getting redder everytime he gave her smile as if reminding her of their afternoon. He was reminding her of all naughty things he did with her and Geet's eyes could not leave floor and her smile did not leave her lips.

Dadima could not believe this scene'. She had never seen anything like romance between the two and did not know what kind of relation they share as they never show any emotion outside' but today her heart could not rejoice less with the scene. She just hoped the thing were as she was imagining.

"Geet- Maan" she broke their trance.

Geet immediatly walked fast and reached to Dadima and she led her to kitchen.

Then Geet came with evening breakfast for family as Annie joined them two. They were planning about marriage. The marriage would take in to week time and they were discussing all the schedule and how things should be done as Maan wanted best arrangements.

But he still did not talk with Annie. She tried hard to talk with her brother but Maan was Maan . Geet also noticed this and felt bad for Annie.

After the discussion Geet went to Annie.

"Don't worry' he is angry but he will be fine"

"Bhai ko itna gussa hai to mujhe kernee he nahi shadi'. Anyway I have already stopped talking to Arjun."

"Please now don't behave like your brother'. Calm down everything will be fine"

At night

"What is all this' why are ypu not talking to her' do you have any idea what she is going thru' how can you do this to your own sister' kames kam usse to apnee shadi enjoy kerne dijiye"

"I am doing everything best for her, why can't she enjoy her marriage' "

"Maan you are not talking straight to her and she is so depressed and not able to feel happy as you are angry with her"

"Why are you just blaming me'.my baby sister she is and she did not even think of discussing anything with me' suddenly I come to know that we have alliance ready for her"

"Never ever did I let her feel the emptiness of mom and dad.. sab kuch kiya uske liye' I made sure she led a life of princess"

Geet felt helpless between Maan and Annie. Maan was truly hurt here and Annie was sad because Maan was upset.

She came and sat beside him' he laid on her lap and she started caressing his hair..

"Maan have you ever tried to be her brother'. You have provided her everything that her parents could give and in protecting her and taking the responsibility you have been guardian to her but in that she did not get what she actually have'. A brother"

"Geet yeh kaisee baat ker rahee ho"

"Maan you became her gardian but in that he never gave the closeness of brother' the sibling love, the way they share' to always keep and eye on what's going for her need and her care you missed being her brother aur isliy"

"What?? " "Maybe that's why she could not share about Arjun with you' she wanted to convince you as Gardian' ek bhai ko batana hota to usne kab ka bata diya hota'"

Maan got up and looked at Geet' "Mujhe tumharee baat samjh nahi aatee" he turned and went to sleep. Geet knew now he will think over what she had said'

Next morning when Geet woke up Maan was sitting on his bed and looking out the window'.

"Maan" he turned to her

"Haan haan bat keronga aaj Annie se'. I don't know how to handle relations, insab ka khyal tumhee rakha karo" Geet smiled , Kissed him on forehead and went to get fresh.

After Break fast when Annie was about to leave all down Maan called her

"Annie'" only this much Maan had to say Annie came running to him and hugged him tightly.

"Bhai' I am sorry bhai" Maan hugged her back realizing how wrong he was doing all the time.

"I am sorry" "nahi bhai' please you don't be sorry' mere bhai koi galat ker hee nahi sakte.. I wanted to tell before but.."

"Shhh'. Now just enjoy your functions'. Koi kami nahi rahegee tere shadi me"

Dadima came and hugged Annie'. "Now keep your mood up" Annie's face lit

"I will call Arjun' mooh fulaye batha hoga"

"If he troubles you more tell me" Geet held his hand to stop him'

"Bass.. she will handle"

Maan then went to office and Geet got busy with the household when something striked her.

She called Maan'

"Maan today can you get me files for that new fashion venture of yours I want to start looking into it"

"No not now'. After Annie's marriage'Anyways it's you who have to handle this rush things in marriage.. mere bass ke baat nahi hai yeh sab"

Next to be continued

Part 51

Precap: Marriage preparation, guest at home and naughty Maan.

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I m the best I m the best I M THE BEST 😆😆😆
Kya sahi time par screen refresh kiya maine finally after so many days i m the first person to comment on such a beautiful update
Di Maan aur Geet ka relationship kitna beautiful ho gaya hai hehe dadi toh shocked ho gayi
I loved the way Geet made Maan realize about Annie's feelings
Maan bhi puri tarah se dependent ho gaya hai geet par he is admitting k ye sab tumhe hi dekhna hai hehe
chalo ab sab kuch thik hai
waise di mujhe toh precap k third part se matlab hai hehe Naughty Maan
Happy HOLI to u Di
Love u loads muahh
urs Piggy (Piya)
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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