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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hppy holi 2 u 2...n hppy women's day 2...
Plz pm me wenevr u update...n all d bst fr xams...^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 21
Recap-Kriyaansh n swaron in detention room..

Sharon notices d paint tin beside rey n kriya.

Sh:waa rey.hum yahan paint bhi kar sakte hain..

R:haan..(giving it to her)

Sh:Ab tho mazaa aayega..

She takes d paint tin n starts writing d couple names n d3.Swayam takes another one n starts scribbling d same but lil romantically wid small n big hearts.They were doing it in competition.Kriyaansh watches dem n falls back 2 der flashback looking at each other.Sharon completes it first n den takes a look at swayam's.

Sh:kriya..kiski painting accha hain??

Kriyaansh eyelock breaks.Both of them take a look over d paintings.

Kriya:ofcourse tumhari hee sharon..

Sh(2 swayam):dekha..

S:dekh hee tho raha hun..kaise kriya tum support kar rahi hain..waise bhi ladkiyan ki aadath hee aise hain..

R:ur xactly rite swayam..

Sh:Toh kya lagta hain kriya jhoot boli..

S:haan..jo bhi tumhari dono ke mu se nikalte hain sab jhoot hain,,

K:sab??

Reyam:haan,,

Sharon:humara pyaar bhi??

Reyam:haan...

Those words utter out of their mouth in a flow.Girls them dragon looks,now,there anger was crossing bounds.Kriya took d paint from sharon's hand n sharon from swayam.They throw d paint on der respective boys leaving d room hand-in-hand.The boys too became angry.They gave a look at themselves n then at each other.Both starts laughing lyk hell.

Swayam*LOL*-rey tumhari poori shirt kharab ho chuki hain..

Rey*LOL*-utmhari tho chehre bhi..

They stop laughing after a while..

Swayam-rey ab hum kya kare??hum jaldi nahin jaayengi tho uska gussa zameen par ched jata hain jaayegi tho sab hume dekhke hasenge..

Rey:wo hee mein soch raha hun..wait a min mein vicky ko call karta hun..

Vicky*call*-Hey bro..kahaan ho??Kabse dhund raha hun??

Rey*call*-call tho kar sakte..tum kahaan ho??

Vicky*call*-Mein bas abhi abhi locker room achuka hun..

Rey(lukng at swayam):Bach gayi..

V:Kya bacch gayi?/koi problem hain..

R:kuch nahi..tum jaldi dho shirts leke detention room ko aa..

V:kyun??kya hua??

Rey:Aa tho sahi..batathi hun..

Vicky*call*:ok dude..mein aati bye.

Rey:vicky aa raha hain..

Swayam:thank god..jokers tho nahi bani poori clg ki samne.

Swayam takes his kercheif n wipes off d paint on his face n body.Vicky comes wid d shirts, as soon as he saw dem he starts laughing loudly.Reyam gives him an angry look n he stops.They take d shirt from him n change it over der.Rey tells vicky wat happened.

Vicky:haaye..meri deewani ko usse dhoor rakhna padega nahin tho mein bhi issi tarah..*LOL*

He stops laughing watching d fierceful looks.Just den he receives a msg.

Nil*msg*-dude..jaldi aa..sab canteen mein hain..

Vicky:sab canteen mein hain chalo..

Vicky n reyam goes to d canteen n give a look at d gals n sits beside dem.There was a deadly silence silence since all d couples were busy wid der staring session.Our tomgirl vishakha breaks it.

Vish:kithna boring hain..sab ithna chup kyun ho??

Everu1 breaks der staring session n come back 2 normality.

Vish:common guys..hum kuch khelte hain..

Neha:wow game neha liking..par kis game??

Kriya(giving an angry look @ rey):Red hands..

Vish:unique yaar..chalo sab apne haath arrange karo..par kon start karega..

Rey:kriya..wo hee tho bathaya ye game..

Kriya gives him an angry look n starts d game beating him hardly.

Rey*slowly*-mar gaya..

Vicky:rey tumne kuch bola??

Rey:nahi..haan..game kithni acchi hain..

Vicky:sach mein,.

Rey:haan..(beating him hardly to xpress his feelings)

Vicky gives him a baby look pleading him not to.He passes it on to neha but not that much lil less.Neha becomes angry.

Neha:babu..neha hating you..

Vicky:sorry khagu..aise hogaya.

Neha passes it to bharat n d game goes on.By d tym 2nd round completed every1's hands were red except krisha's.Kriya was feeling bad on seeing rey's red hands n so does sharon for swayam.In d 3rd round kriya beats him slowly n rey gives a silent smile as of now he understood his baatcutter lost her temper.The 3rd round completes.

Vish:ok direction change karenge..

Vicky:nahin..(shouting)..hum dusre game khelte hain...

Rey:ok..police n theif..

Every1(xcept kriya):yes..par police??

Rey:mein..sab bhag kar chupa lo par issi floor mein..

Rey gets up from his place n so does evry1.He goes near a pillar n starts countdown..10..9.Every1 starts hiding n running.Rey holds kriya's hand n pulls her.He pins her to d wall by keeping his one hand around her waist n d other on her lips hiding her from every1.Kriya was trying her level best to escape from his grip but she cudnt.Rey was continuing d countdown looking at her.Countdown ends n every1 were hiding on d floor leaving d canteen.He slowly removes his hands off her lips after looking around dem.She was still pretending to be angry.

Rey:rey mujhe jaana hain..chodo..

He pulls her more closer to fill d unwanted gap between der bodies n leaving an inch gap between der lips.

Rey:mere samne acting karne ki koshish kar rahi ho..

Kriya*in mind*-isse kaise patha mein pretend kar rahi hun..

Rey:mujhe sab patha chalta hain..

Kriya was dumbstruck n was also happy to hear d words a small smile creeps on her face enlightening his face too..

Kriya:rey koi aayega toh..

Rey:tho..

Kriya:tho..

He gives a mischeivious smile n leans towards her.Her heart starts beating faster than usual.She was breathing heavily.As he moved towards her,his body was gently pressing her.He kisses her on d cheeks to d jawline.He was caressing her face wid his lips..he was now shaping d outerline of her lips with his.Her lips were trembling n starving for his.She holds his shirt tightly n pulls him more closer.He presses his lips against hers n dey start a lip-lock getting wilder.His hand on the waist was moving on her back making it more special.Her grip off dshirt loosens n she breaks d kiss since she was panting.Her breathing became so hard.Her eyes were burning yet wid desire.She holds his shirt wid a grip n turns him to d wall wid his back against d wall.He was eagerly waiting for her next move.He pulled her more closer.She careesed his cheeks n den his neck.He was in d seventh cloud enjoying d moment.She was kissing his neck n den she goes down she moves d shirt n kisses his exposed chest making d things more steamy.she was kissing his chest but stops wen she realises wat she was upto.He makes her look at him n plants a strong kiss on her lips passiontely.Their lips were now parted allowing for d tongues to pass.But they break it off after a while wen d breathing was getting harder.She quickly turns away from him to control herself.He helds her n kisses her bare shoulders n passes his hands from d top n intervines his fingers between hers n kisses d neck.She was moaning wid pleasure n turns back hugging him.He hugs her back.

Kriya:rey kab tak aise hee rahenge..

Rey:matlab..

Kriya:tum aur mein akele yahan..

Rey:kyun pasand nahi aaya..

Kriya:aisa nahin..

Rey:pasand aaya..

Kriya stands normally n gives a small smile.

Kriya:game..

Rey:milke dhundegi chalo..

Kriya:haan...

Dey go searching for dem.

Kriya:rey dekho wahaan hain..

Rey quickly holds vicky who was behind some pillar n pulls him out.

Vicky:chod na rey abhi toh time mila..

Every1 comes out of der places on seeing dem.Neha comes from d same pillar n holds kriya's hand blushing hard,Kriyaansh give a innoncent smile to each other n every1 goes to canteen.

Precap-dil..dosti..dance..

Completed it in a hurry..hope you liked it!!



Edited by snigdha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its mind blowing...loved it so much..
thanks for taking time for us to update..
n all d best for ur exam..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yaar kitna romantic and hot tha😳 loved u r update plz update soon and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it. thank u for the kriyansh romance.

all the best 4 exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...its tooo hot...awww love it n games were too funny red handed n police n thief...hahaha...n i love da way rey said "mar gaya"...hahaha 🤣 🤣
n dere spl moment in canteen...wow...awsummm love it...n thnx 4 pm n update ASAP...n bst of luck 4 ur test 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was super hot update dear.. And all the best 4 u xams.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mindblowing update!!!!!
Krisha spilled paint on reyam . . . . . . . GALS!!! . . . . . . . . Thanx to the saviour vicky to get clothes for the hotties...
game- red hands..,,, ye kriya to fullon lakshmibai mode me aa jati hai . . . . Hahahaha
& rey- so smart,,, police-thief (how kiddish,,, but reason to kuch zyada hi sensational tha),, iss game se sabko bhaga dia aur kriya ko pakad lia...
I wonder canteen me aur koi nhi tha,,, agar hota to unhe dekh ke for sure faint hi ho jata . . . . . . .
Damn!!! Their superhott moments are so romanticcc... Aur apne cv's to ek cheek kiss bhi nhi dikhate...lol
viha caught red-handed . . . . . . Kya baat hai vicky to chupa rustam . . . . Rofl
best of luck for ur exams . . . . . I Wonder how would u be able to concentrate on studies when u are writing such a hawtt updates...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Awesome update...luvd it...it ws so hawt n romantic...:)

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