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This is my first FF ever, plz post ur comments after reading n tell me dat should i continue or not. n be frank!!!
{ srry jst bcs my english is quite weak i'll write it in hindi,hope u dnt mind}
part 1
after kriyansh' break up
6 months later
kriya's mom:kriya beta jaldi chalo humari flight nikal jayegi
kriya:coming mom,just wait a minute [kriya came,she was looking as cute as always n excited as well]
chalo abhi,ho gaya
in d plane,
kriya was totally lost in her old memories n she was going to mumbai again.
kriya [to herself]:aaj asa lag rha he jaise firse me ek naye shaher me ja rhi hu,9 months mumbai me rehne k bad aadat ho gayi thi mujhe vaha ki,college ki,dance ki,n REY ki!!!!!! kal itne dino baad mujhe firse college me deklh kar sab ka kya reaction hoga? kya rey mujhe samajhenge? jo bhi uss din mene kaha vo sab majburi me kaha par kya vo?itni mehnat se mom ko manaya he mene dance ke liye, n vo itni dino k baad mani he k rey hi mere liye best hai par ab mujhe dar lag raha he,kya karu????/
[kriya slept thinking abt her team,her dance,her college,her past n HER REY]
precap:kriyam convo n he promoses her dat he'll help her in her mission [mission rey ko samjhana] n kriyansh' meet.
hope it was good bt not so sure,plz do comment n tell me shud i continue or not?
Cricket
