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Posted: 13 years ago



will update tomorrow dear pakka
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Thank you all for liking the precious part and motivating me guys. sowwie for taking the whole week to update but I am very busy with school and its only Firday i take off from doing HW to update my FF and this SS so hope u all understand my plight.
Anyway here is the next part. ENJOY!!!

-DHDAJS Part 5-


As they reached KM the driver stopped the car on the main gate as it was closed, he horn it few time but the door still didn't opens.

Maan- Go open the door

Driver- yes sir

The driver goes and opens the door; he came back and drove in just the car got in the driveway the watchmen came in. Maan tells the driver to stops the car. As the driver stops the car he gets out and goes to the watchman, Geet also gets out.

Maan- why were u not on the gate

Watchmen just stood their bending his head

"Where the hell were u, don't just stand like a statue, answer me" Maan snap at the watch man making Geet and the Watchmen jump

Watchman- sir wo

Maan gets angry and says "you're fired"

Watchman- sorry sir

Maan- I don't repeat myself" then he turn to the driver and says "get him his monthly salary and appoint a new watchman" Saying that he sat back in the car, Geet just stood their lost in her thought thinking he didn't even let him speak and fired him "Khadus Dhust dhanav, becahre ko bolne ka muqa bhi nahi diya aur aweyein hi job se nikal diya, koi aisa karta hai kya Baba Ji" Geet said looking up at the sky, then sits back in the car and the driver drove in front of KM.

At KM Geet was welcomed very warmly by everyone, they all knew about Dev except Maan so they avoided asking anything related to him or the accident. They got her settled in the room next to Annie and after freshening up she came and sat with Dadi and talked.

DM- beta how is mama and papa

Geet- they are fine

DM- it would have been nice if they could have also attended the wedding but I am happy that you came. Geet just gives her faint smile. Just then the driver came and informs them about Yash and Dhara arrival, as soon Maan hear their name, he drops his files on the floor that he was looking through scattering all the papers on the floor and runs to his room while Dadi smiled at him. Geet looked at Maan first confused but then as she also starts laughing at him but controlled her laugh in front of him but as soon he went up they both burst into laugh, then Dadi said "office main aur ghar main khud tu sab ko har waqt dara kar rakhta hai par jab Yash ka naam suntan hai tu iski khud ki bolti band ho jati hai"

Dhara comes and touches Dadi feet and says "wo bechara bhi kya kare Ma, Yash tu har waqt use dante hi rah te hai, koi bhi bhage ga" then she goes and hugs Geet and kisses her forehead and says "kaise ho aap beta" Geet touches her feet and says "hum bilkul theek hai" then she sees Yash coming she goes and touches his feet but he takes his steps back not letting her touch his feet and says "beta humne kitni bar kaha hai betiyon ki jagha waha nahi yeha dil main hoti hai, chalo give me a big hug" Geet smiles and hugs him Yash kisses her forehead and walk with her to DM and touches her feet and hugs her. Yash makes Geet sit next to him and was about to start his convo with her when Annie and Vicky came in running and they both hugged Dhara first then Annies goes and sit on the other side of Yash and hugs him saying "Papa I missed you so much"

Yash- I missed you too beta, where is Maan bahi,

Annie giggles and says "of course Dad hiding from you"

Yash- hmm tu ho jaye and they both wink at each other.

Dhara- Yash plz no, kyun beqar main uske peche pare rah te hain aap.

"MAAAN" Yash calls; Maan who was in his room drinking water drops the glass hearing Yash voice breaking into pieces. "Maan come down now" Yash sternly said suppressing his laugh, he loved teasing him but he loved him the most in his three kids"

"YES Dad coming" Maan said as he looked at his dad pic on his wall. Maan walks out his room soon his eyes feel on Geet and says "uff Dad plz iske samne ne kuch mat kah na" Geet sat their observing what is really going on, when Maan came Yash got up and went to him, Maan took his blessing and then they both hugged each as he was going toward Dhara but Yash stopped him saying "Maan I am not done with you" Maan looks at Dhara making baby face and turn toward him "yes dad"Annie chuckled seeing his face Maan gave her a glare, Geet looked Maan and then at Yash who just had the same expression as Annie a min ago and now a stern look.

Yash quickly changes his face expression to a stern one as he saw Maan turning to face him and Yash says "I heard you got a new contract"

Maan- ji, but I don't think we should go ahead with this company.

Yash- and why is that so, it's really profitable company.

Maan- yes Da'" before they could continue Dhara interrupts saying "Yash please don't start business talk right now, pahle freshen up tu ho jaiye" Yash gestures Maan to follow him to the study, as he turn to leave Maan quickly gives a hug to Dhara and says "bach gaya" and goes to Study.

Dhara- ye baap bte bhi na jahan muaqa mila nahi ke bus business ki discussion start ho jata hai inka.

DM- Dhara its useless aap ja kar fresh ho jao, tab tak main nakul se kah kar dinner nikwala ti hoon

Dhara- Ji Ma ji, Annie bte Geet ko aap apne saath le jao, she will feel bore if she stays alone here.

Annie- Yes Mom, chale Geet.

Geet- hmm

At Dinner

Annie was teasing Vicky about Meera when Yash also joined her and started teasing him. Maan stood far away from them watching them tease poor Vicky, and his dad teasing his son, he didn't believed that they have the same father, when it comes to him he always get angry glares from him and here. Dhara sees Maan watching them and comes to him and says "beta do you want me to tell you a secret"

Maan- Mom what is this, Dad is always nice to these two idiots and he is always angry with me.

Dhara chuckles as he pouted and says "isi liye tu kah rahi hoon, let me tell you a secret"

"What secret" Maan said annoyingly

Dhara- aise nahi, pahle achi si smile do Mama ko

"MOM" and gives her a glare

Dhara- ok...ok bata ti hoon glares kyun de rahe ho, actually the thing is with you is that Yash love to tease you, he is never angry at you, he doesn't even love those two as much as he loves you, but he really loves to tease, as you get teased so easily by him only (and plus you are in under control by him so Annie and Yash has been teamed up to keep u under Yash control and see ur face that you makes when you talk with him

Maan- that's not true Mom, he probably doesn't even care about me forget about loving me mom he hates me Mom

Dhara laugh as he pouted and says "you really thinks so, tumhe pata hai ye sari plan Annie ki hai aur Yash uske saath mil kar tumhe tease karte hai.

Maan- is annie ke bachi ke tu main abhi bata ta hoon, tujhe main..." saying this he also joins them on the dining table. Maan pours a glass of water and says "Annie I have got your grade of this semester" Annie chokes on her water and give Maan a glare and gestures him to be quit, but Maan tu Maan hai, apna badla kaise nahi lega, "kya huwa Annie why are you chocking" Maan smirk seeing his little sister face

Annie- nothing bahi, waise where is my grade sheet

Maan- I have it and I have seen your grades, it's a shame, I mean Annie Singh khurana daughter of Yash Singh Khurana and failing.

Yash looks at Annie and says "Annie is it true"

Annie- no'no Dad, I am sure I haven't failed, I must have at least passed it" Annie murmurs under her breath, Maan hears her and says "Annie do you want me to show the result to Dad"

"NO" Annie snaps then says 'nahi mera matlab hai ke, bahi can I look at it first"

Maan- Yeah sure and hands her, her result.

Seeing the result Annie eyes widen and gives looks at Maan like you're so dead. "Baaahi, I am going to kill you today, for sure" Maan quickly stands up and runs saying "pahle pakar ke tu dekha" and Annie starts to chase him saying "Vicky Bahi aap beathe kya kar raho ho, meri help karo"

Vicky shout back saying "nahi mujhe nahi karni teri help, pahle tu teri help karo aur phir Bahi se punch khane ko milta hai"

Annie- you darpok," and throws an apple on him, while Maan runs in the kitchen and says "good Vicky ur not helping her or else you would have been beaten up badly and that too before your wedding, just think how would the groom look beaten'" before he could complete his sentence he bumps in with Geet, Geet just closes her eyes holding his shirt in her fist as tight as she could from not falling, while Maan held her by her waist as he gets lost in her innocent yet scared face. Geet slowly opened her eyes only to meet his gaze.

"Geet" Dhara called breaking Maan trance, he quickly makes her stand ups and walks away from there and joins Yash at the dining table. They all ate quietly while Maan quietly steal glance of Geet_________

"Have you Checked on Geet" Yash asked Dhara as he came out of his changing room

Dhara- I was just going to her room.

Yash- hmm

Dhara left for Geet room and when she came in she saw her sitting by the window looking at the dark sky. "Geet" Dhara called as she placed her hand on her shoulder, Geet looked at her as a tear escaped her eyes, "kya huwa geet aap ro kyun rahi" Dhara asked as she saw the tear escaped her eyes.

Geet- nothing aunty, it was just, I think something went is my eyes. Geet said wiping her tears

Dhara brought Geet to bed and kept her head on her lap as she creased her hair and said "beta gham batne se uska dard kam hota hai, aur agar aap isi tarha apne dard khud main daba kar rakho ge tu aap ka dard nahi kam hoga aur nahi aap apni dard se bahar nikal paoge"

Geet- Aunty wo mujhe chor kar kyun chala gaya, usne mere bare main ek bar bhi nahi socha ke main uske bina kaise jee paungi

Dhara- Beta uski kismat main bas itne hi din likhe the,

Geet- aur meri kismat, us main tu maine ne use zindagi bhar ke liye likh liya tha, tu aab main kya karo, kaha se use apne pass lao,

Dhara- beta jante hai ke kitna mushkil hai aap ke liye Dev ko bhol pana par beta you have to move on in your life, Zindagi hamare liye kabhi nahi rukti.

Just as Maan was going in his room after his workout session he hears Dhara voice coming from Geet room so he goes and slightly opens the door and sees Geet head in Dhara lap while she is creasing her hair, he could see Geet tears, he looks at Dhara questioningly and she gestures him to go out for now, and he leaves. Dhara stayed with Geet till she fall asleep, soon she came out of Geet room Maan took her to his room and said "Mom kya huwa why was she crying"

Dhara- kuch nahi bas Dev ko yaad kar ke ro rahi thi

Maan gave her questioningly look as he doesn't know anything about Dev "ye dev kaun hai Mom"

Dhara- Mr. Shigal ka beta, Geet us se bauth pyar karti thi, par ek accident main uski death ho gai. It's going to be 6 months to his death, par Geet abhi bhi us hadse se bahar nahi nikli. Baba Ji ne Geet ko tu bacha liye par us accident ne Dev ki jaan le li, aur uske saath saath Geet ki hoton ki muskan, uski khushiyan uske sapne sab chin li. Rano aur Mohindar bahi sabah tu bas lacahr ho kar ise deakh te rah te hai, wo tu acha huwa ke Sneha aur Varun unke pass hai jo ise thoda bauth sambhal lete hai warna tu wo Rano ya Mohindar bahi sabah ki tu koi baat hi nahi manti.

Maan- par mom aise tu koi zindagi nahi guzarti jati, I understand ke use ne apna pyar khoya hai par life doesn't end with it na.

Dhara- I know that beta, but it's hard to forget you first love and move on, aur phir koi aisa bhi tu hona chiye hamare zindagi main jo hamare dard ko bholne main madad kare. With that saying she leaves to her room, as Maan stood their thinking the depth of Dhara words as he knew what she meant______

Precap: Yash secret 😉😆


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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Hope maan will help geet get through this!!
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
feels bad for geet
geet and dhara's conversation is vey touching
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt wtng 4 the nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n beautiful update dear...

its really amazing d way dhara talk to maan n wht she told is sooo true...someone should b dere in ur life to help u to forget everything...

i loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved the complete khurana family...
Loved the way yash teasing maan...
Everyone knows about geet not only maan...
Was he also in love with somebody that he understood meaning of dhara words...
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved dis update

its difficult to forget ur love when ur love died in front of ur eyes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved 2 c yash n annie teamed up against maan n yash taking his class.
Awwee loved this bhigi bili types maan.
continue soon.

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