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Hy guys im new to ff forum...im not sure if we can post any story here i have written os and ffs and still writing on VIRMAN..but this one is a random romantic thriller hope u guys like it...if i shouldnt have posted it her sorry mods...u can close this topic...


FEAR OF DEATH….


Chapter 1:

Encounter With Blood...

"o jeeny keep it carefully" said Mrs.jose,jennys grand mother she was almost nearing 65yrs………jenny had lost her parents wen she was 3 years old…..from then on she was brought by her grand mother…….who shared a great bonding with her…...

They wer living in delhi after jeenys parents passed away…jenny had completed her higher studies and today they are moving to their old house in a village near Himalayas…..it was a very lonely place not much of people around………but the location was so beautiful and jeeny was seeing it for the first time she couldn't take her eyes off its beauty….

She was shifting all the luggages and arranging their home…..mrs.jose was always worried about jeeny and she brought her here jus for her happiness….as she was adamant to see the home wer her parents lived once……

Both mrs jose and jeeny arranged the home neatly…….mrs jose was tired and jeeny dint know cooking….so they decide to have out but since everything had changed since mrs jose left from der……..she dint knew the places……some how that night they manged with bread and jam……….

It was night 11pm……..jenny couldn't sleep properly since it was new place….she saw her granny sleeping so silently she got out of the bed and walked outside the room……..she went near the window that showed the beauty of Himalayas at night………….she was staring she never thought night can be this beautiful……..she was starring at the sky suddenly she noticed the shadow of a girl with long hair………arguing with someone she couldn't see her but the shadow was very clear………..a hand was closing her neck so as to kill her……jenny was getting scared now….she couldn't belived she decided to go out of the home and see…..as she walks out…..she saw the shadow running faster chased by a man and as the girl was running the blood was dropping from her body….jenny was sweating now…….the entire area was dark……….she ran into the home and lied near her grand ma...

Next day morning….grand ma woke up and was shocked to see jenny was not next to her……she knew jenny never gets up early but today…….she ran out calling jenny wer r u? jenny……

After 5 mins she finds her out side the home starring some wer…….she goes slowly behind and pats her at the back……jenny screams a loud…………

Granny asks "wat happened jenny its me ur grand ma do I look like a ghost to u?"

Jenny hugs her immediately…….and says her wat happened previous night…granny thinks that jenny must have got some bad dream and may be she thought tat was real…..and so she pacifies jenny telling not worry and nothing like that might have happened…….jenny feels a little relieved….granny goes in…….

Jenny also is moving in but stops as she hears a louder laughter which expressed lots of wickedness thatn happiness…….she turned back to see who it was……she couldn't belive her eyes as she saw the girl .she too had a long hair and jeeny was very sure that she is the same girl who's shadow she saw last night……..but the girls actions wer so normal and jeeny was confused whether she is the girl whom she saw past night……….

As she was starring at the girl the girl went inside her home and that's wen jenny realized the girl was her neighbour and she must be extra careful…………..

It was evening and jenny and her granny wer having tea together……the door bell rang….and jenny went to open the door…….as she opens she sees the same girl……smiling at her jenny tries to smile but she is quite nervous to do that…….she immediately closes the door and comes back and sits next to her grand ma…..who asks her "who was it?" jenny says not for us……

Granny nods her head….now jenny gets curious to know about the girl…….though she was nervous she always liked to dig out mysteries…so she decided to stay awake tonight and see wats happening……

She was waiting for 11 '0 clock as the clock striked she went out of the home she hid in her garden she was waiting for the girl to come out..but this time a man comes out...jenny couldn't see it properly she goes even more closer to her wall to see….as she sees the man walking out the home……she sees his hand being fully wetted with blood…..she waits for some more time to see if the girl is cuming out but she doesn't…..jenny leaves to home…….inside she stands near the window and sees the relection of many strange people from the girls home……she could not see them clearly but she could find something was fishy…….

Few days passed…..jenny had noticed that the girl had been trying to get close to her in the past few days ……..but some how she avoided it….but she dint understand the reason y was the girl interested in her……..

Her grandma was worried about her grand daughters strange behavior of waking up suddenly at night going out of the home…….she always trusted jeeny she never liked to question her…….so she decided to give her upper part of their home for rent..so that there will be safety for them……

She puts up a tolet board but no one seems to cum…..after few days of wait a young handsome guy comes to meet her…..granny is confused whether to leave the home for him or not…………but she decides to give as no tenant was ready to cum to their home…….

The guy introduce himself as ronit…….he was calm…..spoke down towards earth…….his behavior showed his innocence…granny was quite impressed …….she shows their upperportion for him……he pays the advance and says he will be shifting in a day or two…………

Granny agrees and she informs to jenny about this…..jenny has no problem as she always belives her grand ma makes better decisions…………

Jenny had not seen the guy but had heard about him from her grandma from the past whole day mrs jose was talking about the guy……..now jenny was more interested in seeing the guy………

Next day the guy came.jenny opened the doorhe asked for the key…………she gets and gives the key…..and is about to question him but before that he leaves to his portion…..

His ignorance increases her curiosity to know him more and look at him again…..she starts finding silly reasons to go to his room……he ignores her everytime…

One fine day…..as jeeny gets hurt in the garden he runs and helps her and this is the first time he was speaking to her……..his silence to showed the care he had……..she asks him "shall we be friends?" he thinks for a wil and agrees ……………

From den on both spend time together……she started goin out with him……she started realizing that she is falling in love with him but she was afraid whether he too loved her or not……….


gaaliyan taaliyaan...are welcome plz do comment so that if it was horrible i will stop it...

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