Kaash Aap Hamare Hote!!! Part 1 Page 10

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Hi guys m starting another ff... I know i take a lot of time to update Chahat but pls bear with me guys...i'll try to giv updates jitna jaldi ho sake...

Kaash Aap Hamare Hote!!!!

CHARACTERSKETCH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA



He has always portrayed himself mature and sensible but when it comes to Geet all his maturity and sensibility goes away and he behaves like a rude ego freak... He married Sameera against his parents will since he thought its not right to leave her after getting intimate and Vicky was there to take care of their parents and most important Sameera will be broken if he leaves her... Geet has been the most important part of his life for years but his ego and circumstances led to the halt created in their friendship... Now he has been living a decent life with Sameera but misses Geet in every phase... Destiny will give him another chance to get back his true happiness but will he grab the opportunity or lose everything in his ego again???


GEET HANDA



A mature and sensible girl but childish and really emotional at heart... Shes everyones darling and believes in living her present to the fullest without worrying bout her future... Seeing her happy go lucky ways of living her life one can never guess the pain shes been hiding in her heart... She never knew or understood what went wrong but suddenly her almost perfect kind of life turned upside down and her most precious thing has been snatched away from her... Destiny returned her Maan to her in a strange way but is she ready to fight with his ego all over again???

VICKY SINGH KHURANA



Geet's darling bro cum friend and Maan's brother... Hes a sweetheart and has always wished to see maaneet together but has not succeeded in his plans yet...



PROLOGUE

Geet was again challenged to face Maan's rude behavior and ego when Sameera made her promise to never leave her child and Maan alone... Maan is not willing to leave his child with Geet or stay with Geet... Now how will Geet fulfill her promise given to Sameera??? Is she herself ready to be back in Maan's life or she has some other plans to fulfill her promise without intruding Maan's life???

So guys how is it??? Pls do let me know...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I m so happy that u started this FF jab se tune mujhe iss FF k concept k baare mein bataya tha mere dimag mein yahi chal raha tha k Pari kab likhna start karegi
aur phir aaj tera msg padkar dil khush ho gaya hehe u won't believe office se drive karke ghar aate waqt main title k baare mein hi soch rahi thi aur i m happy k maine apna homework achhe se kiya warna meri wajah ye story ek din aur delay ho jaati
I love the character sketch and Prologue Pari
Maan hmm... najaane uske ego k peeche kya raaz hai
so sameera se shadi usne sirf wo intimacy ki wajah se ki thi okay
Geet I love u u r a sweetheart yaar don't worry yaar Pihu keh rahi hai tumhe tumhara pyar zarur milega😃😃😃
Ab aur kya bolu
"Agar hum aapke dil mein ek chothi si jagah basa paate
Toh Sapne moti bankar aakhon se na behte hothe
Agar hum aapke naam par khud ki parchayi ki jhalak dekh paate
Toh aaj hum tanha na bhatakthe hothe
Hum toh kal bhi anjaan the aur aaj bhi anjaan hai najaane humne aapki shaan mein aisi kya gustaakhi kar di jo aaj nazdikiyaan duriyon mein badal gayi
Kaash hum iss baat ki jadh tak pauch paate toh shayad
AAJ AAP HUMARE HOTHE "
Love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a ton
glad u listened to ur hitler sis and just posted the prologue here
m so happy
well i loved the prologue which i told u before also
its just another beautiful concept yar
looking frwd dear
and please continue asap

loved u loads
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congarts on for starting a new FF dear...
intersting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new ff dear...

awesome concept...😛

continue soon...

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Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmmm interesting start
i'm liking it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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all the best
seems different👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the concept Abi...looks like a very intense FF...waiitng eagerly for the update
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hope to read some interesting parts soon

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