Yet another idea/story line on my mind... It is raining Sajan, MJHT plots on my mind!😛😆
Reserved😉
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When Niel came to know that Gunjan loved Samrat, he felt it was too late. But he kept his hopes open when tension appeared in Sajan relationship. The Sajan situation worsened and he decided to help Gunjan by whisking her away to an undisclosed location, and even told her not to tell anyone including Samrat.
Then soon Samrat learnt the truth. On his visit to Gunjan, the Sajan fight happened. Samrat went away disheartened. My scenes start here.
My take.
As soon as Gunjan saw the laptop photos, she was shocked. She thoughtfully went to her makeup van and quietly sat down. Her eyes became teary.
Suddenly Niel entered.
[personal note. No offense to fans, but i felt the character niel spoke rather incoherently. No wonder Gunjan never... anyway going ott]
Niel- Gunjan. Good news. We can resume shooting. Chalo, naya shooting schedule aaj se.
Gunjan- Niel. Mujhe tumse kuch baat kehna hain.
Niel- Kya? (he went closer. she moved backwards)
Gunjan- Tum kissi ladki ko pyar kartein ho?
Niel- (After much hesitation) Haan. Kyon?
Gunjan- Laptop ke saamne tum tumnhaara pyar ke baarein mein baat kar rahe thei.
Niel- O woh.. Haan.. Kuch ladki ki photos..
Gunjan- Haan. Maine dekhliya.
Niel (Shocked)- Kya? Tumhe pata chala?
Gunjan- Kya issi liye tum mujhe acting pe force kya?
Niel- Maine soch liya tum khush rahoge.
Gunjan- Maine acting nahi karne chaahthei thi. Sirf Di aur Samrat ke liye maine acting le liyi. Tumhaare liye nahi.
Niel- Gunjan. Tum mera bachpan mein mujhe itna help ki. Toh maine socha kyon nahi tumhe help kar doon!
Gunjan- Lekin mujhe koi help zaroorat nahi tha! Main jaise thi waise khush thi! Aur haan, Kya issi liye tumne mujhe yaha laya ho? Sab ko beena bataye?
Niel- Maine socha Samrat zyaada tumpar...
Gunjan- Samrat aur mere beech mein kya hotein hai woh humaara maamla hai, tumhara nahi. Tumhara koi hak nahi tha humaarein life mein interfere karke!
Niel- Gunjan. Samrat to manzoor hai tumhaare baarien mein. Paisa bhi de diya.
Gunjan- Kya!
(Niel told her everything. By the slip pf his tongue he even said he had slapped Samrat)
Gunjan- Kya! Tum... Tum meri Samrat ko thappad bhi maara!
Niel- Samrat tumhaari layek nahi hai. Woh kya hain bolo Gunjan. Chashmish bulakar bulakar tumhaari zindagi barbad ki hain. Gunjan, woh ek unstable ladka hain. Bahut tej se jagda kartein hain. Broken family se aaya hai woh. Woh kya hain jo mera nahi hain? Main tumhe dekhbal karunga. Tumhe star banaaonga!
Gunjan- (Growing bitter and bitter) Chup! Ek aur baat Samrat ki khilafh kaha toh... Tumhara himmat! Tum kya jaaneti ho Samrat ki baarein mein! (Tears atrted streamingdown her face)
Niel- Gunjan. Sirf tumhaare liye yeh film hain. Sirf tumhaare liye maine Samrat ko tumhaari life se nikaalna koshish kar raha hoon! (He came foward and held Gunjan but she resisted) Gunjan. Please. I am really happy tum uska asliyat bhi dekha!
Gunjan- Asliyat? Kaisa asliyat?
Niel- Woh neswpaper...
Gunjan- Ek minute ek minute. You are crossing your limits Mr. Niel Oberoi! Shayad tumne usko force kiya tha! Shayad tumne uss reporter ko bheja!
Niel- Haan. Main nahi chaahta tha ki woh humaara time waste karein. Main chaahta tha woh tumse door jaata hai.
(Gunjan started remembering all the times when she misunderstood Samrat. Then the scenes where she fought with him before he left came before her eyes)
Niel- Gunjan. Main tumse chaahta hoon. Main tumse pyaar karta hoon. College mein aaya tha sirf tumhaare liye. Role tha sirf tumhare liye.
(Gunjan grew disgusted)
Gunjan- Shut up! Just shut up! (She sat on th e dressing table weakly, sobbing bitterly) Sirff tumhaare verjade mein apne pyaar ko kho diya, apne best friend ko kho diya hain...(Sobbing she looked at Niel) Kyon? Kyon tumne aisa kiya! I hate you! Tum meri trust toot diya! Main tumhe sirf ek dost jaise maanti thi!
Niel-Gunjan.. (He went foward and touched her. She was unaware of his hands on her shoulders) Gunjan... Please... I am sorry... But I can't live without you!
Gunjan- Nahi... (Sobbing) Nahi... Niel, tumne mujhe dhoka diya! Main iss film nahi karungi. Nahi karungi. Samrat meri zindagi hain, meri pehla best friuend, meri pehla pyaar! Uske verjade main itna khush mila! (Niel was stroking her. His one arm was around her, the other arm wiping her tears)
Gunjan- (Suddenly realising)- Yeh kya kar rahe ho! Chhod do mujhe! Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi hain. (She pushed him away roughly)
Niel- Gunjan. Tum mujhe saalon se jaantei ho. Aur Samrat ko bas kuch mahino ke liye!
Gunjan- Toh? Toh kya? Iska matlab nahi hain ki tum mere aur Samrat ke beech kuch bhi karo! I hate you!
Niel- I love you!
Gunjan (Getting irritated)- I am going. Mujhe shooting nahi karne hain.
Niel- Woh unprofessional..
Gunjan- Tum bhi unprofessional behaviour ki Niel! Tum bhi! Main jaa rahi hoon!
Niel- Ruko (He roughly caught her) Mat karo aisa! Kyon usko itna pyaar kartein ho tum!
Gunjan- Mere haath cchodo Niel.
(Niel held her hands, and pushed her to the wall. Holding himself close to her, he attempted to hug her. She got scared and started screaming at him. Niel held her and started kissing her cheeks then neck. Her hands bled as he held them roughly. He pinned her against the wall and tried to force himself on her. She kept sobbing, calling out Samrat's name.)
(Suddenly the unit people entered and forced Niel away from Gunjan. Gunjan bitterly began to cry. Her make up artists held her, and she suddenly sprung up and began to hit at Niel. The unit people took Niel away and Gunjan plopped into a chair, sobbing and dialing a number on her cell, shivering.)
(Samrat was on his bike on the highway, when a phone call came.)
Hello Mayank?
Samrat, tu kaha ho?
Main highway par hoon. (He told him what happened in brief)
Samrat mera baat sun!
Kya?
Jaldi waapus jao! Niel lost his control and...
And?
Tumhaara Chashmish ko physically hurt kiya!
Kya!
Jaldi jao aur waapus lao usko! Sambhaalne jaana! Main, Uday, Benji waha pahuchnewaalein hoon. Nupur aur Diya ko phone kiya tha Gunjan ne...
(Samrat hung up and turned his vehicle around, rage pounding in him.)
(Gunjan was crying bitterly. Her palms were bandaged. When Niel attempted to come for an apology, her make up artists and the AD prevented him. Samrat soon reached and so did Mayank, Uday and Benji. This time no one dared to stop Samrat, as well as his friends, as they rushed into the shooting area. The reporters had already come, trying to find out. Uday and Benji took charge while Mayank went to talk to a producer. Samrat rushed into the make up room.)
Chashmish!
(He saw a sad broken down girl, her tear stricken face and reddened eyes looking up at him. Gunjan whirled around and rushed into him arms, sobbing bitterly. Closing his eyes, his arms around her, he held her till she quietened down.
Mayank rushed in to announce that they had come to take her home and that her contract will be cancelled. Samrat wanted to talk to Niel but Mayank advised against it. Gunjan was still holding on to Samrat.
She lifted her face and told Mayank that she had no interest in acting, that she would rather not file a case against Nile. He had just lost control that's all. Mayank refused and told her he will get a restrain order, that Niel had against Samrat, turned against Niel himself. Gunjan was shocked that Niel had even a restrain order against Samrat.
(They brought Gunjan back to Bhushan house. Dia and Nupur rushed to Gunjan and hugged her. Gunjan was much calmer and still held Samrat's hand. She looked at him and asked for a private talk with him. The couple went to the terrace. She turned around and locked the door)
Samrat- Chashmish.. I am sorry!
Gunjan- (Her hand on his lips) Shh... Kyon baar baar sorry boltein ho tum! Sorry toh mujhe bolne do Samrat... Har baar mein tumhe galat samjhi... (He tried stopping her) nahi Samrat. Mujhe bolne do aaj. Samrat, I am really sorry! (She held her ears) I misunderstood you. I didnt let you say anything! (Her tears sprung up)
Samrat- (Gently taking her hands and kissing them) Chashmish. I am sorry ki main tumne akele chhod diya!
Gunjan- Nahi Samrat. Tumhaara koi fault nahi hain. Woh main thi. Main bahut buri hoon. Tum kaise aur kyon mujhe itna pyar diya?
Samrat (Grinning)- Chash-mish! (He tapped her nose) It is alright Chashmish! I love you!
Gunjan- I love you. I love you. (She started sobbing, holding his shirt, her head leaning on his chest)
Samrat- (Holding her and kissing her head) Chashmish.. Rhono mat... (He led her to the swing and sat her down. Her head on his shoulders, her arm around his arm, Gunjan told him about what happened)
Samrat- Mujhe pata tha woh tumse pyaar kiya hain.
Gunjan-(looking up pained and startled) Kya? Tumhe pata tha?
Samrat- Haan Chashmish. Mujhe pata tha.
(A knock came on the door. Mayur was leaving. They had just settled their fight when Gunjan's call had come and so were at Bhushan's house since then. Now they were leaving. GuNur hugged each other, and Nupur told Samrat to stay back at the house for Gunjan's sake. Soon Diya and Uday left for their beds. Benji went home. Dinner was late. It was almost late at two pm, when Sajan came back to the terrace to finish their talk.)
(They were sitting on the swing, quietly observing the moon. Their arms were linked together. Suddenly Samrat got up, startling Gunjan)
Gunjan- Samrat! Kya hua?
Samrat- (Taking something from his pocket) Chashmish. Aankhei bandh karo...(Smiled)
Gunjan- Theek hain... (She closed her eyes)
(She waited and heard him say 'open your eyes now)
Gunjan-(Opening her eyes and getting startled) Samrat!
(Samrat was kneeling down in front of her. She got up and he took her hand. Opening his other hand he offered her a beautiful platinum diamond ring)
Will you marry me Chashmish?
(Gunjan was shocked and started crying)
Chashmish?
Haan Samrat! Main tumhe shaadi karungi! (She nodded, biiting her lip nervously)
(Samrat got up from his knee and put the ring on Gunjan's finger. Sajan looked at each other and hugged. She was continuously crying, he stood there comforting her. Then he broke the hug, cupped her face with his hands. She drew closer to him, her arms around his waist)
Chashmish, I love you.
I love you too Samrat. Thank you. Tum mere zindagi ki sabse bade meherbaan ho. Sirf tum hi ho jo mere khush samajhtei ho... Thank you for forgiving me so easily!
(He kissed her forehead, then kissed her nose, then her cheeks. Her nails dug further into the collar of his shirt, her eyes closed. He then kissed her on his lips. She responded fully and the hugged him tightly. He picked her up and carried her to her room.
They lay on her bed side by side, in each other's arms. He stroked her hair, holding and hugging her tightly. She held on to him and soon fell asleep. He looked at her asleep and smiled. Taking her specs and shoes off, he coverd her, kissed her on her head, switched off the light and went down stairs to the sofa Dia had prepared for him. He then fell asleep.)
(The next day was Sunday. Newspapers held the stoy of what a film director did to an upcoming actress. Meanwhile Mayur and Benji landed up at the Bhushan house. Samrat was still there. When the gang came to know of Sajan's engagement, they pretended (as in the show) that it was a joke but were thrilled.
Suddenly the doorbell rang. Uday went to open the door. It was Niel, accompanied by an officer, a producer and the AD. Everyone stood still. Nupur and Samrat looked at each other and glared at Niel. Benia and Uday stood around Gunjan, who disgustedly looked away, her arms folded. Mayank went foward and asked Niel why he was here.
Niel- I have come to apologise to Gunjan. pata nahi kyon, but I lost control.
Mayank- Mere saali tumse koi baat nahi karengi. Aur haan. Aaj se woh Samrat ki mangekar banchuki hain. Agar tum uski piccha nahi cchodtei ho toh main tumhaara khilaafh FIR file karunga. Bach gaye ki Gunjan koi case nahi file kiya!
Niel- Mujhe sirf ek baar milne do!
Mayank- Nahi.
Niel- Please. Main sirf apologise karunga aur phir chalein jaunga!
(Mayank glanced back at the gang. SaNu, Benia and Uday looked at Gunjan who looked at Mayank, looked away thinking and then sighed.)
Gunjan- Theek hain. wahi kharein ho jao aur bolo.
Niel- Please yahaa nahi. Bas main tumhara dost hoon. Aur yeh tumhaari ghar hain. Please!
Mayank- Theek hain. Hum doosra kamra mein jaa raha hoon. Lekin Samrat yaha rukega.
(Niel was about to protest when Maysnk gave his bloodshot glare. Niel stopped.)
Nupur- Oi bhaisaab mister. Zyaada line cross mat karna, samjha kya?
Dia- Tumhe jo bhi kehna hain, Sammy ke saamne kehna hain. Bas.
Producer- Mein aur AD yaha aayi Mr. Shergill ki paise waapus dene ke lie. Yeh officer bahar khaarenge.
(Samrat was given back his money. The producer, AD and the officer left and Mayur, Benia and Uday left the room. Samrat came foward and stood behind Gunjan.)
Samrat (Emboldened by Mayur's presence)- Niel. Jo kehna hain, baat yahi khatam karo.
Niel (Coming foward)- Gunjan. I am very sorry. I lost my self control. Main tumhe shaadi ki proposal dene chaahta tha. (A glare from Samrat) Gunjan. I still love you and I will wait for you. If you ever need anything, I am there for you. Please let us be friends?
Gunjan- You have totally hurt me physically and disgusted me. Mere pass Samrat hain, Jiju hain, mere bhai aur behenai hain. Yehi mere liye kaafhi hain.
Niel- Maine samjha. But people do change (Looking at Samrat) I have a feeling ki woh tumhaari zindagi barbadt..
Gunjan- Bas! Phir se tum shuru kiya? Yahaa tum maafi mangtei aaye ho. Maine mere jawab de diya. Mujhe iss baarein main aur koi jawaab nahi hain! Samjhe?
Niel- (Taking a deep breath) I am sorry... Main chaltein hoon...(He gave a longing look at her and then noticed her ring finger)
Samrat (Noticing his gaze)- Goodbye Niel Oberoi.
Niel- Goodbye.
(That evening a breaking news bulletin came on TV - Niel Oberoi, disgraced film director, got rejected by an upcoming actress and has committed suicide. He was found hanging in his room by his assisstant. )
(The news bulletin shocked everyone, and caused a distress to Sajan. But they moved on soon.)
T H E E N D
Edited by suhaani.cid - 14 years ago