Baatein kuch unkahi si - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

oo oo... Swayam's in a big trouble

i dont know y...but everytym he only gets into trouble
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
awww..seriously awesum concept..
luved it..please continue...n do pm me nxt tym also..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

awww..seriously awesum concept..

luved it..please continue...n do pm me nxt tym also..!

thanx...yeas..for sure i'll pm u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Nice Update.. PM Me Next Time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
nice update plz do update the further part and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
pls do pm me ..i added you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
plz pm me wen u update...thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
thank u guys!!!thank u for ur luv n support!!i know i m making u wait for long for next update..i'l surely update chapter 3 on sunday!
***thank u***
Edited by manaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
hey!!! i jst read ur ff n i lyk it plsss pm me wen u update nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

part 3

Kriya practising in rehearsal hall'vicky enters the rehearsal hall'

Vicky:kriyaaa

Kriya:hi Vicky!kya hua'

Vicky:suno meri dard bhari daastaan'

Kriya:aah!!!ab kya hua'

Vicky:teri best frend muje itna ignore kyu karti hai'.???kya mein itna bura hu???

Kriya:array Vicky!itna tension kyu lete ho tum'.thoda patience rakho

Vicky:tumhe kuch batana tha mujhe'mein aur swayam ab dost hai'aur rey bhi

Kriya:wow!!tum swayam ke saath dosti karoge,yeh possible hai'par rey '.aur who ek weakling ke sath dosti is impossible

Vicky:kya kriya'.tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa nahi hai'who bahut accha hai'..woh is status me believe nahi karta

Vicky in his mind("kriya !!tum kab yeh samjogi ki rey tumhare liye perfect hai..usse accha ladka tumhe kahi nahi milega")

Vicky:yeh sab ladkiya ek jaisi kyu hoti hai'

Kriya;kya???kya kaha tumne?

Vicky:kuch nahi '.mein ab jaa raha hu'agar tumhare dosto ko pata chala ki mein tumhara dost hu'toh who tumhe nahi chodenge'

Kriya:thik kaha tumne 'jao tum yaha se'

Vicky leaves!!!!!!

Swayam in locker room'very tensed'

Swayam:kya karu kya karu???

Vicky enters lockerroom

Vicky:kya karu kaya karu???

Swayam:tu mere dialogue repeat kyu kar raha hai

Vicky:swayam tu joke mat maar 'mein bahut tensed hu'.neha ki wajah se

Swayam:ohhh!!

Vicky:par tu kyu tense hai'

Swayam tells Vicky everthing about canteen scene what happened between him and bharat and amar

Vicky :shocked'array itni si baat na'tu tension mat le!mein karunga teri madat'

Tu sirf Sharon ko sambhal'use tumhare fun week prep me busy kar daal.

Mein nil aur rey ko bata dunga

Who easily maan jayenge

Swayam(happy):thanx Vicky'.tunhe toh mera problem solve kar diya

And next day swayam gives lot of work to Sharon'.thaat keeps her busy whole day'

And this is how swayam manages to book the rehearsal hall

And dazzler and weakling boys gets united and make d3 boys group

Here weaklings are very happy that they got whole day rehearsal hall for practise

Vicky thinks that he will use this thing to change the image of rey infront of kriya

And he tells kriya that the whole day rehearsel hall was arranged for u'll by rey

As he wanted to help u'll.

Listening to this kriya is bit shocked..and amazed'and happy

And from there she starts feeling for rey

******THANK YOU******

Edited by manaa - 14 years ago

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