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Posted: 13 years ago
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4 pming me dear...😃
updates dear...👏
dear...😃
just ...😃
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u r done really a
tons of to u...dear...😛
lov,❤️
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -harneet.gill-

awesome part

wonder who is calling priya :\
cont sooon

harneet <3

will continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe

You finally updated Naz! 😃 And of course...the Ghajini me had to go back a few chapters to remember what the story was about. 😆

Great update!
Cute scene when Geet was trying out the sarees. Maaneet's nok-jhok...LOL!
Hmm...who transfered Vicky's calls to Priya's phone? But a very smart way to found out that something was wrong.
The precap looks interesting...

yeah...it was a late update...
but will make sure u wont become ghajini again😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sukklover ...I understand its hard to answer all PMs
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update Time
Hi friends I am back with my update. hope you all like it
Early morning, Geet wakes and gets fresh. She gets ready for office and notice she has not seen Maan since she woke up. Geet sees watch its just 8 a.m. Geet wonders where Maan can go and is about to step out of the room all worried when Maan enters with breakfast.

Maan: Good morning. You woke so early.
Geet: Good morning.

Geet hugs Maan. Maan gets worried.

Maan: Geet. Are your alright?
Geet: I am trying to be.
Maan: What happened?
Geet: You werent there when I woke up. I got scared when I realised when you were not around. Dont leave me alone again Maan. I just dont like it.
Maan: I will always be with you. Ok. Now relax.

Maan consoles Geet and they both have breakfast. They both come to the sitting area.

Dev keeps calling Priya for a file but does not pick up. He gets irritated as they already late. He sends servant to check on her but he returns saying she is not opening the door even after repeated knocking. Geet goes to have a look. After knocking for long time, Priya opens the door. Geet showers her with questions but Priya sees the time and rushes to get ready. Geet finds Priya's phone on the floor, picks it up, and tries to fix it. Priya returns and Geet asks why she broke her phone. Priya tells her about the repeated phone calls.

Geet: You could have just kept the phone in silent mode, alert even works in silent mode.
Priya: I was sleepy and frustrated.

Geet laughs at Priya. Priya gets angry at Vicky. Priya rushes for her meeting. Geet goes to see Vicky.

Geet: Good morning..
Vicky: Good morning...not going to office.
Geet: I am going, its too early. how about you?
Vicky: me too.
Geet: Why you transferred your calls to Priya?
Vicky: What?
Geet; Ahh..how innocent?
Vicky: I really dont know what you are talking about
Geet: Ok Priya is complaining to Maan. answer him
Vicky: Really. this girl is too much. didnt have a word with me and directly went to bro

Vicky runs towards sitting area where Maan is talking to dadi. Vicky looks around but does not find Priya. Geet comes and stands beside him.

Geet: You didnt knew what I was talking about a moment ago...right?
Vicky: Bhabhi. it was just a prank. nothing serious about it.
Geet: She broke her phone bcoz of ur prank. stop irritating her. anyways I dont think you will be spared this time. She was very angry.
Vicky: Angry. huh. what can she do? see u in the office.

Vicky ignores Geet's words and walks off to get ready for office.

In the office, Dev and Priya finish their meeting with the clients. Dev is busy on phone. Priya puts Vicky's night party video on his desktop and asks Dev to watch it when he is free. Maan and Geet reach office. Adi tells Maan about some trouble in Mumbai branch. Maan decides to go and handle himself. Priya too joins them. Maan is concerned about Geet and remembers her morning behavior. Priya suggests Maan take Geet along. Adi too supports her. Maan finally decides to give Geet surprise. Geet enters the cabin. Three of them end their discussion abruptly. Adi and Priya nod to each other and leave. Geet gets confused but ignores. Adi makes all arrangements for Maan and Geet stay at Mumbai.

Dev calls Vicky in his cabin.

Vicky: Good morning. Couldnt meet you in the morning. HOw was ur meeting.
Dev: It was good. so how is all going?
Vicky: Awesome.
Dev: I can see that

Dev shows Vicky the video. Vicky is shocked who took it and how Dev got it.

Dev: You are worried about all this but I am worried what will happen if bro comes to know about your deeds.
Vicky: Bro. I didnt wanted to do it, but my friends they forced me.
Dev: You think bro will buy it.

Vicky looks down. He comes out of Dev's room and sees Priya.

Vicky: DId you give that video Dev bro
Priya; Any doubts..
Vicky: You
Priya; After what happened last night I would have shown that Maan but I am just giving you another chance. I dont want friends or enemies, but stay away.
Vicky: Are you blackmailing me?
Priya: Whatever

Priya leaves.

In the evening at Khurana Mansion, Geet is busy with dadi and Nandini. She sees Maan and Priya discussing something. Maan and Priya talking about packing Geet's luggage without her notice as Maan does not want her to know about Mumbai tour till last moment. Geet goes near them and they both part ways. Priya goes to Nandini and asks to help Maan while she will manage Geet. Nandini is happy for Maan and Geet, and agrees. Geet comes there. Priya says she got some work and leaves from there. Geet gets doubtful and follows her. Nandini goes and helps Maan in packing. They back Geet's belongings and make sure Geet does not get any doubt. Geet goes and confronts Priya what she is trying to hide. Priya acts all innocent which increases Geet's doubt. Priya thinks if she leave Geet will dig deep into matter. Priya says she just acted like that to get attention.

Geet: My attention. really.
Priya: Yes
Geet: Why
Priya: You are always with Maan these days so I thought we can have some chat.
Geet gives her a whack: Never do such things again. Just tell me directly
Priya: Sure

Precap: Geet excited with Mumbai tour

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Posted: 13 years ago
lalalaala...!!

aww...they're all so sweet :*
Edited by -vrshn- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

how is it possible that i got beat for the first comment again????

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update dear.waitng 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww Mindblowingg Rockinggg Post🥳

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