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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww awesome update ana dear
Loved it to the core
Precap nahin diya :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
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nw whom maan loves...i hope its geet only...
i really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome updates!!

loved them!!

so their prides didn't allow them to apologize to each other!!

OMG both were so angry!!

love you vicky trying to patch them up!!

ha ha Maan annoying Geet and then sorry was so cute!!

awww maan's attention all on geet!!!!!

OMG now who is that some one else!!

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PART XXVII


Savitri: Tell me why you can't marry her''..

Maan: Mom Please'''

Savitri: I want answer'''

Maan: Mom I love someone else''..

Savitri: What?????

Maan: Yes Mom I really love her'. I cannot stay without her''

Savitri: who is she???

Maan: Whoo Mom'. Whoo

Savitri: Yes Maan''..

Suddenly Maan's phone rings

Maan: Mom I will talk later''

He takes the phone and runs away from the room

Savitri: Maan Maannn'' (self talk): How much time you will hide Maan'.. You will have to say one day''

On the other side Maan walks down towards the terrace and is relieved''

Once the call is over''..

Maan (self talk): I got saved today because of this phone call'..otherwise Mom would have not left me at all'''.

While Maan was talking to himself he heard a cry''..

He started walking towards the noise was shocked to see'''

Maan came running towards her''..

Maan: Geet what happen???? Why are you crying???

Seeing Maan, Geet immediately wipes her tears

Geet: No Maan, I was not crying'.. Who to eyes mai'..

Maan: Ya why don't you tell that something has gone in eyes because of which tears are flowing

Geet: Ya Maan

Maan: Enough Geet'' you don't know how to lie then why are you lying'.. Tell me what happen''.

Geet: No Maan seriously nothing''.

Maan: You were remembering your family right''

Geet just nods her head and again starts crying''.

Geet (while crying): Why did they do this to me''. Maan''.. Am I that bad'..

Maan: No Geet you are not'''. Why are you blaming yourself''.

Geet (still crying): But they did not even tried to understand me''..

Maan puts his hand on her shoulder and brings her near: Shhh Geet no more on that discussion''.. I am there to understand you''.

Geet rest her head on his shoulder''.. and Maan's hand moving on her head''

Maan wipes her tears: Geet never ever think that you are alone I will always be there with you''..

Both are lost in each other''. They were not in their control''..

Maan moves near her and kisses her head, her eyes'''

Geet closes her eyes'' She was lost totally in him''.

They are very close to each other'.. Maan's hand slipped from her shoulder to her waist''..

Geet was feeling butterflies in her stomach'''

They came very very close to each other'' Their lips very close and was about to touch suddenly'''

Geet Di Geet Di'''' Anvesha started calling'''.

They both come out of their trance''' They both realized what they were doing'''.. They were about to move but their lips brush each other''.

There was an embarrassing situation between both of them''''' They just moved away from each other''

Anvesha came searching for Geet'..

Anvesha: Geet Di you are here''. And I have been searching you in whole house'''

Anvesha suddenly sees Maan also there'''

Anvesha: Maan Bhai you are also here'''.

Maan: I am just leaving''. Good night''

Anvesha: Good night Bhai'''.

Geet just refuses to look at Maan''' Maan walks to his room

Anvesha: Di lets go to garden down''..

Geet: Ani now''.. why???

Anvesha: Because you like garden'''.

Geet: who told you that I like garden''.

Anvesha: Maan bhai told me''.. Any way leave that''.. You come with me''

Geet: acha acha lets go''

Anvesha: Di I know you were upset'''. But you don't have to be upset when we all are there with you''''

Geet: I know''.. I was not upset''

Anvesha: Mom told me that you were upset because you were remembering your family'''

Geet: Ani''..

Anvesha: We all love you''..

Geet: Me too'.. acha tell me how is your Arjun???

Anvesha: What Di??? Stop teasing me'''.

Geet: Where am I teasing you??? I am just asking'''.. Any progress or still it is in friendship'''

Anvesha: we are just good friends nothing else'''

Geet: But your eyes are telling something else''

Both Geet and Anvesha were having fun''.. but one person was just lost in someone totally''..

Maan was standing near window and was just looking at Geet''.. He was totally lost in her, in her laugh''' In everything''''.

Geet was fully aware that Maan was near the window''. But she refused to even look at him''.. She was embarrassed to look at him''.

If you love her so much why don't you tell her''.. Suddenly a voice came from behind''''..

Maan turned around and saw Vicky standing behind'''.

Maan: What are talking Vicky???

Vicky: the thing which you heard Bro''' If you love her so much why don't you tell her'''..

Maan: I don't''

Then you were seeing flowers, stars from window''.

Maan: Mom you also'''.

Savitri: Maan I know beta that you really love Geet a lot'''..

Maan: Mom there is nothing like that'''..

Savitri: Ok then I have a girl in my mind''. We will get you marry with her'.. Vicky come with me''. We will talk to panditji''..

Vicky: Ok Mom''.

Maan: No No wait Mom''' I love her'''..

Vicky get excited: Wow Mom'' Bro finally said it'''..

Maan: means''..

Savitri: Means that Mr. Maan Singh Khurana that there is no girl which is in my mind except Geet''..

Maan gets shy'': Mommm

Vicky: Bro now at least tell her''''.

Maan: Ya will tell her soon''.

Vicky: that's like my Bro''..

Maan gives fake angry look''..

Vicky and Savitri leaves Maan and goes'''.


Maan is again lost in Geet who was enjoying with Anvesha in Garden''

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Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update

heyy deir lips brush each other

new entry must be positive
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part...
Maan atleast confessed his love to vicky and mom..
i think the new entry will make geet confess her feelings too..
i hope it will b a positive character..
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Posted: 13 years ago
so maan accepted hid feelings fr geet ...o ho ho m sooo happy...nw he has to confess it infront of geet...
awesome update...
its amazing...
really loved it a lot...
thank u fr d lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

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