OS - A Silent Wedding Night

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWW shy. First you must write more. You are a really good writer. Second the OS was fabulous;. I hope it happens this way instead of them fighting each other. It was much better and a practical one in their current situation. I really liked the way you used pictures. Third Thanks for doing barun doses everyday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bang on, Shalu. Now this is something that is very much possible, and it is practical as well. Both of their eyes talking, and them recalling their past, but then, the present...their really stuck in this limbo. Loved it, Shalu!

You must continue to write more, and liked the addition of pictures!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was sooo goood!!! i can totally imagine this happening in the show!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the addition of the pics...though I suppose it wouldn't be yours if you didn't have pics! Lovely OS.
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That was a nice one hun... Well m dam sure something of such is definitely gonna happen without any doubts...

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Love your version. It has the highest chances of actually happening.

Waiting for the day when we can see the real ArHi SR!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it Shy!! You stayed true to the characters!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...i actually thought of the pillow thng...i reckon he will do that... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent OS. What emotions. 😭

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