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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks everyone more coming soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED THE VM!
adele is amazing too, and perfect song and scenes 😳
& wow, you mixed the real vm in...so cool!
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thanks Riddhi, here is the preview for my next story, I may just add parts here in this thread but if there is a greater interest will make it longer and make it a short story.

Inspired by Humraaz, Raaz 1 and 2, The Vow and the Humsafaar title song

~Yaddein~

The clock struck nine am. Udayveer glanced at the clock and stopped his exercise. He was running behind schedule but then again the past few weeks nothing was routine. He took the towel and wiped off some sweat. He grabbed his water bottle and gulped down some water before heading back up towards his room. He had arrived in London the night before. They had told him things would take time to get back to normal.

He shook his head. He didn't know what normal was anymore. One incident has wiped away what they all believed was true bliss. He wondered if he would have that again.

She opened her eyes. She looked around the room. It was unfamiliar by sight but she felt like in the recent past perhaps she was here before. The door creaked open. There he stood with a vest and track pants on. His expression was cautious.

"Hum kahan hai Udayveer?," she inquired.

He smiled slightly hearing his name from her lips. He walked over to her and sat beside her. She seemed to have realized he was telling her truth or maybe she had started to feel familiarity with him.

" We are in London. There is a doctor here that can help us. I'll never give up on you Manyata," he declared.

She smiled slightly. He returned it with his signature grin. He got up to go use the washroom.

She held up her hand and gazed at the ring on her finger. How she wished she could recall what had caused this mess. She sighed and got up to grab something to wear for the day.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 13 years ago
moksha89 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww, loved steamy cooking time.
haha <3 manveer are sooo adorable, especially in your fics! 😳
moksha89 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sona, im reallly liking your yaadein idea. it would be a really good and mysterious FF to write. you know? i really want to know more, and i don't think an OS would do it justice. just work your magic (as usual) & ill be awaiting it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
all right then I will start a thread and i am writing more as we speak lol😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
manyata would look soo nice in an orange sari. & shirtless UVeer ..😳
was this scene slightly inspired by humsafar? i never watched a pakistani serial before but humsafar is soo beautiful to watch, especially khirad and asher moments. they just complete each other.
anywayyy, i love how you capture those sweet moments of married manveer life ... hopefully real life waise hi hain. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay!!! you're writing a FF!!!! 😃
i should make sure to update by friday, too :) lol

& i just read the baby mansi story, sooo cute.
the ending was kindof bittersweet for aakash. oh well, he did leave and there were no promises between them
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Posted: 13 years ago
sperate thread for the story is here, will update first part before I sleep

moksha89 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
so im basically spamming with my OS comments, lol, oopsies.

but until i read the jaigarh photoshoot thing, i totally forgot that they had to do it .. 😕
i hope they have a photoshoot together soon !!

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