deepey thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys, I wrote this poem. thought about shairing it wid u guys. It doesn't rhyme or anything. It's just my thoughts and feelings. Hope u guys like it.

Baby I was waiting for u

but u didn't wanna come

I was searching for u

but u didn't wanna be found

I was praying for u

but u didn't wanna believe

I was crying for u

but u didn't wanna see

today I heard that u came

but what difference does it make

coz guess what baby now its too late.

Now I see u waiting for me

but now I have no patience left 4 u

I have no tears left 4 u

I have no love left 4 u

Coz baby u weren't there.

Now i have nothing left to give

except to watch u wait.

Thanx guys for reading it.

Love (rinku) didi. I wanna thanku for always supporting me. I hope that someday I can write as well and beautiful as u do.

luv ya all Raman

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happe thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was very touching deepo. I am sure you'll be able to write the way you want to write.
Selina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was sooooooooo good. Keep it up. Good job. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey it was absolutely brilliant👏....luv it radio....keep writin dear👍🏼
naziaakther10 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that's was so cool? keep up the good work deepy?

nazia

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Deepey,

Sweetie...that was simply wonderful. I am not just saying this to make u happy, but I sincerely mean it. When feelings pour out in form of words---emotions can be felt as one reads it. I can surely understand what you're trying to convey--and I really appreciate your beautiful thoughts!

But sweetie I would definitely would like to say something---never let love from heart, coz if that happens then life is meaningless. We always need to progress with hope and faith, and love brings that to our hearts! I hope you don't mind me saying that! Sweetie your work is absolutely mind-blowing and much better than mine. Hun I'm always here to encourage and support you😊!!!!!

-Love4ever!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanx u guys. i really appreciate it.😊

Love didi ur one of the sweetest persons I know. Thanx, I had lost my faith in love a long time ago, but coz of u I'm starting to believe in love again. The way u believe in love and live, ur faith in it can make anybody believe in love. Ur an amazing person. 😛 Always stay sweet.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Wow Deepey, great poem. Keep it up

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