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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo romantic...
wat an ud n wat a valantine gift yaarrr...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its such a cutei pieupdate...cho chweet...

i loved it, flashback is reallly cute.

veer comming n bringing her vodka...MEAN IT OR NOT-VEER PAMPERS HER ALOT...DAMN A LOT.

THEY R BEST.

LOVE U DHANVI DI.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it
waiting 4 valentine ud
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
haila anu ne veer se har valentines pe vodka gift main manga...😲
n veer...he is also giving it...😆
well it's a romantic one...looking forward...that how they are going to celebrate their valentines...😊
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sorry for late commenting dear😭...

all updates r awesome👏...ananya is just too much😉...but they both r perfect together😳...

thank u so much for this special update for valentine😳...it was superb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the valentine's special update :-)
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 19 - 20
superb dear
loved it
very cute parts
lovely
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

awww...that was sooo sweet n cute update...

loved it...

the valentine's part was cute...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 21



In the canteen...



Priya "that's it Ananya...now how much will you eat???"

Ananya "i am so hungry...and you are interrupting me...let me eat" she said while picking up another samosa...

Priya saw Amita "hey come here...seen you after ages...where were you...???"

Amita "hi Priya...hi Ananya...well I was busy today...i made this cake for my boyfriend"

she showed them the cake...

Priya "wow...love it...it seems yummy...well that's so sweet..."

Amita "what have you made Ananya??"

Ananya looked at her "have you seen my face carefully??"

Amita "what do you mean???"

Ananya "do I look stupid???"

Amita "you think I am stupid??? its love...you dumbo..."

Ananya stopped eating and looked at her "so you mean if anyone is in love they should make a cake???"

Amita "its not that...but you should make something that your boyfriend likes...its love...and believe me Ananya he will love you more for it"

Ananya "really???? hmmm let me think now"

Priya "forget it Ananya...all I know is you are famous for breaking things not making things..." both Amita and Priya laughed...while Ananya glared at them "fine you just wait and watch..."

Ananya quickly left from there and drove straight home... ..

After some time...



Chadha house...

Ananya "didn't you hear what I said??"

the two servants were shocked to see Ananya in the kitchen...but they had to follow her orders and left the kitchen...

Ananya thought of making a cake...

she took the recipe book and began flipping the pages until she found a nice chocolate cherry cake...

"hmmm that looks yummy..." she said "i can make much better cake than that stupid Amita..."

she began looking for the ingredients...and shouted loudly at the servants "you both are so lazy that you can't come in and give me what I want"

Servant "sorry baby...we thought you don't want us in the kitchen..."

Ananya "shut up...now help me...now give me whatever I ask for..."

one by one she mixed the ingredients together...the servants were looking at each other... and about to tell her "Any baby..."

Ananya "i said shut up...i am making something...so don't speak unless I ask you to..." she finally put the cake in the oven...

then washed her hands... "now look I have timed it …..it will stop automatically but please don't take it out unless I come..."

she went in her room... and dialed his no...

"you have to come now...i will see you at the swimming pool..."

Veer "let me sleep Ananya...last night you didn't let me sleep..."

Ananya "i don't know anything...you are coming..."

Veer "but listen..." she disconnected the phone... "this girl never listens" he said to himself...

After some time...

at the swimming pool...

Veer "what was so important that you disturbed my sleep"

Ananya smiled "i made something for you..."

Veer looked puzzled "what??? made??"

Ananya "yes I made cake for you"

Veer couldn't swallow this...it was like a nightmare... "oh no...you made cake???...but..."

Ananya "now come on...try it..." she opened the box...it looked very nice...she decorated with cherries on top...

Veer smiled "wow ...it looks nice...can't imagine Any...you made it..."

Ananya "now stop staring at the cake and eat it..."

Veer was looking around for a spoon...

Ananya "wait...we should celebrate our valentines..." both were sitting near the pool side table...they ordered a knife and two plates...

Veer "i feel so happy that you made cake for me..."

Ananya "you know what...i feel more happy than you...i made it...you know Priya and Amita were laughing at me...now I will show them that I can make much better cake then anybody else..."

Veer "yes...i know my Any is the best..."

the waiter brought knife and plates...

Ananya "ok you cut it..."

Veer "no you made it...you cut it"

Ananya "we can cut it together..."

she came closer to him...both were holding the knife to cut the cake... they tried to cut...it was hard

Ananya "i think cakes were easy to cut...but this one seems like an iron"

Veer "wait I will use my whole strength..." he stood up and placed the knife on the cake, then used full force to cut it...

Ananya was shocked …. "my cake..." she said sadly... "Veer you are not cutting the cake...it seems you are butchering a pig"

Veer "then what should I do...its like a hard stone..."

Ananya "you said hard stone???? I made it so lovingly"

Veer "Any...i didn't mean that...i just..."

Ananya "stop it...i don't want to listen..." she came and tried to cut herself...it was too much for her...angrily she threw the cake in the pool...

Veer "Ananya...what is this??? why did you threw the cake away??"

Ananya "because I didn't make a nice cake...it was too bad"

Veer "who said ??? it was just hard...may be it was sweet like you..."

Ananya "Veer...i can never make a nice cake"

Veer "don't worry I will teach you..." he came closer and hugged her...

_____********

Next day

Chadha house

Mitali was talking on the phone to one of her friends in London... "sure Seema...well I must say Ananya will be very happy to hear this..."

Manmohan "what happened?? you look so happy"

Mitali "you won't believe...you know my friend Seema...she is asking Ananya's hand for her only son...i am so happy...Ananya will live like a queen...they are so rich and nice people..."

Manmohan "i agree...you should ask Ananya"

Mitali "what ask...i will fix a date first and then talk to her...she will be more than happy...i know"

Ananya was getting ready for college...when Mitali entered her room...

Mitali looked at her smilingly "you must look more pretty...let me look at you carefully..."

Ananya "what is it mom...please let me get ready..."

Mitali "i have a good news for you..."

Ananya "what??? you have opened another hotel for me"

Mitali "no Ananya ….we have looked for a nice boy for you...who will keep you like queen in his house..."

_____***************



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Posted: 13 years ago
hey today me first
Nice update Dhanavi 👏
Anu made cake for Veer . so sweet
but unfortunately that wouldn't make nice n Anu was sad 😭
don't worry Anu , veer will teach u nicely
n who is another guy is coming in Anu's life😡
stay away him from Anu
update soon dear
waiting...
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago

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