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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys,
dis is jus my POV of how chee-vam ka tracj shd end...
(p.s.- i'm incudg d character of sanchita, rey's sis, frm myn & appu's (swaronluver666) SS- "aur pyaar ho gaya)
here it goes...

Sharon & Swayam were going to the place were Shivam n his team were celebrating their (so-called) win at foot-loose win!😡😡😡
Sharon saw him smiling & laughing at the dazzlers' loss at the competition... Flashes of the team loosing & blaming her for their loss came into her mind... She turned into her "SHARON RAI PRAKASH- THE KAALI MAA OF ST. LOUIS COLLEGE" mode... She had just 1 MISSION in her life now--
SHE WAS OUT FOR BLOOD & HAVE TANDOORI SHIVAM WHATEVER ON HER MENU!
Swayam noticed this expression on her face & send Shivam a message- "Boy! Shivam... U r sooo going to be dead meat now! PREPARE YOURSELF! Yamraaj tumse khud milne aa rahi hain!"
Shortly after dis msg, Sanchita called Swayam.
He went out as his phone had less network.
Sanchita: Hey Swayam. Kaha hain tu yaar?
Swayam: Hey Sanchi! Mein Sharon ke saath CCD- Bandra (E) main hu! Kya hua? Everythg fyn?
Sanchita: Ya... but! Tu waha kya kar raha hain?
Swayam: Woh hum dono Shivam...
Sanchita: Shivam?😕 She tought of an idea!
Sanchita: Sun.. Sharon ko bol ki woh thoda calm down ho jaaye & mein thodi der main waha aati hu!
Swayam: Nahi Sanchita tum... kaat diya.
He came bak 2 Sharon.
Sharon: Kya hua? Where were u?
Swayam: Woh Sanchita ka phone tha. keh rahi thi, ki mein tumhe thoda calm rakhu tab tak woh aa jayegi!
After 10 mins, Sanchita reached CCD wid the whole LOUIANS GANG! (kriyaansh also😉)
SwaRon: GUYS! TUM SAB YAHA!
Nilesh: Ha Sharon... woh tumse baat karne ke baad na.. hume laga ki hum sab ne tumhe kuch... zyada hi keh diya...
Vicky: Ha Sharon! C, hum log yeh maante hain ki foot-loose main aaj hum haare hain & yeh bhi ki tum... kuch hadh tak isske liye responsible ho.. but i feel.. hume tumhe itna bhi nahi sunana chahiye tha!
Simmi-Rinni: yes Sharon, v r very very sorry!
Sharon feels soo over-whelmed... she pulls all the dazzlers into a group hug!
Sanchita: Thank God! Inki differences toh khatam hui at least!
After sm tym, dey break the hug n c shivam.
Rey: Ab kya karna hain?
Neha: Breaking isski leg.. aur kya?
Vicky: isse toh hum nahi chodenge!
Sanchita: Guys... samajh gaye kya karna hain lekin karein kaise?
After 5 mins..
Kriya: *snaps her fingers* Idea! Sanchita, apna phone de!
Sanchita: 😕
Kriya: Abbey de na!
Sanchita gives Kriya her phone..
Kriya: Rey, aapke paas iss Shivam ka no hain?
Rey: Ha hain! Lo! (handing her his phone) Par tum karne kya waali ho?
Kriya: Shhh! Guys, tum sab abhi chup rehna! Theekh hain! Ek dum chup!
She quickly dials Shivam's no n he picks up her call.
Kriya (in a veryyy SEXY VOICE): Hello! Kya mein mr. Shivam se baat kar sakti hu?
Shivam: Ya speaking!
Kriya: U knw whaaat! I just LUUUVVV ur style! I mean... jis tarah se tumhari team ne foot-loose main taem dazzlers ki chutti kar di, mein toh tumhaari faaannn ban gayi hu!
Every1 present der was shocked at Kriya's reaction!😲 Sab ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye the!
Rey (to Swayam): Sun...
Swayam: Ha...
Rey: Yaar! Itni sweetly aur aisi voice se toh ussne mujhse bhi kabhi baat nahi ki!
Swayam: I know yaar...😆😆😆
Meanwhile, Kriya continued her acting...
Kriya (super sweetly): Acha Suno...
Shivam: ha..
Kriya: Kya tum mujhse mil sakte ho pl? Mein tumse milna chahti hu!
Shivam: Uhh...
Kriya: Pl mana mat karna... (sayg a bit sadly) nahi toh mera dil toot jayega!😆
Shivam: Don't worry babe! Shivam kabhi kisi ladki ka dil toot te hue nahi dekh sakta hain! Mein tumse milne zarur aaonga!
Kriya: REALLY! Thank u sooo much! Acha suno, kaha milna hain... yeh mein tunhe thodi der me msg kar deti hu! Aur ha, wah pahunch ke na, waha tumhe ek blind-fold dikhega! usse pehenlena!
Shivam: Blind-fold? Par..
Kriya: aa aaa aaa... SURPRISE SURPRISE! Ohk.. Byeee.!
She cut the call!
Kriya: Yes! Ab dekhna! Shivam kaise nahi aata!
She turned ard n saw sab log abhi bhi shocked hain!😲
Kriya: Kya hua?
Sanchita: Kriya... OH-MY-GOD!!! U WERE FRAKING AMAZING GIRL!
Sayg dis, she went upto her n hugged her.
Sharon: uh... yeh tumhari hi.. awaaz thi na kriya?
Kriya: yeh sab chodo guys... chalo lets gooo!
All: Kahan?
Kriya: Jahan pe hum logo ne apna new year manaya tha wahan!
Rey: Par kyun?
Kriya: Chalo toh! sab kuch batati hu!
Den soon, she msgd Shivam where to come.
After 30 mins, The Louians Gang reached the same place where dey spent der new year!
Dey all hid at difft places...
After 10 mins, shivam reached der.
He had just taken a few steps, he saw a blind-fold.. n wore it.
Sanchita saw dis from a corner n very quietly sneaked behind Shivam..
Sanchita: Hey! (going closer 2 him): Hey! It's me!
Shivam tried to remove his blind-fold but she stopped him.
Sanchita: No! Y don't v just have (whispering in his ear) some fun...
Shivam: Ohk...
Sanchita: GUYS... ATTACK!
The moment they heard the word attack... Nilesh, Vicky, Amar n Bharat came charging over Shivam n (kinda) kidnapped him in a bori!😆
(kuch yaad aya😉- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMTxOa_MmcY)
Bas... phir kya hona tha!
Shivam ko yaha se maar, waha se aur pata nahi kaha se maar padi poore louians gang se!!!!🤣
sab ne maar-maar ke usski haddi toh kya... ussi ko hi nahi choda!🤣
🤣
Shivam (itna maar khaane ke baad)- bas bhai! maan gaya tum logo ko! winners tum dono ho, hum log toh kuch nahi hain! (going 2wds Sharon) MAATE! JAI MAA KAALI!🤣
he's LITERALLY on his knees n sayg sorry!
Shivam (touchg Sharon's feet): MAATE! MUJHE MAAF KARDO MAATE! MUJHE MAAF KARDO! MEINE AAPSE PANGA LEKAR BAHUT BADI GALTI KI HAIN! KASAM KHAATA HU, AAJ KE BAAD SE MEIN HAR EK LADKI KO APNI BEHEN BANAOONGA MAATE! AUR... AUR KISSI BHI DANCE TEAM KE ROUTINE KO NAHI COPY KARUNGA MAATE!!!🤣🤣
Sag dis, he fainted!
Sharon: Ab isse pata laga...
Swayam: Ki jo bhi...
Rey: St. Louis College se panga lega..
Kriya: Woh chakna chur ho jaayega!
The rest: Egjactly!!
Den dey left...

I hope guys u all lyk it! Srry 4 Shivam ke dialouge ka style but cudn't help it!😆
comments n chappals welcumed!
taniya
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..DamonCrazy.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
AWESOME!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3
awesome its really awesome🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
kaash aaisa sach me hota 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
ps: please write shivams name properly otherwise you will get warning
i had got it for doing the same so i please edit your post and name of the post
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
OH GOD !!!
comments + ache wale high heels k chappal to paren ge hi cuz u lost it... actually i have lost it laughing hardly...and shivam ki dailogue dilvery was pura CREEP style wala... LOVED IT !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ending for chee-vam :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Seriously So FREKKING AWESOME!!! 🤣 And Calling Sharon MAATE!! ROFLMAO!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
so perfect Che-vaam... High 5 from ma side😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
so perfect Che-vaam... High 5 from ma side😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it maate lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Supper cool buddy...hats off to you for thinking sumthing like this...though it wont happen like dat...but still your post was awesome...👏👏⭐️

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