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Posted: 13 years ago
weren't you supposed to update again this week, hmmm??😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
wat is thz dev upto...
if maan knows thz wa doing by DEV then ... DEV ka kya haal ho ga...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superbbb Awesomeee update


next part soon simi😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for further update Simi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Poor Geet. Bt she has Maan n Ronit. Hate Dev n Madhuri. Maan giving courage to Geet! Well written, update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 37

Two days has passed and so far there was no sign of the stalker...no one made any attempts to even make a phone call maybe this was all a prank by someone...In a way, Maan was glad that this happened..Geet was slowly coming back to her normal self now and no longer lived in fear but still it bothered him for not being able to find out who it was in the first place. Even if this was a joke by someone he wanted to find out the real culprit...

His dad was still working on finding Pandayji and he knew once his dad goes behind someone nothing is impossible..he will find out where he is hiding at any cost...but still Maan had a doubt that it wasn't Pandayji...if he was in town then he was sure that police must've found him by now...it wouldn't have been this difficult...

Geet comes and sits next to him with a sad face...he caresses her face..

Maan: what happened?

Geet; I want to go out...I can't sit here anymore...please

Maan: but...the guy

Geet: He didn't make any contacts with us so far...maybe he ran away and also this made me realize how weak I was acting...how could I let someone scare me like that? And that too someone who I don't even know? I am not weak Maan and if that person is real and if that person is Pandayji then I won't let him or anyone scare me anymore...I will fight till the end

Maan: now that is the Geet I know..so

Geet: As long as you are with me..I can handle anything

Maan: So where would you like to go today?

Geet: lets go to dinner and movies?

Maan: okay...lets go then (He brings out his hand..she happily takes it..)
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Dev who had been outside their apartment followed Maan and Geet...he purposely didn't send anything to Geet knowing that Maan is home with her..he smirked at the benefit he has..no one will suspect him at all and that stupid Pandayji will get all the punishment...

His dad, unknown to him, was sharing information with him...he wanted to laugh out loud when his dad started telling him problems that Geet is facing...He felt bad that she is in pain but soon she will realize that they are meant to be together and that he will truly make her happy not Maan...Sometimes you have to go through some pain in order to find that one true happiness...

He saw them going toward the movie theater...he bangs the steering wheel...he smirks at the opportunity...he gets out of the car after 5 minutes...he follows them inside but kept distance between Maan and Geet...he looks at Geet's smile...everything about her was making him crazy...he saw Maan holding her hand which angered him..."You will be mine soon Geet...very soon it is going to be just you and me after that no one will dare to come between us...no one..."

He quickly buys his ticket, going after them...he sits right behind Geet..he smelled her aroma...he kept his one hand on his face to hide his identity...he saw her sari pallu behind the seat...he slowly touches it feeling the fabric in between his fingers...he smiles...
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Geet: Maan you know Hrithik is my favorite actor...I love this movie

Maan: hmmm

Geet: Who is your favorite actor?

Maan: I don't have one..I don't watch movies at all..

Geet(gasps) what? How can you live and not watch a single movie?

Maan: Well you married a boring guy..

Geet: Not a guy a gorilla (she sticks out her tongue)

Maan: In which you are stuck with...(he kisses her cheek...)

Geet (laughs) Yeah I guess I am...(she looks at her side and saw Dev...)
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Dev had placed his hand down from his face forgetting everything as he watched Geet...he hadn't realized it when Geet turned around to look at him..he looks at her with a smile..

"Geet...you are here?" (Maan turns around to find Dev..he smiles at him..)

Maan: Dev what are you doing here?

Dev (looks at Geet and then looks at him with a smile) I came here to watch the movie...my friends said good things about it..so I came to check it out...

Maan: ohh why don't you come and sit with us?

Dev: No bhai..you guys enjoy..I am okay here by myself...

Maan: no way..you have to sit with us...right Geet...(she nodes her head yes...)

Dev (looks at her) umm okay if you guys insist...(he gets up and sits right next to Geet..she gives him a slight smile...Dev puts his arm right next to Geet's elbow to touch her skin..she moves her arm a little...Dev smirks...he didn't know that he would be sitting right next to her...he was happy to be close to her anyway..once in a while he would look at Geet..making her feel uncomfortable but she kept it to herself...

Everyone left the theater once the movie was over...

Maan: Okay Dev...we will go home now

Dev: uhh bro when will you come..you know your real home...everyone is waiting for you..(he says while looking at Geet..)

Maan: Dev you know that I can't..not until mom says it to me herself

Dev: I know but...

Maan: No Dev..try to understand...we will never step inside the house again not until mom comes to get us

Dev (sighs) okay I understand bro...anyways I gotta go..(he hugs Maan...and then quickly hugs Geet before going...he smelled her hair while he was hugging her...he wanted to freeze this moment forever..."until next time Geet...")

Geet hugs Maan right after Dev leaves...

Maan: Geet what happened?

Geet: uhh nothing...("Why do I feel weird with Dev...why do I feel like there is something dark about him..something evil...should I tell Maan? No..I don't want him to think bad of me..maybe its just my imagination after the other guy...I am thinking too much...")
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As soon as Maan and Geet were home...he hugs her from the behind...Geet puts her hand on top of his and turns around...

"what happened..."

Maan: Well we did everything...we went to the movies so now how about we...uhh (he looks at her lips...)

Geet (covers her lips) how about we don't...(she smirks)

Maan: How about we do...(he picks her up...Geet squeals..)

Geet: Maan put me down..

Maan: nope...(he drops her on the bed...and takes out his own clothes...she moves back with a smile...he leans closer to her and pecks her lips...) I missed this smile of yours...

Geet: Well then always keep me smiling...(she winks at him...he kisses her neck moving down slowly...she wraps her arms around his neck as she lays down...he removes her sari pallu and her blouse...she moans his name making him crazy...before she knew it she was in her undergarments...he cups her curves in his hands as he kisses them...)

"I love it when you say my name Geet..." (He bites one of her curve until she was screaming his name...he smirks...she turns him around and looks at him with a revenge...)

"Well then its your turn to say my name..." (she winks and bites his neck...she brings her hand lower and lower until it rested right on top of his manhood...he was hard she could feel it...she smirks...Maan closes his eyes as she pressed his manhood...)

"Ohh Geet..."

He turns her around.."you made a big mistake.."

"Maybe that is what I wanted to do..." (she gives him a sly smile...Maan rips her undergarments off and enters her...she gasps with the sudden jolt...she hugs him tight...)
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Dev breaks the mirror in his room as he remembered Maan touching Geet's hand...

"I need to bring her back to this house...I need to make mom understand...I can't be away from Geet anymore...I need her..."

He thinks of something and smiles..he quickly goes down the stairs to see his mom sitting on the couch with a sad face..he looked around to see if anyone else was home..."perfect..." He goes and sits next to her..he puts his hand on her shoulder..

Dev; what happened mom you look sad...

Madhuri: Nothing..just thinking about Maan...

Dev ("perfect she brought up the subject herself..") awww I know...this house seems so empty without bro...

Madhuri: its all because of that Geet..I can't believe I even agreed to get them married

Dev: mom don't say that..its not her fault...even she suffered along with us...

Madhuri: Even you started taking her side?

Dev: I am not taking anyone's side..you know today I saw them at the movie theater...

Madhuri: really? how is my Maan? Is he happy? How does he look?

Dev: Relax mom both are happy...I think you should reconsider your decision...everyone is sad without them...

Madhuri: No...if I see Geet

Dev: mom think about it..if you say yes..then you will get Maan bhai back in this house and as for Geet you can make her do whatever you want...think about it..she will not be able to say no to you...and she had proven that before too

Madhuri (thinks about it) maybe you are right...(she smiles..Dev smiles too..."at least this way she will be home with me and it will be easier for me to separate them...wow Dev you are so smart...")
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Posted: 13 years ago
stupid Dev and Madhuri !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really Dev? REALLY??! All this hatching and plotting just to lay your dirty filthy hands on Geet?! 😡
(wow Simi, you're amazing writing abilities make me want to murder this imaginary guy😆)

Aww I loved the romance scene with Maan and Geet. She's right, as long as they are together, nothing can go wrong...unless of course, you Simi, decide to become an evil overlord or something 🤣
Edited by XXaquafireXX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now Geet should tell Maan about Dev. Wht she feel when he near her. They going back to mansion.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum dear
superb
loved it
bas***d dev
and madhuri i ll kill her dear
update soon

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