Hum tumhare hei tumhare sanam,3,5 updated

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello everyone..well howz ur weekend going on...

okie just am getting bugged with the raaz.. so thought of some entertainment for u guys...

chalo.. im not discusiiong about any raaz even in my FF.. becoz i dont want to... just this story is after the raaz is revealed.. I wish something like this happens..

The raaz is revealed.. and Bani is shocked out of wits.. to know abt the truth.. Jai and Roshini are in front of her... Jai is not able to face bani or talk anything...just has his eyes downcast.. in guilt.. Roshini is afraid but at the same time she is happy to see bani and jai in that particular sitation.Bani is shell shocked even to react, and keeps staring at Jai, not bothered about rshini's presence..aheads towards jai and keeps looking at him with tears rolling down her cheeks. Then bani gives a cold look at roshini and in a very stiff voice asks her to leave the room. Roshini leaves with an evilish smile..giving to both of them.

Jai lifts his head and looks at bani with great difficulty, and he cant see bani like that. He says " bani.. mei ".. then bani just turns away and leaves the room crying her heart out. Jai keeps saying " bani ruk jao, plzz mera baat suno.." Bani is walking in the corridor while everything about the raaz, the park road related every thing, the way jai saved her in that godown, he yelling at her and saying they wont see each others face ever after, and how they 3 sisters came upto walia mansion,almost everything past flashes in her eyes..She is totally dumbfounded even to react for anything and come to senses...

she keeps walking not even realising where she is heading to goes into the garden and finally ends up near the small water pool ... she bends to look at her reflection in the water and keeps asking herself.. why this had to happen... she thinks" Yeh waqt ne mujhe kaisi mod pe lake khade kar diya, jaha se mujhe kuch nazar nahi aata hei, jis insaan se mer shaadi jin halaat mei huyi hei, usse nikal kar jab mei use apni zindagi ka hissa bana diya, jise apne aap se bhii chahne lagi,, kaise mei maanloo ki usi ne meri maa kaa..she just closes her eyes as the tears roll down.. Bani is in a state not able to control herelf, while she is about to turn away she slips and falls into the water... Jai who is looking out of the window.. looks at bani... and runs down into the garden to save her.. He jumps into the pool and carries her out of it and places her on the ground.. He keeps shouting Bani.. bani.. and tries to wake her up... slowly.. bani opens her eyes... and keeps looking at jai.. Jai says bani.. tu yeh kya kar rahi hei.. tu jaant se isse tumhari jaan jaa sakti hei.. and bani shrugs ff his hands gently and gets up.. Jai is worried whats going on in Bani's mind.. not able to understand anything he stops her by her hand and asks " bani kuch toh bolo, tum kyun aise chup ho.. " bani just says " mujhe akele chod dijiye Mr. walia " and goes away from there...

Jai is left heartbroken and thinks " Mei jaanta hoon bani, tum pur kya beet rahi hei is waqt mujhe nadaza hei, woh mere zindagi ka bahut bada galti hei , jo mei tumse har haal mei chupana chahta tha, pur taqdeer ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha..., aaj is mod pe khada kar diya hum dono ko.., jaha se peeche mud kar bhi nahi dekh sakte ya naa hi aage ka rastha maloom hei na nazar aata hei..." and he just sits there... crying his heart out...

will continue after i have my lunch...

sorry guys bear with me .. my nephew and niece dont lent me do my work... got to go...

catch ya back...

luv ,

savi

Edited by gumisavi - 19 years ago

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SIKinLoVE thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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then?!?!?!?!?! cont soon.. luved it 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, THAT WAS VERY GOOD BUT NPLZZZZZZ CONT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 oh nooooooo y did u stop...pls pls cont. soon! ur doing a gr8 job!!
😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow hun!!...that was fab!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awsome... u didn't reveal anything but all that u wrote is bang on target of what i expect to happen .... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwww great job 👏
eagerly waiting for the next part!!!
love,
Aragon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cont soon.. that was gr88.. how's bani gonna react?!?!?!?! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Awesome please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow great start... pls do cont soon

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