SS:The compromise,a wedding t is-upd-Pt7 pg35(20/3 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushi-la

omg i loved the OS!!! I hope you are continuing because i want to hear the music that its time for them to hear now 😛😆

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Originally posted by: CrazyAbtTV18

it was awesome..hope u are thinking of continuing it



Originally posted by: adeeti10

Lovely! Please continue! 😃



Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Beautifully written script.Loved Arhi conv.Arnav married Khushi 2 save Anjali's marriage.How wil Shyam react now?Will Arhi hav a romantic married life?Cant wait 2 read more.plz post d next part soon



aww thanks all of u🤗..
i didn't plan to continue it as u know today's episode would be out and a different something might happen..
but i was really thinking of whether to write the reception of the news by everyone..i'll think about it..

lol i have so much home work to do and i am writing these!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Brilliant ! please do continue...😍🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
LOVED IT! woahhh!!! A bit rushed, BUT I DON'T MIND! MUAHAHAHAHA!!

Can you continue to turn it into an SS/ or an FF (a wishful heart!)

would love to be updated!

PM me ur reply!

Love,
shalu. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh that was a brilliant OS to suit the current track!! Hope it happens this way!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Ok i listened to u guys and wrote a bit more😆..well this is short, and as IPK is about to start I'll continue later..probably tonight itself..😳

Part 3


They stepped through the front door and the noise coming from the living room reached their ears.

A continuous chanting of 'Akash' 'Payal/bhabhi' were growing louder and louder as well as the laughter and they looked at each other almost startled out of their reverie until then.

'Arnavji' khushi started, "how r we going to walk in there? Amma, buaji OMG babuji! Arnavji what am I going to do?" Khushi started getting more panic stricken by the minute.

Arnav almost smiled to himself that the crazy girl hadn't actually panicked at all when she had to actually sign the papers or to get married and here she was panicking about what other people would think. And then Arnav's smirk widened when he thought about the shock he was going to that b a s t a r d who thought could play with the lives of both women he cared about.

And just like that he looked at Khushi and held her shoulders and turned her towards himself and looked straight in her eyes and 'Khushi, everyone inside there are our family. And if it makes u feel better, nani and di already had been hinting at this to me. So I don't think u'll have anything to worry on that. As for ur family, I guess they will be happy u and Payal will be together. And for everyone else who cares?'

Khushi who was starring at his brown warm eyes simply nodded, too overcome by emotions to speak.

And together they walked forward to the living room and Arnav stepped in front of her covering her from their view.

He looked up at the entire festive atmosphere and how Akash and Payal were doing the ring searching game and how everyone was cheering for the, and his di was in a corner phone in her hand and nani hovering over her. She was probably trying to reach me, Arnav realized remembering how he switched off his mobile as soon as got to the registrar's office.

And then they saw him! And all noise came to an abrupt halt and he saw the ring held by Akash and Payal fall back in to the milk as Khushi came and stood beside him, his equal, his partner. He saw his sister lowering the phone and starring at them in the corner of his eye, but at that moment his whole concentration was focused at that one man who started this.

Shyam was starring wide eyed for a second and the next his eyes grew cold and his face contorted in murderous rage as he looked at them and when his eyes fell on Khushi and her managlsutral and sindur, his fists clenched in open fury. Arnav felt Khushi clutching at his hand and almost shrinking in to him as she felt that animalistic gaze on her. And Arnav squeezed her hand back reassuring her silently that he was there.

And then the silence was broken by 'Chote!! Khushiji' 'Hay bhagawan!' 'Hai re Nandakisor! Sanka devi ye kya kiya tune!' 'Kusiiee' 'Bhai!' 'pattee sari aur arnav bituwa!''OMG Nannav & Khushi ji' all this jumbled together and Arnav faced them all unfazed.

And after the din didn't seem to calm down he shouted 'Enough!' and immediately everyone grew silent and stared in shock and he continued, "Let me talk! And then u can start on ur 101 questions!"

And everyone continued to stare expectantly, arnav realized just how much of a corner he had backed himself to, what was he to say? That they loved each other and got married? And what was he going to give as reasons for not telling anyone. And then he decided to hell with all of it, he was Arnav Singh Raizada he could do whatever he wanted and simply said 'As u all can see Khushi and me are married. And that is all there is to it!' and he looked straight at the man he had called jijaji for the past 3 years and said 'I hope no one has any objections to it? Cz even if they had now it is too late!'

And at this Anjali came towards them and asked 'Chote, why couldn't u at least tell me?' and he just looked at her and slowly took hold of both of her hands and said 'di urself told me this morning, that there was no guarantees about tomorrows and let alone tomorrow there is no guarantee even about even today. Therefore whenever something comes to my heart I should say it and do it. And I just did'

And hearing it Anjali teared up and smiled through her tears realizing what her chote was trying to tell her, and then she quickly turned to an unnaturally quiet and submissive looking Khushi dressed beautifully in all of the bridal finery, looking like a blushing new bride and she touched both of their cheeks lovingly, and encompassed both of them in a hug, no longer interested in questioning why they had done what they did. All that mattered to her was that her chote was finally in love and he had found a wonderful life partner who loved him just as much.

And seeing Anjali accepting them lovingly seemed to break the spell that held everyone in check and quickly everyone surrounded them and as Arnav seemed unapproachable they started questioning a completely flustered Khushi.

and will PM later ok..right now it is IPK time:-)
so for now please do comment and like:-)

part 4 : Click here for part 4


Another take on the same promo + an article in : SS: Living a nightmare(based on wedding promo)


If u r interested in any of my other work😳
Another Chance at Love
Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
loved ittt :):):) do continue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
I loved it :) the scenes will play out as you have mentioned :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update loved it arnav is the boss he is to good loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Read all 3 parts together! It was delightful!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
can i ask one question plzz...what does this( OS,TRP,) means

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