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congrast one new thrd👏
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Congo for new thread jyothi dear
Hope u make more :D
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Congrats on the new thread...

waiting for update...



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lovely update dear
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thanku so much friends for ur encouragement n support.
this is the second thread of DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER..
omg.. i cant believe this.. i am so so happy...
thanku u everyone for ur wonderful comments n likes.




LOVE U ALL.. 🤗
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Chapter 24:


NOTE: add 'maneetmaneet' for pms. or tell me i will add.


Meanwhile in the car:


yash-sudha in front. Yash is driving. Geet-maan in back seat n karthik n krishna sat in the back seat of maan n geet.


Di saw geet is trying to call someone but they r not picking the phone.

Geet what happened? Kisko call kar rahi ho? Asked di.

Di dekho I am calling shanti from 1 hr. she is not picking the phone told geet.

Geet she must be busy. College gayi hogi told di.

Nahi di now time is 3 n her college is only upto 2 n how much busy she might be she will pick my call for sure. Pata nahi kya hua usko told geet again trying to call her.

But now it came as switched off.

Dekho ab switch off aaraha hain told geet.

Maan understood her tension n karthik's ears became sharp when he heard shanti's name.

Geet kuch nahi hoga shayad di is rite she might be busy told maan.


But geet is not convinced her face shows the restlessness about her friend.

Maan placed his hands on her shoulders n geet rested her head on his shoulder. Maan knows that geet loves shanti a lot. Treats her as sister. Even shanti gets slight fever also geet cant tolerate.

Calm down geet. Kuch nahi hua shanti she is fine told maan.

Geet didnt talk anything she just closed her eyes feeling peace in his arms. After 30 min of journey they reached caves. Maan saw geet is sleeping.

Di, jiju u guys go. We will come later told maan.

They nodded n went in. all of them went in leaving maan n geet alone.

Geet...

no response.

He gently carassed her hair n called again.

Geet utho yaar called maan lovingly.

Geet moved a little n slightly opened her eyes n saw maan smiling. She too smiled a little.

How r u feeling now?? asked maan.

Fine maan told geet n rested her head on his lap.

Geet we reached caves dont u want to come? Asked maan.

Geet nodded her head in no.

geet got up n maan cupped her cheek n told

geet dekho, I am sure shanti is fine if she has any problem then she will inform u for sure right?

Geet nodded in yes.

If she is not picking her phone means she might be busy in college. Or else her mobile might be in silent. See when she see her mobile then she will call u. uss waqt tum usko bohot daanth na thik hain?

Geet smiled at him feeling relaxed. Then she saw no one is there in the car.

Maan sab log kaha hain? Asked looking here n there.

They went inside as this sleeping beauty is sleeping teased maan.

Maaann n she slapped on his chest.

But maan held her hands n kissed her fingers.

Never be sad geet, I cant see u like that told maan staring her eyes.

Geet could see the love n concern in his eyes. She hugged him n told never maan I will be always happy. When u r beside me then I dont have any trouble. Bachpan se yahi hua na jab mujhe koi bhi problem ho main tumare paas hi aati thi. Ab main hamesha ke liye tumare paas hoti hu told geet.

Ha geet hamesha hamesha ke liye told maan n hugged her tight.

Maan chalo hum bhi chalte hain. They all will be waiting for us told geet.

Maan n geet went inside the caves n saw gang waiting for them.

Bacha tum thik tho ho na? Asked di.

Ha di I am fine told geet n hugged her.


They climbed the rock cut stair which leads to kanheri caves.




Once they climbed all the steps n reached the entrance of the caves which is so beautiful. Geet is very excited n told chalo guys andar chalte hain. Its so beautiful.

Others smiled n her n went in.





They all started exploring the places, enjoying, teasing, pulling each others leg. Both the girls are busy in giving poses at different places n boys r clicking their photos. They captured each n every moment.


They got into the small train where they can go from one place to another in the caves. The greenary all around, the old monuments, there e many inscriptuons and epigraphs r present. They went to one of the cave which consist of buddhist vihara which is so pleasant. They all did meditation for few minutes they forgot all the tiredness n felt so relaxed.





They reached one of the cave which is a bit dark. Using this oppurtunity maan pulled geet aside n pinned to the wall. Geet is shocked with his sudden action.

Maan what r u doing?

I am getting bored. I want to do something interesting said maan n winked at her.

Maan leave me all will come.

Come on geet, no one is there here. Their faces r inches away his breath is falling on her lips sending shivers down her spine. Geet cluched maan's shirt tight.

What happened geet? Asked maan huskily.

Geet is breathing heavily. She hugged maan tightly. Maan too reciprocated her hug n kissed her head.

U know shona, I will forget whole world when u r near me told maan.

I was afraid maan very afraid when I realised my feelings for u told geet.

Why geet? Mujhse darr.

Ha maan. U r my very good friend from childhood, u were there in each n every moment of my life. When I came to know about my feelings mujhe laga if u dont love me. What f our friendship will end due to my...

nahi geet kuch mat bolo. Even I was also in the same dielama. But...

what maan? Asked geet.

U should not get angry. Then only I will tell told maan.

Bolo maan, main apni maan se kabhi nahi naraaz ho sakti hu told geet.

Actually when pari talked to u in the canteen I was there only.

KYA??

ha geet, then I saw tears in ur eyes. Then I followed u. u went to KM n called shanti. I listened what all u told to shanti told maan feeling guilty.

Geet smiled at him n told look at me maan.

Maan looked into her eyes n saw unconditional love for him.

Geet u r not angry. Right??

No maan. Suddenly geet pouted, maan saw that n asked kya hua geet?

Tumne hamari baat sunli, iska matlab u know that I will say yes when u proposed me.

Maan smiled cheekily n told yes geet I know.

Hmm agar mujhe pehle pata hota tho I would have teased u. I missed that chance.

Hahaha geet, maan singh khurana jho bhi karta hain perfect hota hain.

Ahahaha bade aya perfetionist.

Even now also I want to do something perfect n glared at her lips.

Geet followed his gaze n slapped on his arm n told thoda sharam karo. Public place mein ho gaye ho tum. Chi chi babaji dekha isko besharam hogaya hain.

Arey geet dekho koi nahi hain yaha pe. Sirf ek. Plzz asked maan making baby face.

Nahi pehle chodo mujhe.

Nahi told maan stubbornly.

Maan chodo told geet faking serious face.

Maan left her.

Thats good boy told geet.

Maan turned other side making baby angry face.

Geet looked here n there n pecked on his lips n ran from there.

Maan touched lips n smiled n murmured pagli.

He too ran behind her n caught by her waist n asked arey yeh perfect nahi hain. Thik se do na.

Geet wriggled to get out of his grip but he held her tight.

Chodo maan plz.

Maan dont want her feel more embrassed he left her. Geet ran from there immediately.

After that they all saw whole place n left from there. It was getting dark.

All of them went to hotel n relaxed for some time. It is around 8 they all decided to have dinner.


They went to nearby restaurent n had dinner. After that they went to gateway of india in a car.


When they reached there as it is night as they were in awe seeing the beauty of the surrounding, every where light n people around with different countries. They all sat on one of the bench n enjoying the cool breeze n the water around.






They sat there talking to each other, maan-geet, yash-sudha stealing glances by time to time.


Its almost 11 in the night even they dont want to go from there n no one is there all the people left from there. Only this gang is left. Its very peaceful there so Maan hugged geet from back n sat there peacefully having their love in their arms. Even sudha-yash is also in the same position on the other side. After sometime n its already very late they all decided to go.


All of them were about to go they heard a scream of a girl who is running n few men are chasing her. She is sweating n panting heavily. Her face is covered with tears. She is very exhausted n not able to run, then she saw the gang there n coming towards them. But seeing one person there she forgot all her worries n smile crept her lips. She screamed KRISHNAAA n fainted. Before she hit the ground krishna ran to her n held her by her waist n hugged her.


When he saw her running towards them first he didnt recognise her. But when she came nearer his legs automatically moved forward n he is very very shocked to see her in this condition. A sweet, bubbly n fun loving girl who knows only to smile now she is all in tears. When she was about to faint he held her.


Krishna is patting her cheeks but she is not at all reacting. He was hell scared to see her condition. He felt pain seeing her n anger who is responsible for her condition.


All others rushed to them n saw that girl in krishna's arms. He is patting her cheek but no use. He made her sit on the nearby bench n sprinkled water on her face.

Sweety get up. Utho sweety.

Suddenly few men came n told hey u give her to us.

Krishna looked at them angrily.

Why??

its none of ur business just give her.

Get lost from here n tell ur boss that she is with krishna kasyap.

We dont care n one of the men came forward n is about to touch her maan punched him on his face n told tumne suna nhi usne kya kaha. Get lost from here or else should I call police.

We wont leave u saying so they all left from there.

Immediately krishna took her in his arms n rushed to the car.

Maan drive to hospital.

All of them followed them.

Krishna kept her head on his lap n patting her hair n he had tears in his eyes. Geet sat beside him n asked bhai dont worry she will be fine. We r going to hospital na.

Krishna looked at her n told see yeh kya haalat banaya isne apne aap ka. Maine kaha tha isko india na aane ke liye. Par meri baat sunti hi nahi. Ab dekho kya hua.

N his eyes r red due to anger.

Bhai aap shaant ho jayiye. Who is she bhai.

Her name is preeti. London mein meri junior.


Precap: what happened to that girl?? 😕

is she safe?? 😕

gang in disc enjoying valentines day... 😳


hii friends I am here with part 24. hope u all liked it.

Guys this girl is new entry n she is a positive character. She plays major role in this FF.

plz plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT. i request all of u to comment. pleeejjj.


love

-jyothi.

part 25 & 26: page 11

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY FRIENDS.










Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz on da thread dear!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dat was an awesum part..
Nw wat happened to shanthi..!
Luvd maneet's cute nhok-jhok..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update

poor maan

bechare ko perfect KISS bhi nhi mila😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
i really really loved it...
but who is preeti...wht happened to shanti...why she is not picking d phone...everything going over ny head...sooo much suspense...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

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