~~ Love Ke Side Effects~~(Part-10*Pg-47)

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Adnan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: KulBin
hey Adil Superb dear.... 👏
Just too good.... 😛 Wat a story..... 👏
Angad & Kavya r simply amazing.... cute... 😉
plz cont soon.... 😊

Hey thanks alot Kulbin....ur comments...encouraged me alot...hopefully i wud continue 2morrow..now...😳

Niki...thanks 4 ur comments dear..😊

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: fakhra
sorry adi.....ye story page aapka hai.....aur mai post kare ja rahi hoon......ii m sooooo sorry........plzz forgive me........... 😭 😭 😭

Itz ook...Mehreen....no need 4 sorry......once again Congo😉.....May u get wat u want in ur lyfe 😃

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Adnan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: rajeev1
😆 😆 ..haan bahut kuch parti hon...specially jokes..hehe 😉 ...

o sorry....rajeev ki jagah sujal likh dia.... 😛

Yahan jokes kahan miltay hai apko😕 woh alag baat hai agr apko mero story joke lagti hai😆 aur Rajeev...Sujal..same hai itz ok...😊

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

i know ur best frnd 😛i m lucky to have u as my best frnd😊hehe adi tum kabhi khuch seekh gaye ho not bad😉hehe main aur mera idea pata nahi kaha se aatey hai 😆haila adi kis se inspired tha 😆

wah adi u made my day ab plsssssssssss us tushar ko jaldi mat lana story main pls pls pls pls😃

ab tum ho tareef ke kabil to tareef to kareygey hi 😛

U r not i am lucky tats final...kitni dafa is baat par fight karoogi..no more arguement newayz..well ur ideas rock......👏aur...HAILA Sur tumhein nahi pata k Angad ka haila kis say inspired tha....😉 n don't worry Tusshar is not cumming bac till da last part....😆 aur...tareef utni kiya karoo jitni digest hojaye lolz

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Krishana Tulsi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#95

plz plz plz continue!...its reali gud...!!! 👏 👏

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jyothi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#96

adi sorry 4 the late comments.i am really happy that u have started a new fic. must tell uthe intro and the 1st two parts r awsome plz cont soon waitin to read the next part. 👏

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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Adildagr8

U r not i am lucky tats final...kitni dafa is baat par fight karoogi..no more arguement newayz..well ur ideas rock......👏aur...HAILA Sur tumhein nahi pata k Angad ka haila kis say inspired tha....😉 n don't worry Tusshar is not cumming bac till da last part....😆 aur...tareef utni kiya karoo jitni digest hojaye lolz

hehe fight karna tumehi ne to seekhaya hai 😆

haila adi i know tum kissey inspired ho😆

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😛tushar ko pls last part main bhi mat lao beecharey ko laney se phelay mar dalo😉uff main bhi kya kya socney lagi hoon marney le baarey main😆

adi tareef to hum kareygey ab yeah tumahra prob hai ki tum ussey kaisey digest kartey ho😛

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kriti mehera

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Posted: 19 years ago

#98

adi i just love the way u r representing kavya & angad. the cute fights between girls & boys r gr8
plz continue soon

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#99

LOVE KAY SIDE EFFECTS
(Part- 3)

Recap:Rajeev n Kashish....knew eachother....they were in love at a point of tyme...Angad..n Kayva....meet...Anjali..n Kripa...they both Kashish n Rajeeva along...

Kashish falls on Rajeev....they both see each other...both r lost....in another world...in same manner they get up..widout..getting off there eyes 4rm each other.....Kashish....chain..is....stuck in Rajeev...collar button...Kashish is trying hard...is get it...free..but...still she is..looking in Rajeev eyes....
Kashish is after much struggle is able toh take her chain off da button....Rajeeev is abt to leave...wen Kashish says..
Kashish:tum yahan..
Rajeev:oh tum mujay jaanti hooo..i thought...
Kashish:Rajeeev...
Rajeev:haaan i am Rajeev...good u remmeber me mainay toh socha kab kya bhool gayi hogayi..
Kashish:kyun har bar jab hum miltay hai ek hi baat k baray mein baaat karna zaroori hai...
Rajeev:humaray darmiyaan aur baat karnay ko hai hi kya...
Kashish:tumsay baat karna fazool hai...bye..(she is abt to leave wen Rajeev hold her wrist n stop her)
Rajeev:nahi baat us baray mein...
Kashish:tum yahan kya kar rahay hooo
Rajeev(looks arnd):yeh coffee shop hai...yahan koi bhi aasakta hai...
Kashish:jaanti hooon...aur saaath mein..yeh bhi k tumhein coffee passand nahi hai..
Rajeev:hmmmm not bad....tumhein abhi bhi yaad hai mujay kya passand hai kya nahi..
Kashish:not again...
Rajeev:ok.....well mein yahan kisi say milnay aya tha...aur tum
Kashish:i came just wid sum frndz..
Rajeev(smiles):soo r u going to ask me to join u..
Kashish(smiles bac):no i am not..
Rajeev:gr8....tats means i can...chalooo where r ur frndz..
Kashish:tum nahi sudhrooday...
Rajeev:tumhein kaha tha...k puri zindagi saath rahoogi toh shyad sudhar jayooo...but...tum nahi mani..
Kashish:Rajeeev...chalein..
Rajeev:sure..
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They walk to Anjali n Kripa table...n Angad n Kayva sees Rajeev...
Angad:yaar..yeh bro kahan say agay...
Kayva:mainay toh tujay phelay hi kaha tha..k humein yahan nahi ana chaiye...
Angad:chal jaldi bye bol..
Kayva:ok grlz bye....humein ek imp kaam yaad agyaa...we wud meet to again...
Kripa(sad):app log jaa rahay hai..
Angad(disappoited):haan jana paray gaaa
Anjali:whats this tum aye bhi late aur jaa bhi jaldi rahay hooo
Kayva:ghussa kyun hoti hooo har baaat par....
Anjali:mein ghussa horahi hooo....tum nahi jaa rahay bus mainay keha diya...
Kayva(lost):hum kahin nahi jaa rahay Anjali nay keha diya naa
Angad:chal Kayva..bro is cumming
Anjali:bro?????????????
Kashish:Hi...Guyz...
(Angad n Kayva hiding there faces....)
Angad:mar gay...
Kripa:jee kuch kaha
Angad:nahi...
Anjali:kahan thi tum...
Kashish:woh i lost my way...newayz...meet..Rajeev..
Anjali:Rajeev..
Kashish:haan woh wen i went to Paris we met there...
Kripa(enquiring):MET????????
Kashish:office mein saath kaam kartay thay..
Anjali:ohh i c...
Kashish:Rajeev...this is Anjali...n she is is Kripa...n..these 2...(looking at Angad n Kayva..n they both look at Rajeev n giv a huge smile)
Anjali:yeh...(going to introduce)
Rajeev(interups):this is Angad...n he is Kayva..
Kripa(surprised):appko kaisay pata
Rajeev:meet my brothers...Kashish..
Kashish:yeh tumharay bhai hai...
Rajeeev:jeee....meray bhai..
Angad:Hi Bro
Kayva:Hi bhaiyaaa..
Rajeev:yeh zaroori kaam tha...
(They all talk alot....n pull eachother leg.....)
SONG AT DA BACKGROUND)
Kashish
(Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai) - 2
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin
Kisi ne yeh maana nahin
Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin
Kisi ko bataana nahin
Dard chhupa hai kahan
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai

Rajeev
Tune mujhse vafaa nahin ki
Tujhko kaise vafaa milegi
Tune mujhko dard diya hai
Tujhko kaise davaa milegi

Kashish
Seene mein uthte hai armaan aise
Dariya mein aate hai toofan jaise
Kabhi kabhi khud hi maajhi
Kashti ko dubota hai
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai

Rajeev
Kaante chunkar tera daaman
Phoolon se main bhar jaaoonga
Isse badi sazaa kya hogi
Maaf tujhe main kar jaaoonga
Aa, eh aah

Kashish
Hogi kisi ko pehchaan kaise
Pyaar mein hote hain purbaan kaise
Humko yeh maaloom na tha
Pyaar bhi ek samjhauta hai
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin
Kisi ne yeh maana nahin
Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin
Kisi ko bataana nahin
Dard chhupa hai kahan

Rajeev
(Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai) - 2
(Rajeev...is constantly staring Kashish where as Kashish is avoiding a eye contact wid him...Rajeev...sees this n stops staring her)
Rajeev:sooo shall we leave
Kashish:hmmmmm ok...
Kripa:phir kab miloogay ( to Angad)
Angad:well..pata nahi...
Anjali:no neeed..to meet again..
Angad:app maan gayi...Congo Kayva...
Anjali:shutup...
Kayva:how abt 2morrow dinner..
Kripa:gr8...theek hai..we wud b there..
They all r saying good byes...whereas Rajeev n Kashish r talking on a side..
Rajeev:sooo tum arahi hooo kal...
Kashish:pata nahi......ghar par bahut kaam hai...
Rajeev:hmmmm....mein wait karooonga..
Kashish:Rajeev......y don't u forget me
Rajeev(smiles):meray samnay kharai hokar tum yeh keha rahi hooo...tum nahi bhi hoti tumhara ehass har waqt saath rehta hai..mujay samjh nahi ata mein tum par ghussa karoon ya apnay app par.....jab tum mujsay pyar nahi karti kyun aaj bhi meri dil kehta hai k u love me...
Kashish:Rajeev...i don't love u...
Rajeev:hmmm i know....u r lieing
Angad:bhaiya chalein...
Rajeev:yeah...ok bye Kashish....(he walks to da car)
Kashish(thinks):kyun mujay sa lag raha hai k koi bahut preicous cheez mujsay door jaa rahi hai...mein kisi ko kho rahi hooon.
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Rajeev:how do u know..these 2 grlz..
Kayva(confused):woh bhaiya kal...
Angad:hey..Kayva...hum Anjali aur Kripa ko usi tarah jaantay hai...jaisay..bro Kashish ko...wat say
Rajeev(smiles):good answer...ok...
Angad(mischeivously):bro Kashish is not bad...
Rajeev:i know...sooo..kya karein..
Kayva:shadi horahi hai uski..
Angad:soo sad..
Kavya:toh bhaiya..Archie...say...i mean Archie bhabhi say baaat hogayi...
Rajeeev:she is not ur bhabhi guyz..
Angad:bro u said...app shadi karoogay..
Rajeev:hmmm woh toh karoonga..
Kayva:kab....i mean...Archie nahi toh..
Rajeev:shadi mayb isi weeek karoonga..kidooos..
Angad(shocked):Bro...kon hai..
Kayva:bhaiya...humein nahi bataoogay..
Rajeev:phelay ussay toh batanay do k...mein ussay shadi kar raha hoon...
Angad:wahooo....bro is in love...
Rajeev:pata nahi...
Kayva:kya pata nahi..
Rajeev:woh bhi mujsay pyar karti hai k nahi..
Angad:Bhaiya...apsay toh kisi ko bhi pyar hojaye..
Rajeev(blushes):chalooo...enuf....bus...
Kayva:bhaiya u r blushing..
Rajeev:tum bataoooo...r u serious abt these grlz...
Angad:bro don't say grlz..mein toh Anjali ki wajah Kripa..
Kayva:but she is interested..in u...
Angad:but...
Kayva:she is nice...
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TAT NITE
All 6 of them r thinking abt each other......love is in da air...
Anjali(thinks):Kayva is a idoit..he is too stupid to b wid..but......he is cute...itna bhi bura nahi hai....(smiles)
Kripa(thinks):Angad.....is too good....he is sooo handsome...he is attitude da way he talk...i love him....(blushes)
Kashish(thinks):Rajeev..still love me...but....i can't b wid him...(sighs)
Kayva(thinks):Anjali ka ghussa Anjali ka naraaz hona...Anjali...ka hasna....i am in love...
Angad:Kripa...nahi yaar...lekin....y not....she is beautiful she has all wat i wanted in my lyfe partner...
Rajeev:Kashish....pyar mein saaath rehna zaroori nahi hai....mein pyar ka matlab toh nahi jaanta par ab humaray saath joo bhi hoga woh pyar hai..kyun pyar ki maney(meaning) saath rehnay ya na rehnay say badal nahi jatay
(SONG IN DA BACKGROUD)
Khoyi khoyi si dhemi dhemi si
Thori ankhaeee thori si muskarati
Do dilo ki hai izzzat
Mera naam hai mobbhat

Bheegay sapnay keechi aaankein
Chooti chooti dil ki baatein
Kehti hai yeh zindagi ki
Kaisi hai dewaaangee
Koi rehta hai aaahatoon k sharay
Chu looon toh sanasahat
Mera naam hai mobbhat

Kuch tareerain likhtay rehna
Apnay ghar mein chaltay mein rehna
Anjani baaton mein bhi hoti hai dil ki lagi
Sukhay lamhon mein barishoon ki kanray
Hoonton pay hai sharaaat
Mera naam hai mobbhat..

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Here da part endz guyz...
Itz a short one...
But i am really busy...soo sorry...
Dedicated...to...Sur..n Farah
PLZ DO COMMENT
Luv
Adi

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#100

awesomeeeeeee part adi bhai...n yayyyyy-i m da 1st one 2 comment-mein aasay khuch ho rahi hoon jaise koi gold medal jeeta ho---lol...newayz...-jokes apart---ths part was teriffic....it seemed like dat it ended in a sec.....but nevertheless....it was jus superb.....its soo kewl how rajeev a liek he ll get married in a week...lol...n da bride- kashish still duzn't noe abt it...cant wait 4 dese 7 dayz 2 pass....n da best thing is tusky z away----hope he NEVER CUMZ BACK.... 😆 keep it up---BRAVO!!!!!!!!! 😃