Confession Ss (Love Takkrarr) part 8

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~Flashbacks~
...Buaji just kept on knocking silently on Manvi's door. But all u could hear was manvi cursing the person outside. Manvi couldn't bear the sound of knocking anymore. So she stomped out of bed and headed for the door. She looked like she was going to murder the person outside. As she opened the door and said kaun hai beh. It was then when she noticed buaji starting at her. Buaji had dragged manvi with her to the balcony where no-one could hear them. 'Tumne kyun hamari zindagi bigarna chahti hoon,poore parivaar ko jagaana chahti hoon kya? Jabse ayein ho, usdin se hamari need karabe ho gayein hain!!. Tum sab problem ki jaar ho, pehli Virat ko jail mein dala, phir tumne inder ko barkaya case larne keliye jab tum janti hoon ki woh kisike samne bina stammer karke bool nahi sakta!!!!!! Buaji inder chachu yeh case lar saktein hain. 'BAS BAHUT HOGAYA!!!! Tume yeh alarm band karo aur sabko soonedoo. Buajis words had made Manvi's eyes watery. And as buaji walked out the room she had noticed Virat behind her. She had realised that Virat had heard everything and didn't come to take her side. This had made tears fall from manvis eyes. As virat had looked inside Manvi's room he had seen manvi standing still with tears trickling down her bright red cheeks. They both looked deeply into each others eyes. It was very hard for him stopping himself from wiping her tears and walk away. This had made manvi hurt even more and remembered the last time she had put on a alarm. They way he came an assured her that he will wake her up before 8 o clock so she dosent miss her breakfast. She thought to herself that she has hurt him very badly which made him go to this extreme. She went and sat in the balcony on a bean bag staring at the stars, by the time the sun had risen she was still staring into the sun, she hadn't got any sleep. She wiped away her tears and made a promise to herself that she will be strong for herself and to get her chep back. She had got dressed early and was the first one at the table and Virat was the last. She tried to make eye contact with him throughout the entire way but all he would do is ignore her. He was sitting opposite her. She tried lots to get his attention buh all he did was ignore. So she kicked him on the leg with her pencil heels when he coughed as he knew he could'nt scream as that would leave to questions from his family. She tried her level best to keep her laughter in and this was noticed by Virat. He knew he would melt if he stayed too long infront of her so he left the table. Manvi knew that she was the cause for it. She had felt bad that Virat hadn't eaten cause of her buh she knew him too well. She knew that he has a closet full of junk food. A while later Manvi had remembered all the fights that they had with each other. So she cooked up another plan in her head. She walked into the kitchen seeing her sister making tea for eveyone when she remembered the turkey tea she made 4 Virat when she met him. So she asked her sister can she go give the tea to everyone. As her sister agreed jeevika made the tea and left manvi with it. She had decided to make her special tea for her prince. She had offered everyone tea nd Virat was the last one. She offered him, his tea nd all he said was 'Main chai nahi pee ta'. And walked off. Every single words of Virat was piercing her through her heart. But she had to be strong.

Also updated on the other post with the previous parts.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️❤️
Lovley!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳
I Have No Words To Tell You How Amazing You Are And Your Writting Skills AWSOME!!!🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update..
Thanks for this pm and do pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Jenny awww. Ur comments are soo lovely dear.

@Khushi15 yeah sure.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was too good and is waiting for the next part to get updated .
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was amaaziiinnng you did an awesum job you almost made me teary CZ of VIRATS ignorant behavior towards manvi :( you did a brilliant job on describing manvis thoughts loved it to the damn core
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ KSG_luv

Aww. I'm glad u liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing totally loved it! need more romance scenes!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm sorry guys that there's not that many romantic scenes buh this is important for the storyline.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaawww maanvi's never ending koshish is so sweet it made me emotional when virat kept on ignoring her but i ended up laughing over maanvi kicking virat's leg and the special TURKISH tea lol plsz continue and thanx for the pm and plsz pm me again soon?

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