Abhiya FF:Following an Unknown Dream.Discontinued - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update dr!!!!
things are going quite fast!!!!
its gr8... finally abhay pia are togather!!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dishu raani update kaab milega hume plsss jaldi se update karo kyunki aaab aur intezaar nahi hota and mujhe pm karna mat bhulna 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kya mast. Upd tha yaar dishu loved it , awww abhiya r soo cute and confession was soo cute and abhiya r partners in every thing , destiny ! Hope maya doesn't create probs and story is going awesome , and abhay is soo cute love abhiya plsss upd soon u rock
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

hey dishu raani update kaab milega hume plsss jaldi se update karo kyunki aaab aur intezaar nahi hota and mujhe pm karna mat bhulna 😊😊

agar agla update abhi de diya to next update ke liye pata nahin kitna wait karna padega. to let me take some input from syria madam first 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

agar agla update abhi de diya to next update ke liye pata nahin kitna wait karna padega. to let me take some input from syria madam first 😆

okies par syria madame ko bolo ki jaldi se input bheje kahin tumhare pm box me dher sare msgs naaa aa jaye jaldi se update karne ke byiesss gn tc ks hsd 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow it was so lovely ... everything happened quickly...
everything was so fab... awww first kiss :)

hope he can declare it infornt of every1 soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 5


Pia bid her adieu to each guest, and paid her respects. She was hurrying up to her room, but her Mum Rose called.

Rose- Pia! Can you please come here?

Pia- What is it Mum?

Rose- Pia! I know how much you miss your father. I wanted to give you something when you were old enough. He wanted to have you this.

Rose handed her a box that looked like old antique and a letter.

The letter wrote

(Dear Pia)

I am so happy to have found a daughter like you. After Aliyah, the doctor had informed us that me and Rose could probably never have any more children. We were devastated that we could never give Alliyah a sister she always had desired. We felt like a failure. But then, like a miracle you came along, it completed our whole family. You made us all complete. When you called me papa for the first time, and Rose mum we had all tears in our eyes for seeing our small baby doll growing into an angel like you. I know I am not gonna be there in few years as I am fighting this deadly disease. I curse God for not letting me be there for your first date, your prom, and your high school graduation. You are my little P, and will always be close to my heart. Before I leave this Earth, I want you to be aware how much Aliyah, your mum and me love and adore you. You are our complete package. Please! When I am gone, you have to handle the family. You are papa's little tough girl, and his princess, Nah! Please take care of them. And know that I am resting in safe place.

Love ur dad

Pia cried and slowly opened the small box. It was her pink fork which she had worn for her first fancy dress competition when she had won first prize and her last victory she celebrated with her father.

Rose - Pia ! He would not want to see you like this. He could not bear his little princess crying, nor can I.

Pia- Mum! I am not crying! Where am I crying? Remember, I am the wise, and the brave girl. She said wiping her tears.

Rose- Can you believe he kept a piece of your dress?

Pia- I know mum. I wish he was here today to see where we are in the world

Rose- He would have been proud of you and Aliyah she said hugging her. Now you said yourself, you are a brave girl. Stop crying.

Pia- You are crying too. And, u are supposed to be brave. You are courageous too.

Rose and Pia laughing.

Rose- So ! Putting this behind, Would like to ice - cream?

Pia had forgotten Abhay was there from all her crying.

Pia- No Mum! I am already full. Anyway, I thought you were on your diet climbing up the stairs.

Rose- I am on Ice-cream diet. And, look at me. Any guys would love to date me, and be happy with all these junks they are getting.

Pia Yuck! Mum! I am going. Please don't give me nightmares

Rose laughing- You know I am the coolest mum. Cool and hip

Pia racing up the stairs- Goodnight Mum! Yes you are, I have to give you credit for that.

Abhay was there with concern on his face.

Abhay- Pia! I know about your dad.

Pia- Abhay! There is nothing you need to know. She said turning back her heel.

Abhay- Pia! I know you are lying to me. I love you Pia so much that it hurts to see you in pain. One moment you were crying, and now you all come happy. Pia! I know you are strong, but Pia you are a special part of my life. Please! Share your pain with me. It's excruciating me.

Pia- Abhay! She ran and hugged him. Abhay! I am weak. I pretended to be happy for my mum sake. Her and my sister's happiness means to everything to me. My dad died from cancer. We could not afford his medicine. Abhay we were not rich back then. My sister worked hard day night to be where we stand today.

Abhay wiping her tears, and kissing it- Pia! You are my soulmate! You your happiness and your pain are all mine. Pia! You are becoming the most important piece in my life.

Pia rested her head on Abhay's chest and slowly brought her smile to her face.

Abhay brought his face to her, and kissed it. Pia retracted

Pia- Pardon me For rudely interrupting, but I have to change from this outfit.

Abhay smirking- I will wait for you.

Pia tiptoed and changed in her p.js quickly. She came wearing a fuzzy duck silver shoes out of bathroom. Abhay raising his eyebrows at her curiously at her fuzzy slippers. When she walked, it sounded like duck

Pia feeling awkward - You are making fun of my slippers nah!

Abhay- No Love! I think they are so cute. It's just that I predicted that you will have those. Putting his hands mouth trying to control his laughter.

Pia- Shut up! Annoyed! She looked back, and you mister can get out.

Abhay- I am sure your mum will approve that. Seeing a guy walk out of your room.

Pia biting her lips - Oh! Why I did not plan your escape before.

Rose came towards the room, and knocked in.

Rose- Sweety! Are your alright? Because I thought I heard a noise. I am coming in.

Pia- Mum! I am fine. No need to come. Abhay was amused and was laughing.

Pia- Mum! Just a sec I am changing. Pia in the room - Abhay! We have to hide you! Where, am I going to hide you? Go to the closet, and Pia dragged him there. She slowly straightened herself, and opened the door.

Rose looked around the door eyeing her daughter curiously

Rose- Why are you all red, and why are your eyes all puffy red?

Pia- Something caught me in my eye. Pia inquiring around the room. She saw a fly. A fly caught on my eyes.

Rose- O sweety! Is it out yet. Let me take a good look.

Pia- Mum! It's out, and if it was not out yet would I have been able to see. It's fine. I just washed it with cold water.

Rose- Are you sure?

Pia- Yes mum! And, dragging Rose out of her room. Mum don't u have get some beauty sleep. You have a kitty part tomorrow

Rose looking confused went.

Abhay came out- So! You managed to hide me from your mum very well

Pia- Shut up! mocking him.

Abhay grabbing her, and brushing her face off.

Abhay-Remember! It was your idea for me to come here. So you are accusing me for nearly getting you in trouble. How mean? He said pouting

Pia- Shut up! Abhay! That puppy dog face won't work with me. You should have reminded me.

Abhay- So my girlfriend is enraged with me and will take something creative to convince her.

Abhay slowly kissed her hand. Pia melted, and shivered at his touch. She walked away from him. Abhay came behind, and cuddled her behind from back. Then he slowly removed her hair, and kissed her neck. Pia hugged him tightly and embraced him. Abhay slowly cupped her face and fiercely kissed her. Abhay pecked her cheeks and teased Pia who was all red.

Abhay- Now Am I forgiven.

Pia- You are forgiven if you stay with me all night.

Abhay- That I can do.

He lifted Pia bridal style, placed her on bed and sat beside her. Pia slept like a little lamb. She fell quickly asleep and was her murmuring Abhay! I love you. Abhay kissed her on forehead. He felt asleep.

Pia woke to the ray of sunlight. Abhay was sleeping holding her. She decided not to disturb him and quickly gave him a kiss. Abhay was awake through out the whole time. And, he grabbed her when she was out to leave him.

Abhay- Good morning sunshine! We are not done yet. Abhay gave Pia a hard kiss. We are done now. Now, I have to leave and get ready for school.

Pia- We won't be able to see each other for another hour putting a puppy dog face.

Abhay ran jumped from the window. Pia gasped how an earth he managed to jump.

Pia was distracted by his text: Thinking about u xoxo

Pia laughed and mentally slapped herself. She took a shower, and got ready for college. Pia hurried to car, and left to pick Misha's home. She was greeted by Mr. Dobriyal.

Arnav- You must be Pia! I am so delighted to meet you. Misha has told me so much about you.

Pia- Same here uncle! Is Misha home?

Arnav: Aah Misha! She had too much alcohol last night so I guess she is not in a position to go to college today.

Pia(laughing): that's ok uncle. I will go alone.

But Pia had a mood swing and texted Abhay to come and meet her who came without wasting a second.

Abhay- Are you not going to college?

Pia - Nope! I don't want to attend college.

Abhay- Do u wanna go to my home? We can work on our project, and you can meet my family again.

Pia- Sure! I forgot we have a week to go to finish our project.

Abhay- Before I go, is it too late for you to ask to kiss me ?

Pia- U r becoming very naughty Mr. Raichand. Pia gave him a quick kiss in the lips.

Abhay- No fair! That's not the kiss. I will show you a real kiss

Pia breathing heavily. Abhay kissed her deeply with fire burning inside his body.


At the Raichand Mansion

Abhay and Pia arrived at Raichand Mansion. They had skipped college for the day. Abhay was looking forward to spending more time with Pia. Everytime they separated even for a moment, he felt empty and lonely. She was becoming like a drug to him. Chand and Hasenna had left for business for the entire weekend. Abhay gave her the tour of his house.

Abhay- So how do you like it?

Pia- Are you kidding? I love it

Abhay- Would like to see the most important part of the house? My room

Pia- All you have to do is lead the way

Abhay- Yes Madam!

Abhay opening the door- Welcome to my humble dwelling.

Pia scrutinized the room. It looked like a 1920's room. Pia twirled around her heel to take one better look at the room. Abhay was glaring at her amusingly anticipating for her response.

Abhay finally made the move to break the silence- So! I take Madam is rating my room right now (leaning against the door) furrowing his eyebrows

Pia- Yes! Mister I was trying to give your room a rate from 1-10 .U get a 0 she said sticking her tongues out.

Abhay smiling dryly decided to have a little fun.

Abhay- So Madam wants to have fun! He murmured softly on her ears

Pia .. No I want to start our project.

Abhay - Miss Pia! you are lying he said with a mischievous smile , slowly approaching her, where Pia was standing. Pia slowly walked back, and landed her self in the wall. Abhay slid his arms around his waist, and raised one of his arm around the wall. Pia breathed heavily

Abhay mischievously smiling- I am not let you go until you confess your lie

Pia nervously getting stuck spoke with heats rising up her cheeks- Abhay!!!!! I am just worried because... she slowly touched Abhay's face, and Abhay was completely blown away. Pia slowly played around with him, and when he released the tight trip to inch his lips nears her; She pinched him, and ran away.

Abhay- Pia! Not Fair! He Ran towards her.

Pia ran down the stairs, and he ran after her, careful not to reveal that he could outrun her. Abhay took the other way and used his vampiric speed. Pia went down to the theater room where they were originally supposed to go for their project.

Abhay- Bhoo!

Pia flinched, - Abhay! You scared me.

Abhay smirking- That's what u get for tricking me, Now where we? inching his lips towards her

Pia puts her hand over his mouth- We were gonna study

Abhay narrowing his eyes- Not Fair! He said releasing her.

Pia was desperately trying to focus on the project, but she could not. Abhay was such a distraction. He kept on putting loud music, thumping his feet, and throwing pop corns at her.

Pia- Abhay! Plz! We need to work on our project.

Abhay snorting- Geek! He murmured softly

Pia- What was that?

Abhay- Nothing! He said with a fake smile

Pia- I just thought u called me a geek.

Abhay- Yes! I did! I am such an unlucky boyfriend!

Pia amused- Why is that?

Abhay- I am just a poor boyfriend who is just trying to spend a quality time with his girlfriend who loves her more than his own life. But, she would rather spend time on books. How unfair is that?

Pia- O no! Poor baby! But black mail is not going to win me over. She came closer to him.

Abhay- What is going to my love? He asked her curiously

Pia- How about you tell me why their is rivalry between my friends and your friends?

Abhay- It's a long story. I promise to tell you tell you someday. Please trust me! He said slowly brushing her face.

Pia- I will not question your further, but when that time comes you have to answer me. Abhay! You know I trust you more than my own life (Pia rested her head on his chest).

Abhay kissed her forehead, and soothed her.

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing dishu!! as usual!!!

abhay n pia are so cute!!!! i loved dis naughty abhay!!!
pia shared her pain with abhay!!! dats cool!!! dey are coming more closer!!!
the riachand house stuff was cool.. i loved it...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm..
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome hot update dishu...i am in too excited a state to write coherently😆😍
sorry i know i'm overreacting. But i'm going overboard these days even with a kiss between abhiya...dunno if it's because of the valentine's day thing and i'm still in love with them or the fact that i 'm missing them more everyday...
Felt bad for Pia though...she must miss her dad a lot...but her mom is the best.

hope the next one comes soon though...😳
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt ...loved abhiya..thnx 4 d pm n continue soon

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