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hey gals! me back again to torcher u all... ok so as u all are waiting for dis pat eagerly it took me whole 3 days to write it nd finally it went so long that i had to split it in two parts... i dont know hw far m able to live upto ur Expectations but pls forgive me if i fail...

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Part 43:

Maan: ok enough now Annie. U must be tired nw. y don't u get freshen up first.

Annie: not now Bhai because dere's still one surprise left.

Maan knotted his brows in confusion nd Annie look towards Door while shouting "Surprise come inside" nd Maan nd others follows her gaze nd wat dey saw at door just made everyone surprised nd shocked. The person whom Annie has referred as Surprise was standing at the door wid hesitation as if don't know how to come inside. It was none other den Maan's younger brother Dev!!!!!!

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Everyone looked at Dev nd den back at Maan who was seething in anger. Savitri Devi wanted to calm her down but at dis moment even she don't know wat should she say to Maan. she knows it very well the anger Maan had for Dev nd dee's definitely no chance he was going to forgive him no matter how much he had missed him in dese years yet Maan will never forget wat circumstances they had faced due to Dev. She looked at Armaan for some kind of help but he was too standing over dere helpless.

On the other hand Maan was just trying hard to not to punch him right on his face. Its true that he had missed him like hell in dese years. Only he knows how badly he wanted to talk to him, to be wid him in dis Mansion, to be wid him wen he was getting engaged, to be wid him doing all the marriage preparations but Everytym Dev's deed came into his mind nd his affection replaced by anger nd he found it impossible in himself to forgive. Wat he don't understand is that what is he doing over here now nd where's that selfish wife of his Nayantara who was the sole reason of Dev's deed nd Annie hw come she can bring him over here. had she forgot wat all she had faced due to him. with every passing minute Maan was loosing his control on himself. Geet looked at him nd guess wats going in his heart nd mind. She knows dis was cuming. It wont be easy to bridge dis gap between dese two brothers.

"Arey app log Dev Bhai ko aise kyun dekh rahe ho jaise app logo ne koi Bhoot dekh liya ho? Arey ye apne Dev bhai hai koi bhoot nahi" Annie said chirpily bringing everyone back from their thoughts.[Arey y u are all looking Dev Bhai like u all had seen some ghost? arey he's our Dev Bhai not some ghost?]

"Nd Dev bhai y r u standing on the door? arey apna hi ghar hai bhai. Come inside" annie said while looking at Dev. Hesitantly Dev takes a step inside only to be stopped by Maan

"Wahi ruk jao Dev" Maan said in a threatening voice nd Dev just stopped in his tracks. [Stay right over dere Dev]

"Bro Main..." Dev tried to talk to Maan only to be interrupted by him again

"not a word Dev. U had lost all the rights to say anything long back. nd wat are you doing over here. wasn't all that enough that u had done before that now u are here again to ruin everything." He said angrily making everyone shiver

"but Maan Bhai Dev Bhai to..." Annie tried to protest his brother only to be interrupted by Maan

"Not a word Annie. I don't want to listen anything for his favour. Nd I don't belive dis u brought him over here. have u forget wat u had faced because of him" Maan looked at Annie disbelievingly nd she just dipped her head down not knowing wat should she reply to him.

"anyways I m not going to buy any crap of you now Dev so its better if u get out of my sight right now or else I have to call security" Maan said threatingly nd it was enough for Dev to understand that there was no place left for him in thios house anymore. He gave a last look at all before turning to leave wen someone stopped him

"Ruk jao Dev. U'll not go anywhere" Geet said hile coming forward nd Maan looked at her disbelievingly.

"Geet let him go. U don't know anything" Maan tried to stop Geet but all went in vain

"Maan I know everything nd Dev had came over here due to my insistence only. I had called him over here" Geet said while giving Maan another shock of his lyf. he cant believe that Geet called Dev. Nd wat did she just said she knows everything yet she called him over here.

"Geet u had called him?' he asked again hoping somewhere that Geet will refuse.

"yes Maan I had called him. because I wanted my whole family under one roof wen I come to this house nd Dev is definitely a part of my family just like Dadimaa, Annie, Armaan, Shilpa nd you" she said determinely nd Maan felt like someone betrayed him. he thought that Geet understands him better den anyone but it seems that he was wrong

"I didn't expected dis from you Geet" he said rather painfully nd storms off from dere leaving everyone behind baffled. Geet knows he was hell angry on her nd though unknowingly she had hurted him but wat she wa doing right now is also not wrong. she looked at Dev nd gestured him to come inside.

Hesitantly he came inside nd Savitri Devi hugged him tight expressing her longing for his grandson. Armaan nd Shilpa gave an umcomfortable smile to him while Annie just wished that soon her Maan Bhai too give one chance to Dev. After all the re-union episode Dev finally turned towards Geet who was looking at the direction where Maan had left

"I told you it wont be easy. Bro will never forgive me. now see he's angry from you too just because of me. it would be better if I would have never came back." Dev said wid a feeling of guilt for unknowingly creating tension between his bro nd the only Love of his lyf who is not less den an angle

"dnt say like dat Dev. It was not ur Fault. U know Maan right, his temper is always bad but u don't worry I'll handle him." Geet said assuringly trying to less the burden of his guilt.

"But Geet Maan is really angry from you. U shouldn't have hide dis fact from him" Armaan spoke in between realzieng the gravity of the situation

"I know Armaan but I want it to be a surprise for him. don't worry I know how to pacify him." she said nd moves towards the direction where Maan had gone while everyone looked at her retreating figure silently praying that she succeed to pacify Maan.

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Geet looked around whole house for Maan nd as expected he was at his gym practicing Tai-chi to take out all his frustration on poor Wooden planks nd ice. She remembers clearly wat happened a month ago wen Sasha had accused her nd he was as frustrated as he was dis tym but she needs to stop him beore he went too far in his anger. Thinking dis she went near him nd stands behind him.

Maan senses her presence behind him. actually he had sensed it the moment she stepped in his gym but he decided to ignore it continued his tai-chi. he was very much hurted right now nd the worst part is that the reason is Geet. if she knows everything den y did she brought Dev back home. All dese thoughts were frustrating him even more. Geet looked at him nd clearly understands that he was trying to ignore her but she was also Geet Malhotra no cut that she's would be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana nd no one can deny her not even Maan himself.

She poked on his one shoulder but he completely ignore her nd moved to other side nd pick up nanchalks nd started practicing wid it. Geet's mouth feel open seeing him ignoring her like dis. she pouted nd immediately goes near him nd poked him on his other shoulder but he didn't budge at all. But Geet is also stubborn. She continues to poke him until he gets irritated nd swiftly turned towards her nd pulled her closer to himself by helding her shoulders.

Everything happened so sudden that Geet didn't got a chance to register wat exactly had happened nd wen she realized she found herself close to Maan. so close that his breath is fanning her lips. Geet was completely dazed wid his nearness nd was in the state to say anything. The sweat from his body along wid hid manly cologne was not letting her think anything straight nd his proximity was not helping either. She had long back forgotten for wat she had came here for the moment she looked into his deep eyes which were expressing numerous emotions.

"Pls don't do all dis Geet u know I cant resist you." Maan said bringing his face closer to hers almost touching his lips wid hers nd Geet could sense hw badly he was stopping himself

"Den don't resist Maan" she said softly trying to calm his tensed muscles. Maan instantly pulled back nd Looked at Geet who had her eyes closed waiting for him to proceed but wen he don't she opened her eyes nd look at him. Mana instantly turned so that his back was facing her

"Pls Go from here Geet. Leave me Alone. Just Go" Maan said rather in a harsh voice but Geet didn't flinched a bit instead she came closer to him nd turned him towards herself.

Hw could I Leave you alone Maan? had u left me alone ever wen I was sad, angry, hurt or frustrated." Geet asked questioningly looking deep into his eyes nd Maan just looked other side avoiding her gaze

"Geet Pls go from here I don't want to say anything which can inturn hurt you." Maan said pleadingly but that just increased Geet's confidence.

"say whatever u want Maan take out all your frustration on me I swear I wont get hurt a bit because my heart is so full from ur Love that dere's no place of any other emotion in it." she said determinely nd Maan knows its useless to argue wid her further. She was as stubborn as him

"Geet why are you doing all this? What do u want?" he said helplessly finally surrending in front of her

"I want you to be happy Maan, always." Geet said while lovingly placing her hand on his cheek

"Den y did u brought Dev back Geet?" he finally voiced out wat was dere in his heart from long nd Geet felt relieved that finally he was talking to her about dis.

"because I know that u'll be happy wen all ur siblings will be here wid u. wat do you think I haven't noticed the longing in ur eyes for ur own brother, the sadness on ur face wenever I talk about my Vindhya Di nd Vansh Bhai? Wat do you think that I haven't noticed hw badly are missing that warmth in ur relationship between u nd Dev wen u see me wid Di nd Bhai. I noticed everything Maan but I was quiet till now because I was not able to convience Dev to come back till now." she said answering all his questions nd Maan just looked at her amuzed as hw much deep she knows him but again the question was same how should he forgive Dev?

"I am happy Geet that u thought so much about me. I m happy that u love me dis much that u are able to understand my untold Emotions but Geet I m sorry I cant forgive Dev u don't know wat he did" Maan said feeling frustrated on himself that for the first tym he was refusing something to his Mishty

"I know everything Maan. I know why u hate Dev. I know wat Dev had done in the influence of Nayantara. In the Nayantara influence he had taken loads of Money from the market in pretext of starting his own business. Nayantara was always threaten to see ur Power nd control over Business so she always pester Dev to start his own business which was suggested by Nayantara but due to lack of experience Dev failed to succeed nd in order to return the Loan that he had taken from Market he had sold huge share ok KC's shares due to which KC stake was at risk. Competitors tried dere best to overtake KC. Investors were backing out nd KC was on verge of closing. Khurana's Pride, dere dignity was at risk. If it was not u nd Dadimaa who had stood on the way of all the hurdles without bending in front of circumstances den today KC would be a lost name in the history.

Dadimaa told me everything Maan. She told me how broken u was on those initial days wen u get betrayed by none other den ur own brother who on th influence of his wife had forgotten the relation he had shared wid you since childhood. I can understand Maan how it feels wen u get betrayed by the person who was once so close to your heart nd in the influence of others he just breaks ur trust without thinking even for a second" she said in pain remembering wat her best Friend Vridant had done with her in influence of his GF Ria. How ironic is it that both of dem had got betrayed once in their lives by the person whom dey trust the most. Maan looked at the change of her facial expression nd it took him no tym to register wat she was thinking.

"But still u didn't let your courage down. U worked hard Day nd night nd once again brought KC back to its position nd after that u had paid Dev all debts nd asked him to leave dis house nd shift to Canada. Nayantara nd Dev left the house but not before Nayantara accusing you of a selfish brother who cant see her Brother getting rise in his lyf. she called u a heartless brother because u cant forget the simple mistake of ur brother. She said that u wanted to maintain ur Power nd control over businees nd KM datsy u are sending dem away to struggle wid dere lives but wat no one knows that u had already done a branch of KC over dere under Dev's name where he was sole incharge so that he don't have to struggle to make his identity nd after that u too left the Mansion nd shifted in outhouse because u don't want anyone else to accuse u the same that Nayantara accused you. Because no one had seen the state in which you were wen u asked Dev to leave dis house. U were burning from inside but had maintained a tough exterior outside.

Maan Dadimaa had told me everything on the day of our engagement. Remember wen she asked me to stay back here nd after my reluctance she asked me to stay at outhouse. Den only she told me everything nd the reason behind stopping me back" As Geet finished herself Maan looked at her wid an utmost amuzed expressions as if she doesn't belong of earth. She knows everything from so long yet she never showed dis to him nd behaved normally wid him nd wat touched his heart most was she had understand his each nd every emotions that he had went through at that phase. He thought no one could ever understand wat he went through at that tym apart from his Dadimaa but Boy was he Wrong? Oh how can he forget she's his Mishty Afterall, always unpredictable. But tale doesn't end over here

"Geet if it was just because of wat Harm Dev caused to business nd Khurana's dignity den I would have forgiven him also but wat Annie has to face due to him I just cant forget that. U know Geet Annie's Parents died along wid mine in the same car accident. Annie was just 4 years old den. For months she don't even know where her parents had gone all of a sudden. She use to sit in ront of dere photos nd talked to them for hours asking dem to come back soon as she was missing dem a lot. she use to ask me but I had no answers of any of her questions. I had made myself strong after my Parents' demise but wat answer I can give to the child who don't even know the meaning of death. Since den I was not just Annie's Maan Bhai but also her father nd Mother. Annie was just not my sister Geet I had brought her up as a daughter. I had promised myself that I'll never let Annie to be in any kind of trouble. But I failed Geet, I failed. My Annie had stuck up in the biggest trouble nd u know who was responsible for that. My own Brother Dev was responsible for that.

Do u know Annie had been kidnapped by one of the local Gangster from whom Dev had taken Money nd was unable to return it to him on tym. So as a revenge dey had kidnapped Annie. Annie was just 18 years old Geet nd dey kidnapped her. dey use to torcher my Annie because it gave dem satisfaction. Geet, I heard the pleading voice of Annie wenever they use to call us to show the extent of their inhumanity. Nd as if that was not enough they had... they had tried to force demselves on Annie" Maan said nd closed his eyes in pain of remembering those dreadful days while Geet gasped in horror.

Dis side of story was really unknown to her. Dadimaa told her each nd everything but she didn't told her this. Now she understands y it was difficult for Maan to forgive Dev. No brother could forgive that person due to whom his sister has been in dis much mess. But wasn't Dev was Annie's Brother too. Had he Loved Annie less then Maan? hell No!!!! He too must have gone through the worst during those days specially den wen he knows that his sister was facing all this due to his deeds. She was lost in her thoughts wen Maan next set of words brought her back into reality

"Geet, if that day Armaan wouldn't had reached on tym then Annie'' I don't want to even think wat could have happened wid her. dose men were arrested but my Annie was never the same. u knw she's been in trauma for months. Geet who could understand Annie's condition better den you. You urself had faced all dis once. now tell me how should I forgive Dev, how should I give him one chance. I knw he didn't Love Annie less den me but because of him wat all she had faced I cant forget that. Its not in my will to forgive him Geet. Tell Me Geet if you were in my place nd in place of Annie Shilpa would be dere den would u have forgiven Dev? Tell me Geet would u have forget wat Shilpa had faced because of him? tell Me Geet would you have still given Dev another chance? Answer me Geet at you should have done if you were in my place? C'mon answer me?" Maan said while shaking her shoulders nd Geet just don't know wat should she say further. Maan was not wrong at his place. If she was dere in lace of Maan she should have also done the same. now how can she say Maan to forgive Dev, how can she ask Maan to give him one more chance. No she cant, she couldn't. but what should she do now. on one hand dere was Maan who was not wrong in not forgiving Dev nd on the other hand it was Dev who was not wrong either, who was just the prey of the circumstances. Here she was trying to bridge the gap between two brothers nd nw she herself is stuck somewhere in between from where she is not seeing any way.

"Geet, u shouldn't have brought him over here. and u had hide dis fact from me too. Y Geet? atleast just asked me once. was dere anything till now that I had hide from you? Was dere anything till now that I had not told you? Den how can you think that I would have not told u dis if u had asked me" Maan said rather in a painful way bringing Geet out of from her thoughts

"But Maan I just wanted to..." she tried to say that she had not told dis to him because she wanted to give him surprise but Maan just cut her in between

"Enough Geet I don't want to listen anything. U had hurted me Geet. u had hurted me a lot. first by hiding dis fact from me nd den Bringing Dev here nd den supporting him outside. I haven't expected dis from you Geet. I really haven't." Maan interrupted in between nd Geet just stood dere shocked. Dis is for the first tym wen he's blaming her for something. Since the tym they both were together he had never ever blamed her for anything not even den wen she had told him about wat happened wid her wen she was 14 yrs old but today he was blaming her. she understands his turmoil,. She understands that he did it unintentionally yet it pinched somewhere deep in her heart .

"Maan I..." she tried to put her point but before she could say something Maan storms off out of the gym leaving her behind. The tears that she had been holding on till now had started making its way as soon as Maan stepped out of the gym. Geet just thumped on the floor crying silently.

She had never thought that things will turned out in dis way. She knows that Maan was angry on Dev but was not knowing that the reason was much more bigger den she thought to be. Unintentionally she had hurted Maan nd dis thought was killing her even more. She closed her eyes as tears made dere way only praying silently to God that some miracle to be happen nd everything turned out to be the same as it was before. Just den she was praying she felt a hand on her shoulders comforting her. she instantly opened her eyes to look at the erson nd was both shocked nd surprised to see her here

"Annie" she muttered as she saw her standing over dere wid tears in her eyes. her facial expressions clearly said that she had listened each nd every part of her conversation wid Maan. ok so now she had hurted yet another person by opening that chapter of her lyf though unknowingly whioch she mught has been forgetten, she thought to herself nd looked at Annie who assured her through her eyes dat everything will be fine

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She had never thought that things will turned out in dis way. She knows that Maan was angry on Dev but was not knowing that the reason was much more bigger den she thought to be. Unintentionally she had hurted Maan nd dis thought was killing her even more. She closed her eyes as tears made dere way only praying silently to God that some miracle to be happen nd everything turned out to be the same as it was before. Just den she was praying she felt a hand on her shoulders comforting her. she instantly opened her eyes to look at the erson nd was both shocked nd surprised to see her here

"Annie" she muttered as she saw her standing over dere wid tears in her eyes. her facial expressions clearly said that she had listened each nd every part of her conversation wid Maan. ok so now she had hurted yet another person by opening that chapter of her lyf though unknowingly whioch she mught has been forgetten, she thought to herself nd looked at Annie who assured her through her eyes dat everything will be fine.

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Maan came to his office after he had a conversation wid Geet. he just cant sit in home even for a minute after wat happened few hrs back. As soon as Maan stepped in office the staff members who were relaxed till now as dere Boss will not be here in the office for whole 1 week were now terrorized seeing his cranky nd annoyed mood. Whole office was rushing here nd dere bringing dis nd dat fle to save from their Boss' wrath who was unnecessarily yelling at dem for dere carelessness. But least anyone knows was that it was the frustration that Maan was taking out in dis way.

He was frustrated to see Dev over here. he was frustrated to refuse something to his Mishty. He was frustrated to blame her for bringing Dev over here wen he knows that she had done this for his happiness, he was frustrated for hurting her in vain, he was frustrated for being angry on her so the best way to take out all his frustration is to take it out on anyone else.

Finally he sat back on his chair after giving a huge speech to Adi for not preparing Budget file of next project whi.ch was not much important for now. he leaned back his head on his chair nd closed his eyes only to see the image of Geet in front of his eyes. how much she tried to talk to him after his leaving Gym but he just avoids her nd came here to office inspite of lot of reluctance of Savitri Devi. Its been 5 hours since dere Gym conversation nd he had not talked to her. she had called him numerous tymes, send him numerous msgs to atleast listen to her once wat she wanted to say but he simply ignored it all nd he knows she must have felt hurted nd as dis thought crossed his mind he snapped open his eyes nd throws the file on the tables on floor in anger.

Everything was going smooth till now but wid the entry of Dev everything just turned upside down. Only if he can turn back the tym den he would have never let Geet taken that step which she has taken now due to which he had not talked to her from whole 5 hrs which seems to him an eternity now to him. he came back from his thoughts wen he heard his cellphone ringing. He looked at the caller nd found 'Mishty' flashing on it. he at once cuts the call nd throws his cell away somewhere at the corner of his cabin in frustration.

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With every passing minute Geet patience was giving up now. from last 5 hours she's been calling him, trying to talk to him but Everytym he just cuts her call. she was pacing to nd Fro in Annie's room with Shilpa nd Annie present over dere who were following Geet's moment through their eyes nd den sighed knowing that both were equally stubborn. Neither he would take the call nor she'll stop calling again.

Finally Geet's patience gave up nd she throws away the cell in frustration making Annie nd Shilpa jump due to sudden reaction.

"Idiot, Stupid, Duffer, Nonsense. Kabse call kar rahi hoon but no he don't bother to take the call. I even msgd him also but u see wo to APJ Abdul Kalam Azaad hai na jiske paas reply back karne ka tym nahi hai" she said while seething in anger [Idiot, Stupid, Duffer, Nonsense. I m calling him from so long but no he don't bother to take the call. I even msgd him also but u see he's not less den APJ Abdul Kalam Azaad who didn't had tym to reply back]

"Di its Abul Kalam Azaad" Shilpa tries to correct her only to get an angry glare from her nd she instantly shuts up her mouth.

"Kabse keh rahi hoon ki kuch imp baat hai. atleast ek baar sun to lo but nahi use to apne aage kisi ki kuch sunni hi nahi hai na. bas humesha wahi karta hai jo use sahi lagta hai. chaddo main bhi nahi karti call, nahi baat karni mujhe usse." She said while thumping on the couch wid a pouting face. Annie nd Shilpa looked at each other nd den goes near her nd sit by either side of hers. [I m saying him from long that I wanted to talk something imp. Atleast listen to me once but no he don't want to listen anyone in front of himself. Always do the thing whoch he seems is right. Leave it even I wont call him nw, I'll also not talk to him now]

"Bhabhi ek baat bolu" Annie said nervously fearing her temper. Geet just nodded so she continues [Bhabhi should I say something]

"Bhabhi we both know that wen Bro gets angry hen no one can speak in front of him den forget about pacifying him. but this also I know that there's only one person after Dadimaa from whom Bro cant remain angry for Long"

"nd who's that person?" Geet asked out of curiousity

"oho! Its u Bhabhi" Annie said as a matter of fact

"but how can u be so sure?"

"Savy told me. she had observed u both wen she had came to India last tym" Annie said nonchalantly but Geet got alarmed wen Annie mentioned Savera's name.

"Annie u met Savy? Hws she? Is she fine? Nd wen did u speak to her last?" Geet bombarded annie with loads of question while Annie looked at her confusingly

"Relax Bhabhi pls One question at a tym. Ok so first of all I haven't met her recently but I talked to her on call. Nd she's absolutely fine. I speak to her before leaving for India but I m sad that she's not cuming in the marriage because she said that she had to go out of London due to some mergency nd it'll take her atleast 2 weeks to finish that work" Annie replied each of the question patiently but Geet knows she had not gone anywhere outside London. She had her operation due in 1-2 days so she had excused annie by saying that she had an urgent work due to which she cant attend wedding

"Bhabhi where are u Lost?" Annie sadi bringing her out of reverie

"nowhere Annie u were saying sumthing?' Geet said in order to drop the topic or else all will get suspected

"o ya so I m saying that its only you after Dadi from whom Bro cant remain angry for Long. Nd Bhabhi no matter hw much dese men are strong but we girls have one such power in front of which dey always gets weak. Nd Bro is not an exception especially den wen he's head over heels in Love wid you" she said with a mischevious glint in her eyes

"nd wat was dat Power?" Geet asked curiously knowing somewhere in the back of her mind where Annie is referring to

Annie smiled meaningfully at Geet's question which was enough fir Geet to realize where she;s referring to nd as realization hits her, her eyes gets widens due to surprise wat Annie had just suggested to her.

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1 hour later Geet was standing in front of the mirror wearing a Saree revealing her perfect curvacious figure. She was too shy to see herself in the mirror den forget about going in front of Maan like dis.

"Perfect" she heard Annie saying while looking at her to which Geet instantly turned around nd sat on the couch nearby

"Mujhse ye nahi hoga. Here I m not able to see myself in the mirror hw the hell I m going to face Maan. Hum kuch aur nahi try kar sakte" she said nervously while Shilpa just slapped her forehead [I cant do dis. Here I m not able to see myself in the mirror hw the hell I m going to face Maan. Cant we try something else?]

"Bhabhi Climax pe aake Play ko spoil mat karo. Maan Bhai ko manane ke liye aapko ye karna hi padega" Annie said in a authorative tone to which Geet just looks at her wid baby face [Bhabhi don't spoil the play after bringing it to climax. U have to do dis if u want to pacify Maan Bhai]

"humare paas koi aur option nahi hai" Geet asked cutely hoping that she wont have to go in front of Maan Like dis [Don't we have any other option]

"no, u have to do dis only" Annie said sternly nd Geet sighed knowing now there's no escape

"Good. Shilpa u knw na wat u have to do now" Annie said looking at Shilpa nd She gave her a thumbs up nd started dialing Maan's No.

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Maan came outhouse running to meet Geet. The moment Shilpa called him nd told him that Geet is nowhere at KM neither she's taking her call he was restless. She told him further that she had seen Geet to go towards outhouse nd after that she haven't came back. nd wen Shilpa nd Annie goes over dere they found that Geet had locked herself in her room nd was crying badly. She didn't even had anything to eat.

Without sparing a minute he instantly rush out of his office nd straightaway drove towards outhouse. All the way he was cursing himself for being the reason of her dis condition. Had he not been behaved so indifferently wid her she haven't taken dis big step. Wat if she do something stupid wid her. the thought itself send him chills down his spine. She's really sensitive nd wen it comes to their relationship she's double sensitive. No, he cant let anything happen to her. he curses himself umpteenth tym for not listening to her once. if he had listened to her just once then she haven't taken dis step.

As soon as he reached to outhouse he ran inside to search Geet but she was nowhere to be seen in the Living Room

"Geet!!!!! Geet!!!!! Where are you?" he called her out numerous tymes but she didn't answered. Panic started making home in his heart by the thought of Geet being in Danger nd he searched her madly at Kitchen, study, Living Room

Here Geet was sitting in her Room wen she heard Maan's voice filled wid Panic. She knows that now the tym had came to get into an action but hw should she go in front of him like dis

"hey Babaji! he's here now nd I have to go infront of him. Pls Apni Bacchi ki Raksha karna nd mera saath dena" she send a quick prayer to god nd took a deep breath to muster some courage nd goes towards the door to open it

Maan was about to open the door of her room to check on her over dere wen Geet opened the door nd he just stood dere dumbfounded seeing the sight in front of him. there she was standing in front of him clad in a sexy revealing Saree fitting perfectly to her body. each nd every curve of her body was clearly prominent thru her off shoulder Blouse nd the sight was not less den the treat to his eyes. he looked at her from bottom to top slowly nd intently while Geet as just feeling shy wid every passing minute due to his piercing gaze. This was much more difficult den she thought but if she had to fulfill in her mission she needs to be little bold nd anyways he's not a stranger Afterall, he's her Maan den why to shy in front of him

On the other hand it was getting difficult for Maan to control his temptation for her especially den wen she was standing so boldly in front of him. the Seductress that was standing in front of him was totally new to him. where does his Shy nd innocent Geet gone. As his gaze falls on her midriff he almost forget to breathe. He immediately removed his gaze nd as it travely upwards only to meet her Big Hazel eyes Maan saw the emotions in dem which were dere never before. Along with innocence dere was mischief nd naughtiness present in her eyes today clearly showing him her intentions. Never ever in his wildest Dreams Maan had imagined his Mishty to be turned out in such a seductress.

Unknown to himself he closed the door behind him nd started taking calculative steps towards. Not even for once he blinked for he fear that she may just vanish. With every step of his towards her Geet's heartbeat just rises. The way he was looking at her it seems he was undressing her through his eyes. "Focus, Focus" she kept on ranting in her mind as she was here to make him lose his senses but don't know till how long she'll able to keep her senses intact if he keeps on looking at her like dis

For Maan it was not in his will to stop himself from going near her. the reason for what he was here has gone long back fron his mind. All he could see nd think is that his seductress is standing in front of him nd he was getting pulled towards her as moth is attracted towards flame nd he don't mind in burning in that flame. As he reached near her Geet felt her knees getting weak nd she'll faint any moment seeing his proximity. Maan slowly raises his hand towards his face nd tucked the stramds of her haors behind her ears softly caressing her cheek nd skin behind her ear sending tremors down her spine. Maan gently traced the features of her face with his index finger stopping near her Lips which were quivering due to his sweet torcher. He gently rubbed his thumb on her lower lip before roceeding towards her neck nd further down. Geet's whole body was on fire as closed her eyes in the anticipation of his next as his finger made its way towards her cleavage.

"Maan" she moaned his name bringing him back to reality. Maan instantly move back realizing where it all was leading to nd for what he was actually here.

Geet opened her eyes wen she felt him getting away. She was lost in some other world wen he was caressing her sensuously but wen she felt the warmth of his finger missing she snapped open her eyes only to find Maan looking into other side. She realize what had just been happen transpired between them nd wat he was thinking now. Afterall they had tricked him to come over here that too by taking Geet's name which was enough to add fuel to the fire. She tooks a deep breath to calm down her beating heart nd goes towards his side only to find him angry yet again

"Maan" she called ever so softly nd Maan instantly whipped nd held her by her shoulders pulling her closer to himself

"u guys Tricked me? how could u all do that? You know na Geet hw much possessive I m for you? You know na wat goes through me wen I see you even in a slightest pain yet u guys did that?" he said angrily but Geet found Pain nd restlessness in his voice more den just anger

"Maan, u were not listening to me so..." She tried to say something only to be interrupted by Maan again

So you guys will trick me in this way? I really don't believe dis Geet that u are also involved in all dis knowing very well what must have gone through me wen Shilpa called me telling me about your condition. U hurted me yet again Geet." he said painfully nd turned to leave.

He was abput to reach near the door wen Geet realizes that he was going yet again without listening to her. and as the realization hits her the resolve that she had taken earlier gets strong nd now she knows what she have to do

"Ok So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. U'll not listen to me like dis way. Fine I know other ways too. Wat Annie had said that no matter how much dese men are strong but we girls have one power in front of which dey always gets weak. Hhmmm so tym for some action now Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana" she thought to herself nd an mischievious smile crept on her face.

Maan was about to open the door wen the lights of the room went off nd he heard the sweet enchanting voice of his seductress.

Bahon me chale Aao...

Bahon me chale Aao

ho hamse sanam kya parda,
ho hamse sanam kya parda

Geet slowly whispered from behind tickling Maan's senses. Maan's hand froze on the door knob as he felt her so close to him.

"Oh! Sweet Lord now wat is she going to Do" Maan thought as Geet Sensously traced her finger from his neck slowly moving downward towards his spine. He closed his eyes as her soft breath falls on his skin arousing the desires in him.

Ye Aaj ka...

nahi Milan

yeh sang hai umar bhar kaa

Sshhh

Geet came in front nd traced his jaw line from her finger finally stopping at his lower lip slightly pressing it sending Maan off edge. Maan opens his eyes eyes only to find her more tempting nd alluring in that dim light.

Maan instantly turned his face not knowing for how long he'll able to control himself if she keeps on doing like dis. Geet turned his face towards him nd bit his earlobe as she sing the last line. Unable to take her torcher anymore Maan pulled her away alightly from him silencing her by keeping finger on her lips.

Bahon me chale Aao...

ho hamse sanam kya parda,
ho hamse sanam kya parda

As he was again turned to Leave Geet places herhand on his chest to stop him nd den gradually trcing it with her palm from the opening of his shirt resting near his heart. Maan groaned inwardly in pleasure as his seductress continues his assault on him

Music (mm oh)...

He instantly holds her hand wen he felt her hand going downwards towards his abs while unbuttoning his shirt with one button at a tym. He gently removes her hand nd moves towards the door wen Geet Block his way by standing in front of him. he tried to go from right side but she instantly stand in front of him dere too.

chale hee jana hai
najar churake yun

phir thami thi sajan tumne
meri kalayi kyun hmm

Geet took calculative steps towards him making him move backwards. Maan instantly turned his back towards her wen he felt her palm caressing his back over the cloth just like a spider on its web. Did she had any idea wat she was doing? Here he was trying his best to keep the check on his sanity nd she's making diffult for him by every passing minute. She hugged him from behind rubbing her cheeks on his back softly placing kisses over the cloth

chale hee jana hai
najar churake yun
phir thami thi sajan tumne
meri kalayi kyun

Geet move in front nd wrapped her hand around his neck gently biting his neck nd den nibbled over dere giving him the ecstatic pleasure. Maan held his breath forgetting all his rationality. Was she less irresistible in that Saree that now she's doing all dis to test his patience.

kisi ko apna
banake chhod de,

aisa koyi nahee karta

Sshhh

Maan instantly realize the gravity of the situation wen he felt her removing his shirt over his shoulders. He tries once again a futile attempt to leave but Geet just held him back placing wet kisses over his chest nd shoulders nd Maan found himself drawning into Lust which emanated from her. in order to control his enraging harmones once more he pulled her back nd shuts her mouth by keeping his finger over lips.

Music...

Geet made a baby face seeing him not budging a bit from his resolve nd hold her ears to say sorry cutely melting Maan wid her cute antics. She's indeed his innocent seductress. He smiled a bit seeing her attemot but den immediately concealed it pretending to be still angry

kabhi kabhi kuch toh
kaho piya hamse
ke kam se kam aaj toh khulke
milo jara hamse, hm

Geet turned her back towards him glueing it wid his chest. the feel of her bare back against his bare chest made Maan lose all his rationality nd he completely surrendered to her will. Geet wrapped his hands around her waist while Maan just nuzzled in her neck. The heat emerging from her body was just blowing the desires in him which he was unable to control. He moved her hairs to one side nd kissed her bare back sending her goosebumps

kabhi kabhi kuch toh
kaho piya hamse
ke kam se kam aaj toh khulke
milo jara hamse

He spunned her around as she continues to sing the lyrics. He slowly places butterfly kisses all over her face nd shoulders. He gently bites over her shoulders nd den licks it over dere to reduce the pain sending her off the edge.

hai rat apne,
jo tum ho apne,
kisi kaa phir hame darr kya

Sshhh

Geet sensed his surrender nd it did a summersault in her heart. she slid down his shirt completely from his shoulders baring his torso nd tossed it away. His hands moved around her waist bringing her closer nd closer if its possible. Maan held her hand in mid as they started to stroked his ni***es nd saw mischievious glint in her eyes. she smirked nd bit on his neck nd Maan groaned in pleasure as he pulled her gently nd placed his palm on her mouth indicating her to stop her assault.

baho me chale aao
ho hamse sanam kya parda
ho hamse sanam kya parda

yeh aaj kaa nahee milan,
yeh sang hai umar bhar kaa

baho me chale aao,

ho hamse sanam kya parda
oh hamse sanam kya parda

Maan sccoped her up in his arms nd placed her on the bed nd leaned over her while she just laid on her back, not even once breaking the eye contact. He removed the hairs rom her face that were blocking his view as he places kisses on her forehead den her both eyes nd den finally stopping an inch away from her lips.

He searched in her eyes for seeking permission nd as if understanding his request Geet closed her eyes nd tilted her head placing her lips on his indicating him to continue. This is all Maan wanted as as he gets her permission he slammed his lips on hers kissing her fervously taking her moans inside her lips. Geet kissed him back matching his passion making Maan groan in passion. Maan devour, bite nd tease her lips sending her beyond the edge of insanity while Geet's hands finds uits way towards his hairs clutching dem in her fists bringing him even closer if possible.

Maan's toungue finally found an entrance inside her mouth exploring each nd every corner of it while Geet roams her hand over his back nd shoulders feeling his skin under her hands. Dey finally broke apart after wat seems to be an eternity to take breath. He rubbed his toe on her soft nd smooth legs caressing her calf while Geet just closed her eyes in pleasure.

Maan bend down nd kissed her neck slowly making her way downwards while his hands were caressing the soft skin of her bare waist. Geet's breathing gets fastened as she felt Maan's burning lips on her neck. She move her head aside giving him more access. Maan gently nibbled on the soft skin of her neck nd Geet just dig her nails on his shoulders nd back. he started placing kisses on her throat moving towards her cleavage kissing nd biting over dere while Geet just archs upwards giving him more access. He slowly slides away her pallu over her shoulders nd kissed the bare skin over dere nd den biting it hard

"Maan" Geet moaned his name bringing him back in reality nd he realizes what he was doing. He was going way too far in his passion. He looked at Geet who had her eyes closed nd was dazed in his passion.

No he cant do that thing which dey both regret later. Although he knows that Geet will not regret if he proceeds further nd fulfill all his desires that he had for her but he himself cant spoil the beauty of their relationship. Thinking dis he instantly gots up from her nd ran his hand on his hairs. Geet opens her eyes wen she felt the warmth of his body missing only to find him lost in deep thoughts. She instantly gets up adjusting her pallu nd gently hugged him from side telling him that she didn't regretted wat had just transpired between dem.

Maan closed his eyes nd gently frees her from his embrace. Geet looked at him questioningly while Maan can clearly see the hurt nd disaapointment written on her face

"Maan..." She tried to say something only to be interrupted by him

"Geet Pls. Stop. I wont be able to control myself if u'll remain near me like dis." he said indicating the proximity between dem. Geet lowers her gaze as she realize wat he wanted to say. Maan understands wats going in her heart. he instantly cupped her face nd looked into her eyes

"Mishty I didn't regret wat had just happened between us. I stopped myself because I wanted to make it special on our special night not just by flowing in the desires nd Passion. Pls don't feel anything bad Mishty. I Love you nd I never regret any moment that I spend wid you." He said nd kissed her forehead while Geet just hide herself in his embrace seeing the intensity of his Love.

"Waise Mishty mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri Sweet, innocent Mishty itni badi seductress hai" he said teasingly while Geet hides herself more close in his chest. [BTW Mishty I did not know that my Sweet, innocent Mishty is such a big seductress.]

"Acha ab Sharam aa rahi thodi der pehle to,,,,." He teased her further but Geet just placed her palm over her mouth stopping him saying further [oh! So now u r feeling shy, but a few moments back...]


Maan pulled her back in his embrace while gently stroking her arm placing his head above hers savouring the moment.

"Waise Mishty who had given you this world best idea of seduction?" Maan asked out of curiousity

"it was all Annie's Plan" she said nd bites her toungue realizing what she had blurted out. Maan tilted his head to look at her but she just looked other side

"hhmmm I knew it. I knew that it was not ur idea because my Mishty is too innocent to think such plans." He said nd Geet pouted listening to him

"What do you mean I cant think of any plans." She said nd Maan realizes he had done a blunder.

"Arey I didn't mean that. I mean to say that my Mishty is too sweet. Anyways leave that, but tell me did u do all dis because I was not talking to you" he said while diverting her attention nd he was succeeded to it as Geet nodded her head gently

"oh Mishty! U r really priceless. U know na dat I cant remain angry from you for long yet u did dis?"

"because u r not listening to me. u are not even taking my call. U know I had to tell you something very important" she said while making a baby face nd Maan couldn't help himself from smiling

"ok baba I m sorry now tell me wat u wanted to say to me." he asked as he looked at her to continue further nd Geet just bit her lower lip not knowing hw to say wat she wanted to say

"Maan its about Dev" she said slowly fearing his temper nd as expected Maan's jaws tightened on the mention of Dev's name. he instantly gets up from bed nd turned to leave wen Geet hold his hands stopping him to leave

"Maan please atleast listen to me once." she said while holding his wrst nd Maan just stopped indicating her to continue further. Geet looked at him for a while nd den continues

"Maan Dev was not at fault behind Annie's Kidnapping. He did not know that the person from whom he's taking loan is a local gangster. Nayantara had introduced him to Dev as one of the investors nd it was Nayantara's hands only behind Annie's kidnapping. Dev didn't have the slightest idea about what Nayantara was planning" Geet revealed the fact in front of Maan he just sttod over dere shocked.

Nayantara was behind the kidnapping of Annie. But y did she did that? Wat harm Annie had caused to her? nd how did Geet came to know about it? Did Dev told her all dis? aal dese questions were running in his mind as he looked at Geet expectantly in order to seek his answers.


ok so dis is it guys! hope u all are gonna like it... really hell nervous for dis one u knw i m too naive to write such stuffs... god knows hw did it came out so pls Give me ur comments nd tell me did i get succeeded...


a specal thanx to My Darling Sakshi (Sakshi.ekansh) to suggest me the song or else i was just confused with oit... Luv u sweety

Hit the like button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism its necessary

Luv Aakriti😊😊

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res ;-> ntwrk prblm.. Arggghh
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome loved it


kaise seduce kiya geet ne
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was just awesome. Song was so apt for the situation. Lovely, hnt and passionate.
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Posted: 13 years ago
past was sad. update 44 was rocking. geet the seductress was superb.

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