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PART-14

Amaranth and savitri goes upstairs to take rest..so that children may get privacy and can enjoy as they wish'.

Everyone settles in their places'girls ek team hai aur boys ek team hai'.says nupur'

Aur ha jo team harega o hum sab ko yani apne partners ko ride par le jaana hoga'aur ha hum apne pau bilkul zameen par nahi rakhenge..aaplog hame apni bahon mein utaakar lejaana hoga'.manzoor hai..?

[we girls are one team and boys are one team...if u guys lose in this game then u have to takes us i mean ur respective partners to a ride...and ha u have to carry us in ur arms..]


Maan:teek hai hum tayyar hai'agar aaplog haar gaye tho?

[ok we are ready...and if u lose this game then???]

Geet and nupur looks at each other with questioning eyes'tho'

Sid:u people have to do whatever we say ..'is it ok??

Nupur:hmm manzoor hai'waise jeetenege tho hum ladkiyan hi hai'kyun geet...

[ok then...we accept this...anyways we girls are going to win na]

Geet:ha bilkul'
[exactly]

Meanwhile,geet gets a text in her mobile'

She reads it and blushes'it was from maan'"hum haare ya jeete faida tho mera hi hoga na mishty'he smiles at her and geet smiles back to him'.

Mayank starts singing'.

He smiles at nupur while singing'aaa'.

sajde mein yu hi jhuktha hoon

Tum pe hi aa ke ruktha hoon

Kya yeh sabko hota hai'.


He kneels down before nupur and asks her for her hand'nupur places her palm in his and starts singing'.

Hum ko kya lena hai sabse

Tum se hi sab baatein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri dua'..

Mayank gets up'.and hugs her from back'.and starts singing again'.

sajde mein yu hi jhuktha hoon

Tum pe hi aa ke ruktha hoon

Kya yeh sabko hota hai'.


Nupur also sings with him'..

Hum ko kya lena hai sabse

Tum se hi sab baatein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri dua'..


He lits her in his arms and starts moving round''

Khuda jaane ke mein fida hoon

Khuda jaane mein mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai..

Ye ban gaye ho tum mere khuda''


Everyone starts clapping'..hayee mera bhai tho bada romantic nikla..teases geet'

Nupur blushes''

Suddenly maan starts singing'.awaara''.

geet smiles lovingly at maan'..

He comes to her and holds her palm in his and other hand on her waist'

Mere haat mein tera haat ho saari jannatein mere saath ho

Geet starts cupping maan's face lovingly'..and starts singing'..

Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa'..

She hugs him tightly'maan feels his shirt wet and lifts her face'.wipes her tears and shakes his head as if signaling her not to let out her valuable tears''

Mere haat mein tera haat ho saari jannatein mere saath ho'

Both gets lost in each other'their eyes are refelecting pure love for each other'both are promising each other with their eyes that they'll be there for each other forever'.even though they are not saying verbally their eyes are enough to understand each other's emotions,'.

Geet promises maan that wat ever may be the situation..i'll always be there for u'but u should promise me that u never separate me from ur warm embrace where I could feel solace even in difficulties''I want u till my last breath and I want to leave my last breath only in ur arms''''

Teri dil mein meri saanson ko jagah mil jaye..

Tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa hojaye'.


Here maan is also promising her that he'll never leave her hand..and she only have the right to be in his heart'it's the permanent place of u and no one can replace ur place'..

I can forget to breath but never forget to love u and I'll always protect u in my arms from every obstacle'''.

He kisses her forehead and cups her face lovingly'''..

Jitney paas hain khusbhu saans ke

Jitney paas hoton ke sargam'..

Geet smiles and blushes'''..maan takes her palm in his and kisses it'


Jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke

Jaise saath baahoon ke sangam'


He hugs her tightly'geet hugs him back and starts singing'.

Jitney paas paas khwaabon ke nazar

Utne paas tu rehna hum safar'

Geet breaks the hug and holds maan's palm in both her hands tightly'

Tu jo paas ho hir kya yeh jahaan'.

Tere pyar mein ho jaau fanaa'..


Maan smiles and kisses her hand and then again forehead'''he holds her palm in his and starts singing'''

Mere haat mein tera haat ho saari jannatein mere saath ho'

Maan and geet get lost in each other''''and comes back to reality when everyone claps'..


Nupur:are wah bhai ...kya jodi hai...aisa lagtha hai aap dono ek doosre ke liye hi bane hain'how cute u both look with each other'tum dono ko kisi ki nazar na lage'''.

[u both are made for each other...


Sameera who is burning with jealously gets frustrated with that compliment'here ridz is sad for the previous incident..hmm the same y everyone gives more importance to geet y??her sad face is noticed by sid and somewhere he knew that ridz is sad becoz everyone agreed with geet'to lighten her mood he starts singing'..


Suraj hua madam chand jalne laga'

Aasmaye hayee kyun pighalne laga'

Riddhima gives weak smile to sid but feels happy that at last sid noticed her sad face'.

He smiles at her and starts singing''at the same time make her to stand'


Suraj hua madam chand jalne laga'

Aasmaye hayee kyun pighalne laga'

He starts dancing like srk with her by holding her waist and her palm in his hand''''..

Main thehra raha,zameen chalne lagi'''

Dhadka ye dil saans thamne lagi'.

Oh'Kya mera pehla pehla pyar hai''

Sajnaa,kya mera pehla pehla pyar hai'.


Riddhima starts smiling at last and starts singing with him'''.

ho oh oh oh oh oh oh oh'.aa aa aa aa aa aa'''.

Suraj hua madam chand jalne laga'

Aasmaye hayee kyun pighalne laga'

Main thehra raha,zameen chalne lagi'''

Dhadka ye dil saans thamne lagi'.

Oh'Kya mera pehla pehla pyar hai''

Sajnaa,kya mera pehla pehla pyar hai'.


Every one starts clapping'''they again settles in their places'.next koun hai..asks nupur'

Are hamare side tho sameera extra hai aur aapke paas ek kam hai..ab kese pata chalega koun haara aur koun jeeta'.says geet

[oh no we have one extra memeber in our team and u have 1 less in ur team then how could we decide who won or who lost?]


Sameera frustatingly says'it's ok I don't want to play bt u insisted me''.

Geet:are wait sam'nakul bhaiyya hai na o khelenge'.

[hey wait...nakul bhaiyya will play with us]

Sam:wat?????😲

Immediately nakul who was standing there and waiting to sing comes there happily ...

nakul:geet didi hum sharukkhan ka ghana gaye..?o tho hamara favourite hero hai(blushes while asking😆😆😆)

everyone smiles at his innocence...except sam who was in shock..rather frustation for making a servant as her partner...

geet:ha nakul bhayya kyun nahi...{supressing her laugh}

nakul immediately starts singing along with dance...'.

Girl u are my chammak challo..

Where u go iam gonna follow..

Wat u want girl just let me know'

Woho...u can be my chammak challo'

[mona confused😆 how can a servant sing in English'oh after all he is in khurana house where all are well educated'seekh gaya hoga..😉😉]

Sameera glares at geet who is trying to suppress her laugh and every one also trying hard to suppress their laugh but nupur fails and burst out laughing'

Sameera immediately leaves the place throwing a glare at geet'.

They all burst out laughing as soon as she leaves the place''..

Geet:[st]:Huh'badi aaayi mere maan ke saath flirt karne'mein dekhi rahi thi she was just drooling over my maan since long time''..ab aaya na mazaa nakul ke saath'...

She again starts laughing'..after some time they declare that boys have won they threaten girls to do whatever they say'they simply nods becoz there is no way to escape'.

Here geet is blushing furiously thinking that what maan gonna ask her to do'babaji ab mein kya karu..?o dustdanav zaroor kuch ajeeb socha hoga'.aapki bacchi ki raksha karna babaji...


maan:Hum ne decide kiya hai ki aap log hamare diye huye saza bhugtenge kyun ki aap log har gaye'aur hum log aapki condition ke saath saath saza denge'

[we have decided that we'll punish u as u people lost the game...but along with ur condition which u kept for us..]


Nupur:matlab???

Mayank,maan and sid says in unison'.aaplogo ko ride par le jaa rahe hai aur wahi aap logo ko saza milegi'saying so..three of them lifts their respective partners in their arms and starts running towards car''..

Precap:

Maaneet's date'and romance'

so frnds..this was the update...i know it is stupid one...but my stupid brain is not getting any ideas...plz bear with me this time...exams ke liye pad pad kar meri dimaag ka sandwich hogaya hai...next i'll try to give nice update and as soon as possible...once again iam sorry if u dont like it...


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sorry for the mistakes and plz bear with my launguage as iam not that fluent with it...

love u all...
-mona


link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53095458

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

amazzing

thanks for pm
loved it



thanx dearie😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You For The PM
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!sam and nakul ..
wat a jodi yaar..
superb one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm


not matter how hard sameera tries she can never win maan


precap-me waiting


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wow!sam and nakul ..

wat a jodi yaar..
superb one..



haina bilkul perfect jodi😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zunaiba5

thnx 4 pm



not matter how hard sameera tries she can never win maan


precap-me waiting


do continue



u r right dear...no one can seperate them😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... awesome parts dear...
loved them to the core...
hate that sam... good geet ne bohot acha kiya... i am very happy...
yaar y ridz is behaving like that... hope she loves geet...
wow their antakshari competition is nice... loved all the songs...
hmmm boys won n ride wowww...
precap is interesting... maneet moments...
eagerly waiting... yar if possible try to update wanted also plzzz...

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Posted: 13 years ago


thanx sweety😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

wow... awesome parts dear...
loved them to the core...
hate that sam... good geet ne bohot acha kiya... i am very happy...
yaar y ridz is behaving like that... hope she loves geet...
wow their antakshari competition is nice... loved all the songs...
hmmm boys won n ride wowww...
precap is interesting... maneet moments...
eagerly waiting... yar if possible try to update wanted also plzzz...



thanx jyothi😊😊
iam really happy to see ur comments...
iam glad that u loved the songs...pata hai man mein jo song aaye use rak diya...
update is ready but it's nite na iam feeling sleepy so i'll update wanted tummorow...
love u loads and loads dearie😊😊

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