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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updates
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it
dont discontinue
will b waiting 4 more
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment Mona dear apni Di ko maaf kar do
hehe poor mayank kaha ladkiyon ki bato mein ulaj gaya
hmm... maan is waiting for his angel i loved the song seq darling it was amazing
well ridz aur geet k beech aaj toh koi problem nahi lagi so i wonder starting mein ridz geet se jealous kyun thi
i hate this sameera 😡 maybe she will use ridz to create a rift between maaneet bt i need not worry maaneet ka pyar sabse zyada superior hai
love -Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
no don't change it into an ss cont it as ff.love reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved...

Mona was abroad and have just got back and settled down. Will read all the parts over the weekend and comment later...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear awesome update Mona loved it... arghhh hate sameera..😡😡..
Loved wen mayank told haan baba Girls r d best...
loved Maaneets moments...
dear plzzz dnt make it ss..plzz continue dis ff i lyk dis ff very much...
u r a gud writer..plzzz dnt make it an ss...
sry dear my Like button is nt working so couldnt hit like on both d ffs...
plzz cont soon...
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Ff..
add me in ur listt..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey
gr8 part..
ccont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys iam back here...iam so so so so so sorry for not updating since many days...plz muje maaf kardijiye😭😭 but kya kare...exams ki wajah se...
ok k end of my bakbak and let's go for update now...








PART-13

everyone moves inside except sameera...

sam:(self thought)
huh...wat this geet is thinking of herself...tum kuch bhi karlo geet mein tho wo karke rahungi jo muje karna chahiye...
and this maan...how can he show interest in benji types ladki like geet being a millionaire...why this khurana brothers are interested in low class people...anyways i came to know about his interest and i'll definitely win in this mission too as always...

she smiles weirdly..

Sameera enters the hall where everyone is and she quickly go and touch s.d's feet as soon as she finds her there…she just wanted to gain her attention and is trying her best to do…

Riddhima is very surprised with her act and also to see the new side of sameera…..


Everyone assembles in the party hall including s.d….sid goes upstairs to bring amaranth there as the party is held especially for him….meanwhile,maan and geet are stealing glances and this burning sameera more….after a minute sid comes down with amaranth…geet goes to him and hugs him…."gud evening papa"ab aap kese hai?"[how are u now?] He smiles to her..hum teek hai bete aur bahuth kush bhi hai aap ke liye….[iam very happy for u]


He then settles in a couch…geet introduces meera to him as she never introduced her to him but only told about him…

"Papa ye hai meera.meri best frnd and meera ye hai papa…"

Meera gets lost in her thoughts as soon as she see amaranth….but greets him..


Meera to geet:geet I think I know ur papa..i mean I have seen him somewhere already…but kuch yaad nahi aaraha hai ki mein ne kaha dekha hai…

[geet i think i know ur papa...i have seen him already but not able to recall where i have seen him]


Geet:is mein koun si badi baat hai..dekha hoga kisi interview ya magazine mein..o itna bada business man jo hai..khair ye sab chodo aur chalo ja kar sab ke liye snacks lathe hai…

[may be...wat's the big deal in it?he is a top most bussiness man...you would have seen him in some magazine or interview...ok leave it now and come with me...]

Riddima also introduces sam to amaranth and sam again surprises with her same act…

Ridz:sam tu teek tho hai na..aaj kya hogaya hai tuje..tu itni ajeeb kyun behave kar rahi hai…..

[sam..are u ok...why are u behaving so diffrent today?]

Sam:kuch nahi…just giving respecting to elders….


Ridz:hmmm(teasingly)...

After some time they all have snacks and enjoy talking to each other but the only one who felt bored is sam…..

Nupur:are yar ye party hai ya koi meeting..hum sab yuhi charcha karthe hi rahenge ya kuch mazaa karenge bhi…

[oh wat's this?is this a party or else an official meeting?this is not at all appearing like a party..are we going to continue with meeting?let's enjoy the part na...]

Sid:ha nupur u r right…the party is very bore….

Mayank:baat tho tum dono ne sahi ki hai…chalo kuch karthe hai…

[yes u both are right...chalo let's to something..]

Maan:par hum karenge kya?

[ok but wat are we going to do??]

Ridz and geet at a time says…truth or dare(ridz),anthyakshari(geet)


Sid:ha anthyakshari khelenge bahuth maza aayega….

[ha antyakshari is a very gud idea...we gonna have a gun in it..]


Everyone agrees but riddhima is sad becoz no one is ready to agree with her and even sid too..whom he love the most…


Ridz:(st)isiliye..isiliye muje geet ko dekkar gussa aatha…sab uski gun gaathe rehthe…whatever she says is ramayan to all…y this much attention only to her??Y not me???

Her restless in not gone unnoticed by sam….

Sam:(st)hmm…lagtha hai muje meri weapon mil gayi is behenji(geet) ko is family se door karne ke liye..(smirks)

[hmm..it seems that i got the weapon to throw this behenji(geet) out of this family...]


Amaranth and savitri goes upstairs to take rest..so that children may get privacy and can enjoy as they wish….

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love u all...
-mona

next part coming up>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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