MG FF: kya mujhe pyaar hain pt 10 pg 112 3/8 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
CS and part 1
OMG that was fantastic...
Geet calls Maan Monkey Khurana and Maan calls Geet Pagal Handa...
their internship is gonna be remarkable...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


thanku neha dear... 😃😊
yeah priya is so sweet n ha no villains in this ff... only maan n geet n family bonding...
hahaha search engine for names lol... 😆 jyothi search engine... 😆
hey i made a mistake i wrote pg n given as pagal handa... thanku i will correct it...
hey what pic u have pm me i will include... 😃



great.no villains...wow...fir to story nok-jhok me hi aagey jayegi...muah for this
hahaha jyothi search engine...
chalo maine tumhara bhala kar diya...hehehehe..
okkay will pm u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: neha5058



great.no villains...wow...fir to story nok-jhok me hi aagey jayegi...muah for this
hahaha jyothi search engine...
chalo maine tumhara bhala kar diya...hehehehe..
okkay will pm u...


yeah... got ur pm...
wow such a cute pic... 😆
i will use for sure.. but have to think...
hey dear i still didnt comment on ur ff... sorry ha..
by today evening i will read n comment... using net throygh mobile... so cant read... 😭 sorry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Awesomeloved this tom and jerry maaneet
plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW. THEY DONT LIKE EACH OTHER BUT ARE GOING TO END UP WORKING TOGETHER
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

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thanku so much for ur likes n somments... 😃
but the likes r reduced a lot... i am so sad... 😭
plz plz all of u hit like n do comment... they mean a lot to me...
plz plz do comment... tell me whether u r liking this ff or not...
n add 'maneetmaneet' id for pms...

UPDATING... 😊

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

chapter 2:


Guys chalo andar chalte hain. Its getting late told maan n geet at the same time.

Thats it reality struck them. They rewined the voice which they heard.

Their eyes r widened in shock. Others closed their eyes in horror.

TUM YAHA KAAM KAR RAHE HO? Both maan n geet shouted on top of their lungs.

they both r glaring at each other angrily. As if they can burn each other by their eyes. They didnt expect that after college they will end up doing work at same place. They dont know why they hate so much. But cant stand at same place for even 1 min.


guys.. plz listen tried to adi to speak.

Maan n geet just glared at him which made him shut.

Tum yaha kyun kaam kar rahe ho? Asked geet to maan angrily.

Where should I work n where I should not work usse tume kya lena dena retorted maan.

Ha agar muje pata hota ki tum yaha kaam kar rahe ho then I would have not entered in this area only told geet.

Why late? jao yaha se told maan.

Mujhe kyun jaana hain main yaha pehle ayi hu. Tum jao yaha se told geet angrily.

Tumko site problem hain shayad isiliye thik se dikai nahi deta told maan sarcastically.

Tumara matlab kya hain asked geet.

Mera matlab hain ms. Pagal handa main yaha pehle ayi hu tum uske baad ayi ho told maan.

Kya kaha tumne pagal handa?? u monkey khurana retorted geet.

Tum pagal ho.

Tum bndar ho.

Pagal pointed her finger to him.

Bandar told maan n pointed his finger towards her.

PAGAL

BANDAR.

SHUT UP all the friends shouted in unison.

They both stopped their fight n turned towards them.

Will u both stop ur fight ?? asked sam seriously.

Dekho maine kuch nahi kiya sab kuch iss monkey khurana ne kiya.

Ha ha tum tho kuch karti hi nahi hain na? Asked maan sarcastically.

Tum tum chup hi raho. Tumara wajah mera 1st day bigad gaya told geet.

Ha waise main bohot khush hu tumare chehra dekne se retorted maan.

Guys stop it u both now. We r getting late shouted pari.

Hey babes chill let them continue their fight na its fun told dev.

Tumko fun lagta hain ha asked geet angrily.

Dev gulped his saliva seeing her angry.

Geet plz yaar andar chalte hain told pinky cooly.

Chalo geet why u r spoiling ur first day. Chalo na chalo na plz I am very excited to work here told pari.

Geet rolled her eyes seeing pari super duper excited.

Thik hain chalo told geet.

U MK better dont come before me in working hours pata nahi gusse mein, main kya karti warned geet to maan.

Nahi geet ji mujhe bohot darr lag raha hain told maan sarcastically.

Geet glared at him n grinted her teeth n told chalo pinky.

Geet, pinky, pari n sam left from there n went in.

Maan, rahul, dev n adi r left.

Rahul tried to change maan's mood. Hey dude meri princess kaisi hain?

Even though rahul n dev r flirts they treat maan's sister as their own sister. They all are friends from childhood. If priya wants wont get anything from her bro then she will ask rahul, dev n adi. All of them r partner in crime.

When maan heard his princess name n smile crept on his lips.

Ha dude she is fine but again he frowned.

Kya hua yaar? Asked dev.

Pata nahi aaj sab ko kya hua iss pagal handa is tareef kar rahe hain told maan.

Ufff yaar leave it na. Pata nahi tum dono itna fight kyun karte hainasked rahul.

Ha inn dono ko tho mauka chahiye. Aaj tho hum bach gaye. Pata nahi 1 yr how can we survive. Agar inn dono aise hi kaam kam jagda zyada kiya tho hum doosra company doondna padega told adi.

All the 3 are staring at him. Adi looked at them n asked kya hua?

Saale kya kaha doosra company? Ha ? Asked maan.

Arey maan main tho mazak kar raha tha. Chalo yaar 5 min left told adi nervously.

They all checked time n hurried inside.

When they r going inside dev told guys kaash aaj koi iss company mein koi hot chik mile.

Again started told frustated maan.

When they reached inside they saw girls r waiting for them.

Kya yaar how much time u will take to come asked pinky.


Still 5 min is left suddenly they heard a voice from back. All of them turned back n saw priya coming.

Priya, kya hua? Tum thik tho ho na? Asked worried maan.

Princess bolo kya hua asked dev impatiently.

Kuch nahi bhai main aap logon ko all the best bolna hi bhul gayi told priya n smiled at them.

All sighed in relief.

Priya tumne humko dara hi diya told geet.

Chill geet di told priya.

Priya hugged maan, dev, rahul, adi, geet, sam, pinky n pari n wished them all the best for their first day.

All the best guys told priya n added n ha dev bhai I want u to pick me up from the collge in the evening.

Main evening ok sure told dev.

Kyun I should not come kya frowned maan.

Bhai morning u dropped me na told priya.

Hmm thik hain told maan n smiled.

Aur ha guys dont forget to give me party when u get first salary told priya winking at them.

Darling dont worry hum sab milke shopping jayange told geet.

Wow geet di shopping. I love u n hugged her.

They broke the n priya left from there.

Princess how u came? Asked rahul.

Dont worry bhai main cab mein ayi hu told priya.

Oh ok college jaane ke baad msg karna told maan.

Ok bhai. Bye. N she left from there.

They all went inside n asked in the reception.

Excuse me. We r new interns here told pari.

Oh ok. Go to the conference hall. Boss will come in 10 min.

ok thanku n they left to conference room.

They all settled maan n geet sat far from each other.

Guys kab ayega yeh boss asked pari.

Pari chill na yaar. She told na 10 min told sam.

Geet n pinky giggled. Pari made a baby face.

Just then other 2 new interns came n sat with them.

Those 2 new interns are sasha n naintara.

They all introduced themselves. Dev eyes fell on nt.

Wow she is looking hot thought dev.

Nt is a nice girl n a middle class girl who completed her architecture. For her relationships should last forever. Where as saha is a arrogant, rude girl.

She introduced her self, hii guys I am sasha from london uni.

All of them casually told hii.

Then the MD of singhania constructions came into the conference room. He is 27 years old one n only heir of singhania's. He is karan singhania married to his lady love shilpa a year back. He is very good at heart n down to earth. He is best friend of yash handa n he knows geet very well. He met maan in several business parties n they too r close. He entered the hall n gave a warm to all the interns. His eyes fell on geet n maan n gave a nervous smile.

Geet n maan didnt understans what happened to him.

Karan spoke: good morning everyone. Welcome to singhania constructions. I am very happy to have u all here n starting ur career in this firm. Hope u give ur best n bring this company top. Ok I will not trouble more with my speech I know how its boring.

All of them laughed at his comment.

Thats like my interns. When I entered I saw all of u all r very serious. Now its nice. Ok now the head architech shilpa singhania will tell u about ur duties n under whom u should work. Ok I have to attend meeting now. Have a nice day. Bye.

Saying so he left from there.

Going out he called to someone n when the other person picked the phone he told

yaar I am so sorry. Ab mujhe pata nahi kya hoga.

God.. agar tum mujhe pehle bata deta tho I would have told u.

mujhe kya pata shilpa will take care of all these things.

Thik hain I can tell u only one thing.

Kya?

ALL THE BEST n laughed out loud.

YASHHH

arey karan cool yaar. Aur ha meri behen ko tang mat karna warned yash.

Ji Mr. handa. Ab main rakhti hu. Meeting jaana hain.

Thik hain yaar. Bye.

They cut the call n karan left for meeting n yash resumed his work.


Precap: what yash n karan talking about.

Poor maan n geet going home by walk. What happened?


NOTE: CAN ANY ONE MAKE VM AND BANNER FOR THIS FF. PLZ REPLY ME.


Hii friends this is part 2. hope u all liked it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

P.S. : Guys I created new ID for pms. Those who all want pms for my works plz add

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love

-jyothi.



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update joyti yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg


awsome

loved nit



yaar write more os..loved ur os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: uteem

omg



awsome

loved nit



yaar write more os..loved ur os


ya sure dear i will write...
yesterday i wrote one os na... i am giving epilouge for that... 😊

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