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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey friends iam writing os for the first time...hope u all would like it...
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

[banner credit goes to sakshi di]

standing in one corner of the crowded and brightlit grounds where his bro's reception is held,maan dug his hands deeper in to his pockets and let out a small sigh as he had expected..his friend yash was already entertaining a group of the bride's friends and he haden't even got as hello...of course maan knew which girl he'd like to say hello to...he had spotted her as soon as the wedding party arrived,looking pretty in a white saree with loose hair...she's just looking stunning and gaining everyone's attention ...

just then groom,maan's elder brother dev also looked up and beckoned maan to his side with a little head jerk..."probably drink"thought maan as he walked towards the decorated stage were his bro and bhabi were smiling politely to family members and cameras...

he waited there for 10 minutes and then he started walking back as they were busy in their world...but this time with smile on his face...when is about to step down his bhabi called him asked him for a favour...she had brought a wedding gift for her husband and needed someone to collect it from her friend geet...she asked him with pleading eyes..."will uplz bring it for me?"
maan smiled at her and said."sure bhabi"

grinning slightly maan walked towards the gaggle of girls who were loading their plates with food...maan went there hesitatingly and asked"hmmexcuse me..who's geethere?actually the meera bhabhi asked me to bring me the gift she brought for her hubby..oh i mean bride"
then the girl in the white saree looked up from her plate and smiled at maan..."mein geet hoonoon and here is that"...she pulled a silver wrapped box from the bag which was hanging on her shoulder and handed it to maan...
she soon became busy in enjoying her desert in her plate...here maan is just esteeming her beauty,her brownish eyes and milky white skin which is glowing like a moon...he could not be able to take his eyes from her and she also knew that maan is admiring her but for her surprise she is enjoying it rather she is also stealing glances of hottie...he came out of the trance when yash patted him.."maan tu yaha kya kar raha hai..waha babhi tuje bhula rahi hai"
maan:ha...woh mein ye gift lekar aa hi raha tha"
maan and yash turned and walked away towards the stage...maan saw her for the last time by turning back...

later party went on till late nite...maan and geet wwere continuosly stealing glances through out the party..they want to talk to each other but could not be able to gather courage as they were strangers to each other...and if they gathers courage..someone or the other intrudes...maan realized the crowd in the party was thinning and alsothe chance to admire and talk to her'atlast maan gathers his courage and movesforward to talk to geet but geet's mom intrudes this time'"geet bete chalobahuth der hogayi hai..tumhari papa car mein wait kar rahe hai chalo"she don't even give her a chance to talk and grabs her from there...Geet leaves the place by continuosly looking back at maan who stood there disappointingly''...

After 1 year...


Maan is looking at wedding photos and stop's at one of the photos of his bro's wedding which was placed in that by him'''his wife who is perplexed in selecting her outfit asks him"maan mein koun si saadi pehnu?"

He smiles and says"white"

She notices that maan is busy in wedding photos..she comes
to him smiles and hugs his arm tightly.."aapko abhi bhi yaad hai ye din"
Ha geet mein kese bhool saktha hoon'

Maan muje yekin hi nahi ho raha hai mein aaj aapke paas hoon'she rests her head on maan's chest and hugs him tightly..maan hugs her
back'.kitni ajeeb bath hai na maan..ek hi meeting mein hum dono ko ek doosre se pyar hogaya'.hum usdin baat bhi nahi kar paye..geet smiles...par kismat mein hum dono ka milna likha tha..isiliye babaji ne aapko meri zindagi mein bheja...

Ha geet ..tum teek keh rahi ho'yaad hai jab hamare pariwar walo ne humse rishte ki baat ki thi hum dono ko pata hi nahi tha ki hum usi se shaadi karne jaa rahe hai jisse hume pyar karthe hai


Flash back:


Maan tries to find geet's address by himself without asking
his bhabi as she may feel it weird'but he cant able to find her and it is
impossible to find someone whose address is not known in a big city like Mumbai and that too he don't know any thing about her except her name..he cant ask his bhabhi also...


There geet know everything about maan but she cant able to
gather courage to meet him again and express his love'morever she feels that her financial status is far away from his'so she thinks that there is no possibility to get maan's love...


As usual maan tries to find out geet's address'as he is msk
and nothing can be impossible to him how much tough may be the task'.there is nothing in this world that msk cant get'..he is sitting in living with a laptop in front of him..he gets a call from the person to whom he assigned the task to find geet's whereabouts and her full details...

Maan:ha bol...

Man:sir I got the complete details of her'shall I say u now??

Maan notices dev and his bhabi nt coming towards them with
savitri devi,his mother...

Maan:ha u do one thing u come and meet me in the office ok...

Man:ok sir...

Dev:hey maan wat are u doing?and who was that on phone?

Maan:ha wo office ka kaam that ho...


s.d sits besides him...

s.d:u leave this office stuff now and listen to me now...

maan:ha mom tell me..

s.d:humne aapke liye ek ladki pasand ki hai aur aaj shaam ko
use dekne jaana hai...

maan:mom shaadi ab'wo stammers'nahi maan humne bahuth wait
karliya hai not now'we are going to see that girl today and that's final...


Maan(st):shayad geet ke saath nahi hai meri life mein...

Ok mom I'll come home soon...

Saying so he leaves to office sadly'''.he also calls to that
person and says him not to come to office as there is no need to find any thing about her anymore...


Meanwhile,geet's mom and dad informs her that she is gonna
meet with a person to evening and if she likes him then they'll proceed forward...



At evening maan comes to the girls home with his family'.he
is very sad as he cant get geet now'.he just came there becoz his mom is compelling him to do and he cannot say no to his mom...moreever,he don't know whether heet loves him or not even if he finds her...


He just sat there in a couch looking down and some times
checking his mobile,as he is least interested in that girl that too with out seeing her'there geet is also inj the same condtn'their elders were talking themselves'.geet's mom asks geet"bete aap ko ye rishta pasand hai?"


Geet answers her without any expression in her face"aap ki
marzi"

s.d who is there to make geet her daughter in law smiles
happily
"maan bete aap ko geet pasand aayi?"

Maan and geet are shocked to hear each other's name and
looks up instantly...

They both are in cloud 9 as they are going to marry the one
whom they love...


After somedays maaneet marriage took place..it was big fat
wedding one can never forget...


Flash back ends...

Maan:aur aaj hum bahuth kush hai...


Geet:aur o kushi dugni karne ke liye hamari zindagi mein ek
nanhi si jaan aane waali hai...

Kya??he breaks the hug

Geet tum sach keh rahi ho?he andstarts cupping her face...ha
maan tears roll down her cheeks...


He wipes her tears and kisses her both the cheeks and then
forehead...😉


Thank u soo much geet..meri zindagi mein aane keliye aur
itni saari kushi bharne ke liye'.thank u soo much'.he hugs her tightly i love u meri jaan...


Geet hugs back tightly...love u too maan...


After 8 months:


Geet delivers twins..a girl and boy'boy child named as karan
and baby girl as kushi...

And they lived happily ever after with their kids...

hope u all like it...i know it's not that good but still tried it...

waiting for ur comments...😍

love u all...

mona


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dumas thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on your very first os it was very cute and beautifully written just next time please put english translations thank you for the pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...
love it...
its very sweet & cute
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mona dear awesome..too good...Really good to refresh my mind..to write too too much heavy work 😭
u...narrated beautifully..whole story in one go...I m livin it...thax for lovely lov story 😃
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww such a sweet cute lovely OS
loved it a lot yar
thanks for pm
_Jyothi_ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
awesome os dear...
loved it...
awww such a cute concept...
love at first site for both of them but couldnt express...
atlast they r one n twins...
wow... awesome dear enjoyed reading it...

DDbiggestfan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS 😳
Simply loved it 👏
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hw cute...
loved deir story..
dey r destined to be with each other..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayeee
cho chweet
sacha pyaar koi na koi rah bana hi leta hain

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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
superb update
nd thanks fr pm

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