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hey gals! i knw i still had to reply many of comments but as u know that its my Brother's wedding day before yesterday so i m still in his home only nd really had very short tym as u all must be knowing how much chaos would be dere at the home of wedding so i thought of updating the part first nd den replying the rest of the comments... hope you all will understand...

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Part 5:

After Breakfast Maan gets up from table nd started heading towards outside. Everyone thought dat he's leaving for office wen he had to take Geet for her Pagphere. Dey wanted to stop him but none had courage to talk to him. Amidst of all dis Geet was sitting relaxed because she knows she don't have right to expect anything like dat from him. Savitri Devi was about to stop him wen he himself stopped in his tracks nd turned to look at dem

"Geet get ready fast. We have to go to your house for Ur Pagphere. I am waiting for u at hall." He said nd headed towards hall leaving everyone behind bewildered nd Geet had almost choked wid her juice.

It took Geet sometym to register wat he had just said. Dis he just asked her to get ready nd he's taking her to her home wen he was supposed to go to office, she thought. Nd as the realization hits her dat he was actually getting ready for taking her to her home automatically a smile adorned on her lips seeing his concern towards her. Once again he had made her believe dat he'll care for her for whole of the lyftym as he promised.

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Everyone was still sitting over dere wid shock written over dere. No one could still able to believe what Maan has just said. He was leaving all his work just to take Geet to her home for Pagphere. For first few seconds even Geet was not able to fathom that whether she was dreaming or Maan really had asked her to get ready.

"Koi Please mujhe pinch karo. Did Bro just ask Geet to get ready nd he's taking her for Pagphere" Dev spoke breaking the Long-Term silence. [Somebody Please Pinch me. Did Bro just ask Geet to get ready nd he's taking her for Pagphere?]

"My Pleasure" Vicky said who was sitting in between Annie nd Dev while pinching him hard on his arm making him wince

"Ouch!!! Not so hard Vicky" he replied while rubbing his arm while NT just rolled over her eyes seeing dem making a fuss out of simple thing.

"Even I can't believe this. Maan Bhai had never missed his office for anything, but today..." Annie spoke while still in shock making Geet thoughtful.

"Is he compromising his work because of me" She thought wen she listened to Annie

"Acha stop all of you now. Maan had never missed his office that doesn't mean that he can't miss it today. Nd if you all have forgot then let me remind you all that Maan had asked Geet to get ready fast so Geet bte you go nd Get ready nd don't pay any heed to their nonsense nd Annie you go wid Geet nd help her ok." Dadimaa said in between seeing Geet thoughtful knowing very well what's going in her mind right now

"Ji Dadimaa" Geet said nd gets up from the table nd headed towards her room along wid Annie who was continuously chirping about which Dress will Geet wear today and all.

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After whole 25 mins. Geet came downstairs along wid Annie after getting ready where Maan nd everyone was waiting for her. As soon as everyone noticed her descending downstairs dey couldn't help demselves from not admiring her including Maan. For a moment Maan was not able to remove his gaze from her. She's looking extremely pretty in that Blue Sari that Annie had selected for her enhancing her milky white skin nd the innocence on her face was just adding charm to her beauty. It didn't seem that she had done any make-up yet she was looking beautiful in her natural beauty. In all total she was looking breath-taking rather nd had certainly taken Maan's breath away for a moment.

Geet noticed Maan's gaze on her nd automatically a blush crept on her cheeks nd she lowered her gaze feeling shy seeing him looking at her like that. She don't know why but she had summersault in her stomach wen she saw Maan drinking her beauty wid his eyes. She knows dis is wrong she doesn't have to feel in this way yet she can't stop herself from not blushing seeing her husband looking intently at her. She again lifts up her gaze only to find him still looking at her unblinkingly.

"OMG! This is really unbelievable" Vicky said out loud bringing Maan nd Geet back from their reverie nd Maan immediately looked other way realizing what he was doing.

"What so unbelievable Vicky that you had to spoke out so loud" Annie chided him for ruining the perfect moment between Maan nd Geet which dey both thought that she didn't noticed but least dey know that she had noticed it the tym only wen she saw Geet blushing.

"Arey didn't you guys noticed. Geet Bhabhi aur bro ke clothes ekdum matching me hai. See Blue-Blue" Vicky said while looking at both of dem. and dis is wen Geet realize that he was actually right. [Arey didn't you guys noticed. Geet Bhabhi nd bro's clothes are in mathing. See Blue-Blue]

She didn't realize dis fact that she herself had chosen Blue Shirt for Maan wen Annie asked her for wearing Blue Saree nd dey both had wore the matching color clothes until Vicky spoke. She looked at Maan who was looking other way to hide his embarrassment for gaping at Geet so openly nd Geet thought may be he didn't feel it comfortable nd must be thinking that she had done dis purposely but least she knows that the reason was something different.

"So what Vicky. Ab wo dono couples hai to is tarah se to ek doosre ko compliment karenge hi na. It's the sign of a happy couple" Dev said as a matter of fact [So what Vicky. Now since dey both are couple den dey'll compliment each other like dis only. It's the sign of a happy couple]

"But Dev Bhai even u nd NT Bhabhi are also couple nd dat too a happy one but I haven't seen u both complementing each other like dis ever, infact I hardly see u getting agreed on d same thing, so do u want to say that u both are not happy wid each other:" Vicky replied non-chantily to which NT was just fumed in anger nd Dev gave him an angry glare indicating him to keep his mouth shut.

"Stop it you all now. Geet I am waiting for you at car. Nd Dev since I m not going to office today so u pls take care of the meetings that had been lined up today." Maan spoke in between before dey all analyze him nd Geet as a couple further.

"Sure Bro you don't have to worry for anything" Dev assured him to which Maan just nodded nd headed outside to his car.

Savitri Devi just shakes her head on her workaholic grandson who just cant be in peace even on his day-off nd den turned to Geet who was looking at Maan's retreating figure thinking that he sacrificed his work because of her

"Geet beta, dnt worry he's like that only wen it comes to work nd u knw that. But make sure till the tym you both were at Ur home he don't even mention about his work ok." Savitri Devi said while patting her cheeks to which Geet just smiled lightly nd touched her feet for her blessings.

"God Bless you. Now go fast he's waiting for you" she said nd Geet headed outside where Maan was waiting for her.

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Here in the car Maan was sitting in his car with his eyes closed leaning back his head at the seat thinking of the moment which had just passed.

Maan's Monologue:

Wat was I doing? I was gaping at her that too so openly. No doubt she was looking beautiful no cut that breath-taking but that doesn't mean that I will look so intently at her. Nd I didn't remove my gaze Inspite of her watching me looking at her so intently also. Wat she must be thinking right now. On one hand I keep on saying to her that I can't fulfill her any expectations that she had from this marriage as I m so much in Love wid her sister nd on the other hand I myself is giving her false hopes. Even in the morning I just wanted to hug her wen I saw those tears in her eyes. it wont be a first tym wen I would have hugged her I mean I had hugged her many tymes before den also wen she feels sad for anything but that was just a friendly hug but now everything changed. Nd wen Vicky said that he wants to kiss her hands den y did I gave him an angry glare. Was I jealous of him at that moment but y would I wen I know the warmth of their relationship from the very first day wen dey become friends. He use to give all dese stupid comments before too but I never gave him an angry glare infact I too use to join wid him but today I didn't feel good wen Vicky said that he wants to kiss her hands. Y?

With the change in our relationship everything between us has also changed. Oh! How badly I wished that everything turned out to be like before where dere was no awkwardness between me nd Geet nd we talk each other freely, tease each other freely nd even flirt wid each other freely but that cant be done. I can't run away from the reality and the reality is that Geet is my wife today nd wid this reality everything changed between us. But still that doesn't mean that I would have done what I did few mins. Back. I only Love Sameera nd wat I did few mins back was wrong nd I think Geet too was not comfortable wid it. I'll apologize to her wen she'll come.

(Maan's Monologue ends)

Maan slowly opened his eyes after lot of questioning nd answering to himself nd looked outside the window only to find Geet coming towards the car. He immediately straightens himself nd opens the door of the car for her. She slowly sits inside nd he started driving the car.

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15 mins had been passed but none spoke to each other. Geet looked at Maan who was silently driving looking ahead at the road. She sighed nd den looked outside the window

Geet's Monologue:

Why is he not talking to me? Is he angry on me? May be. May be he's thinking that I purposely matched the colors of our clothes to get remarks from everyone that we are a happy couple nd may be he's not comfortable wid dis PDA. But Babaji u knw Na I didn't did dis purposely. I mean its true that I agreed to it wen Annie asked me to wear this color but I completely forgot that even he's wearing blue color shirt. Tu bhi na Geet ekdum budhu hai [Geet u r really stupid], u should have remember wat color is he wearing especially wen u urself had chosen dat color for her. nw see he's not talking to you.

I knw he hates PDA but what should I do; I didn't did this purposely but yet it didn't change my mistake. He has been so caring towards me. He even missed his office also for me, had compromised wid his work nd I m just making things difficult. Those days were gone wen we are so free to each other nd today's reality is that we both are married nd dis marriage is based on compromise. He still loves Sameera Di nd I can't make things difficult not even by mistake. I should apologize to him. Yes I'll apologize to him nd will try to make him understand that I didn't did dis purposely.

(Geet's Monologue ends)

"I am sorry" Geet said all of a sudden nd Maan instantly stopped his car listening to her apology.

"Y is she saying Sorry to me wen I m supposed to say sorry to her" Maan who was thinking how to apologize till now thought to himself wen he heard Geet saying sorry out of blue.

"Wat?" He said while looking at Geet who was looking at him wid baby face

"I am sorry" she repeated again

"But Geet why are you saying Sorry" he asked her confusingly

"Wo... for the matching of the colors of our clothes. I don't know how it slipped from my mind that u too is wearing same color shirt wen Annie asked me to wear blue Saree. Trust me I didn't did dis purposely. Actually I as getting ready in so much hurry that it slipped from my mind nd I landed up wearing same color of Saree of which u were wearing Shirt Inspite of myself selecting that color for you in the morning. I am so sorry for all those remarks that Vicky had given because of my stupidity. I know hw much u hate PDA yet it all happens because of me. I m..." she keeps on blabbering only to be interrupted by Maan

"Chup Bilkul Chup" he said placing his finger on her lips stopping her from saying further.

Though he really liked it wen she was blabbering as after a long tym he was watching her talk so much but yet he needs to stop her because she was apologizing for no mistake of hers. It was he who needs to be apologizing. Geet felt a shiver down her spine wen she felt the touch of Maan's finger on her lips nd her heart did the flip-flop wid that touch but she immediately controlled herself thinking that it is wrong.

"Geet you don't have to be sorry for anything. It was not your mistake. Nd I really didn't felt bad for Vicky's comments because I knw that it's his habit to speak without thinking twice so u don't have to feel guilty for anything hhmmm." He said in a calm voice still having his finger on her lips unknown of the havoc he was creating in Geet with his simple touch.

Geet battled her eye lashes seeing him still placing his finger on her lips not sure how to ask him to remove it. Maan as if understanding wat is she thinking immediately removed his finger nd looked other way.

"So you are not angry on me" she asked innocently nd Maan again looked at her

"No I m not angry on you" Maan said wid a small smile

"Den why were u not saying anything till now?" She asked still having doubt that he might be angry on her

"Wo actually I was thinking something" Maan said not sure how to tell her that he was thinking how to apologize of what he did few mins. Back

"I know what you are thinking?"

"You know?" Maan asked while knotting his brows in confusion as how did she know what is going in his mind

"Ya. I know what you are thinking. You must be thinking about your work only Na. there must be so much important work over dere nd here u had taken a day-off. I know you had compromised with it because of me but u shouldn't have done this I mean I would have gone alone too." She said innocently nd Maan just shakes his head at her innocence.

"Geet, first of all I haven't compromised any work. I mean ya dere is work at office but it can be handle by Dev too so u see I haven't compromised my work for anything nd as far as coming with you is concerned den Geet its my duty as a husband to take you to ur home for Pagphere just like as a wife it was ur duty to take care of my daily needs. When as a wife you haven't backed out from Ur duty den how can u expect me to back out. Geet its true that the foundation of our relationship is just a compromise yet dere are few duties from which none of us can back out nd dis one is from one of dem" He said while removing her every doubt

Geet: Are you sure it won't cost your work

Maan: ya I m 100% sure that it won't cost my work. Now if all Ur doubts are cleared den can we go now? Maa nd Papa must be waiting for us.

Geet nodded her head innocently in approval nd Maan just gave a small smile in return. Geet felt million butterflies running in her stomach seeing him smile.

"He really looks good wen he smiles" she thought nd den immediately shrug off that thought realizing what is she thinking.

Maan raises her eyebrow gesturing "What happen" seeing her facial expression to which Geet just nodded in No. Maan shrug off his shoulders nd de started driving the car.

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After whole 30 mins of drive Maan nd Geet both finally reached Geet's home. Dey were about to get down from the car when Maan's cell phone rang. It was from Adi. He gestured Geet to wait a minute while he takes the call

Maan: ya Adi wat happen?

Adi: g-g-good Morning Sir

"Adi had u called me to wish me good morning" Maan asked irritatingly frustrated from his useless stammering wenever he talks to him.

Adi: y-y-yes Sir, I mean n-n-no Sir. Sorry s-sir.

"Adi!!!! Stop stammering first of all nd come to the point" Maan barked at him while Geet just suppressed her giggle

Adi: Sorry Sir. Wo I just wanted to tell you that u have to come to office urgently

Maan: Adi I told you in the morning only that I m taking a day-off today den y are you calling me to office.

Adi: s-s-sorry Sir but its an emergency. Our London Clients are coming today to sign the deal nd for that u need to be here moreover they need to discuss about the project too.

Maan: Adi ask them to come tomorrow as I can't come to office today or Dev will be there at office ask him to handle the meeting.

Adi: Sorry Maan Sir but you need to be here. They are going back tonight itself nd dey especially wanted to meet you so Dev Sir can't handle this meeting.

"But Adi I..." he stopped in between wen Geet gestured him to give phone to her. Maan don't understand y is she asking for his phone but he didn't want to refuse her either so he just gave his phone to her.

"Hello Adi! It's me Geet. You don't have to worry for anything. He's coming for the meeting." She said without caring what would be Maan's reaction after dis

"Thanks Geet. Thank you so much. But pls make sure that Maan sir reached by 11 as the clients are coming at 11.30 nd before that we need to discuss few points." Adi said nd Geet assures him that he'll be there at tym nd cuts the call. As soon as she turned to give phone to Maan she found him looking at her questioningly.

"Wo Adi has said that you need to reach office by 11. The clients are coming at 11.30 so I think you should go now." she said while avoiding his questioning gaze

"Geet why did u do dis?" he asked without paying heed to what she has just said to him

"What had I done?"

"Geet why did u said to Adi that I am coming to office today. Geet u know once I'll reach the office den I wont be able to be free soon nd right now its important for me to go wid u to your home yet u said to Adi that I m cuming to office." He asked confusingly

"Because I know that those clients must be important for you as if dey were not den Adi wouldn't have called you wen he knows that you had taken a day-off nd if you ignore that because of me den I wont feel good. Already u had compromised wid ur work because of me now I don't want you to compromise anymore that too wen the clients are so important to you so its good if you go to office nd after wen all ur work is finished you can come back over here" she said wid a smile while Maan just cant believe the amount of understanding she had.

"But Geet Maa nd Papa..." He tries to protest only to be interrupted by Geet again

"You don't worry about Bade papa nd Badi Maa. I'll handle dem nd moreover they too would suggest you the same thing that I had said to you so u stop worrying about everything nd go to office or else you'll be late." She intervened in between before he could protest further.

"Ok as you say. I'll cum in the evening to pick you up ok." He said knowing that he can't win from her to which she just nodded nd turned to get down from the car wen Maan hold her wrist stopping her to go.

Geet gets startled wid his sudden action nd turned to look at him. Her heart missed million beats wen she found him leaning closer to her. As a reflex action she started leaning backwards until her back hit the door of car. She looked back nd den at him only to realize that she has been trapped between door nd him nd he's looking at her intently; same look that she had observed in the morning. She tried to read his eyes to know what's going in his mind but failed to read dem

Geet was about to ask him something wen she saw him slowly raising his hand towards her face nd her breathing gets heavied by anticipating his next move. She closed her eyes wen she felt Maan's fingers grazing her face slowly moving towards her forehead. She don't know what it is but she felt an unknown sensation in her wid his touch nd wats more confusing is that she's really liking dis. she felt his fingers caressing her forehead for some moment nd den slowly withdrawing away. Geet immediately opened her eyes wen she felt the warmth of Maan's finger missing. She snapped open her eyes nd looked at Maan who had backed out by now. She looked at him questioningly in order to find her answer

"Wo ur Bindi was not placed properly so I just fixed it." Maan answered while looking other way answering her questioning gaze

It was true that he had raised his hand to fix her bindi only but wen his fingers grazed on her smooth skin den for a moment he had forgotten everything nd started caressing her face. It was a heaven for Maan to feel her soft skin even for a moment. He don't know why but he felt like caressing for some more tym to feel her soft milky white skin. Den his gaze falls on Geet who had her eyes closed nd face flushed nd dis is wen he realizes what he was doing. He was again loosing his senses like morning nd dis may make Geet uncomfortable again. So he immediately fixed her Bindi nd moved his hand back nd looked other side to get control on himself before he can do anything stupid.

Geet touched her forehead nd den slightly smiled realizing that he notices every minute details of her which even she failed to realize. On the other hand Maan was confused with his own behaviour as he himself didn't believed that he was looking at her so closely that he noticed such a small thing on her face. What's wrong wid him

"Thank You" she said in a soft voice breaking the trail of Maan's thoughts. He took a deep breath to get a control on himself nd den looked at her

"Its ok Geet you don't have to say Thank you for such a small thing." He said wid a smile nd Geet too smile wid him

"Geet, I think u should go now or else we both will get Late." He said nd Geet realizes that he was right. She immediately opens the door of the car nd gets down

"Geet, I'll come in the evening to pick you up nd we'll go to Mansion together. Hhmmm"

She nodded in yes nd bid him bye before turning towards her home. Maan watches her until she was disappeared from his eyes nd den drove off to Office.

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Geet took a deep breath before pressing the bell to compose herself. She knows that Arnav nd Madhu will have lots of question wen they will not see Maan wid her. she pray to god silently to give her strength to answer all of dere questions without getting dem worried for her nd Maan's relationship because she knows that wen they will not see him wid her den they'll only think that she had spoiled her own life by agreeing to this alliance nd dis is something she don't want so she just prepares herself for every question of them. She knows that they had full right to expect Maan wid her but how can she ask Maan to be here wid her wen he had such an important work at office. Already he had sacrificed a lot for dis marriage so the least she can do is to not to effect her Lie wid her presence. Thinking this she again takes a deep breath nd presses the bell.

As soon as she presses the bell Madhu opens the door instantly as if she was waiting for her to press bell only.

"Geet, Beta tu aa gayi. I had been waiting for you from so long" Madhu said nd hugged her tight indicating how much she had missed this daughter of hers [Geet, finally u sre here dear]

"I missed you a lot Bachha" Madhu said wid tears in her eyes while still hugging her

"I missed u too Badi Maa" Geet replied while wiping her tears nd pulling back from the hug.

"By the Way I had missed you because at KM dere was no one to scold me wen I get up late but why did u missed me huh? Finally ur biggest trouble had gone from the house" Geet said mischievously trying to light the atmosphere

"Chup Pagal! Since wen the children had started becoming trouble for their parents. Nd tu to meri sabse pyari beti hai y shouldn't I missed u den? U knw I missed you a lot wen I had gone to wake you up at your room but you were not there to say "Badi Maa 5 more mins." Madhu replied while getting emotional [Chup Pagal! Since wen the children had started becoming trouble for their parents. Nd u were my sweetest daughter, y shouldn't I missed u den? U knw I missed you a lot wen I had gone to wake you up at your room but you were not there to say "Badi Maa 5 more mins"]

"Arey Madhu did u planned Geet to make Geet stand at the door only or u'll ask her to come inside too." Both Geet nd Madhu turned to look at the direction only to find Arnav approaching towards dem.

"Bade Papa" she whispered nd immediately ran to hug him tight just like before

"So hw was my Bacha's day today" Arnav asked just like the way he use to ask before

"very good no excellent. U know Bade Papa today I had made breakfast for everyone at KM nd everyone liked it so much nd Vicky had even said also that he wanted to kiss my hands nd'''." Nd she went on saying while Madhu just looked at both of dem conversing like dis. oh! How much she had missed to see this smile on both of their faces after Sameera's death. Just den she realizes that Geet was here alone

"Geet, beta Maan kahan hai?" Madhu asked out of blue interrupting Geet's nd Arnav's talk [Geet, beta where is Maan?]

Geet turned to look at her sumwhere knowing very well that this question must be coming. But the thing for which she was not sure was that what will be Her Badi Maa's reaction wen she'll say that Maan has just dropped her over here nd has gone to office though only she had insisted for it. She needs to explain it to dem by using right sets of words or else they'll get worried for no reason. Thinking dis she looked at Madhu who was waiting for her answer

"Badi Maa wo mere saath nahi aaye hai" [Badi Maa he haven't came wid me] Geet said nd as expected panic appeared on Madhu's face as she registered Geet's word. So does that mean that her fear as right. Her Loving daughter is not happy in dis relationship. She thought nd den again looked at Geet who was standing dere worried looking at her Badi Maa's reaction.


ok so dis is it guys! hopeu all are going to like dis part... dont know hw it came out to be so do let me know how u all find it... Hit the like button if u all like it... will reply the rest of the comments as soon as i get tym till den u keep on reading the update... Pls do Leave ur Comment/criticism its necessary


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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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superb parts!
maan and geet are so understanding!
continue soon!
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Wow Basanti... It was superb update...!!!!

Loved the update sooo much...!!!!

Awww... Both thinking how other is feeling...???😆

lolz Yaar inko jake batao ye sahi nahi soch rahe...!!😆

Hayeee Me sooo much loved the talks of maan & geet...!!!

The way he was lossing his control & same with geet...!!!

uff Hayyee Kya update tha yaar...!!!!

Loved the way Bade papa & badi maa were talking...!!!

Luv ya sooo mcuh aakriti...!!!!

hugs to u...😳
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omg loving these small small gestures. a. really happy toread
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