Silent Cold War, Anguish, Jealousy, Love

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Would you just listen to my heart, it never cries for anyone as did for you, Would you just mind peeking in my heart that what draws me into death is the fear of loosing you, Would you trust me, what i did isn't a meaning of challenges or lies ? Can you feel my pain of breathless wars i fought for you ? Can you read my face of being lost and ordeal from everywhere just to get you back ?

i hope someone answers them already...they are stuck in Fadak padta hai kyunki...kyunki kya Arnav bitwa?...kyunki Arnav bhi kabhi ASR tha...so it will take time i guess but i am so much in love with this show that i really don't mind...they can continue with blowing hot blowing cold...pre-marital banter is far far more enjoyable...confession and marriage can come later...till then they can grab, shake, scream, scratch, glare, kiss, slap( mosquito one), and do whtever they want...:DD

nice post...thanks for the PM

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Beautiful as always Sadaf!! Loved it!!

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Fatima

@.infinite.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Amazing Post Sadaf,...beautifully written <33

sorry Sadaf, i have to go sleep, it's 11:52PM here...i know, very short comment but i have to run :(( mum's yelling at me :( sorryyy!!!🤗next comment will be long, pakka promise :D

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armyofspooks

@armyofspooks

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Wow Sadaf👏 Like really wow!
Ur choice of words and the way you portrayed Arnav's emotions was just WOW!
A very thorough and well written synopsis!

Me Lubhs it!❤️

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Amna

@AmnaIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

WOW ... i dont' usually read posts THAT long..but this i kept gliding through...it was written as if a poem..reminded me of the time when i used to read poems, decode them for my english literature..!! Wot an overpowering use of old english it seems.! you've captured the feelings exceptionally well...i must say - haven't read something written like this in a while, and it felt great..!! i'm a huge fan of old english, with metaphores, and symbolism...just brilliant..👏

This was my MOST fav part - it reminded me of a story i read back in high school..!!! SUPERBLY put together..!!

All in all - i thoroughly enjoyed reading this post..!!! Thank you for the pm..will look forward to reading more of such posts from you..😊

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Shweta

@Shweta_1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: zonera1
Wow!!!I am speecless!!You've penned the emotional state of Arnav so beautifully i really enjoyed it!!Thanx for the pm!!

luved it...😳

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.Jazz.

@.Jazz.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

You amaze me everyday with your beautiful words😍

Awesome post!!👍🏼

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mysterieux

@mysterieux

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

A heart knoweth its own sorrows...how poignant...very beautifully written..⭐️.

Barun did a wonderful job potraying all the emotions from the anguish to shock to relief to anger...

if ASR were watching himself from the sidelines...would he beleive he is the same man who beleives in writing his own fate...creating his own destiny...beleived that will conquerers all...fell prey to his own heart...and how