Bharosa..Bharosa...FF (part 2 on pg 1)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bharosa'. Bharosa'Bharosa'.

Been watching Praichay for past a month😊'and fell for it😳 . Just am not able to convince myself with the present episodes..so wanted to come with my own FF so that it makes me feel better'😳

Next morning the doorbell rings, Mr.Thakral shouting Kunal's name on top his voice enters their house.Seema, Raj chopra, siddhi come out into the living room. Thakral yells at Raj saying" Kaha hei tumhara beta, kunal'bula use bahar'chodunga nahi mei use😡. Kunal comes out of his bedroom as to hearing the shouts as he still has the hangover from last night. He sees Thakral and says " Subah subah tu mere ghar mei kya kar raha hei, aur aise kyun chilla raha hei". Thakral says ki tune meri beti ki zindagi barbaad ki, use kahi ka nahi choda, khud shaadi kar liya pur use chodta kyun nahi tu. Richa ne mujhe sab bataya ki engagement ki raat ko kya huva. Tumne aise kiya hi kaise, bade bade baatein karte ho na..imaandari'insaniyat'principles. Kaha gaye woh saare principles Kunal." Kunal just comes forward " kya problem hei seedha bol, subah subah bhashan mat de". Thakral rushes onto kunal holds hi shirt collar and gusse se bolta hei " Tune meri beti ki engagement tod di, uska izzat lutne ki koshish ki"😕. Everyone is shocked listening to this😲. Kunal pushes away thakru saying " pagal hogaya tu, kya bole jaa rahe ho". Thakral gives a warning to kunal and leaves the house mei toh tumhe court mei dekhunga'barbaad kardunga tujhe kunal'..😭

Everyone is shocked not understanding what on earth is happening in front of them, as kunal just tries to say to his father who sab jhoot hei mei ne kuch nahi kiya papa', he loos at seems and then sidhi'who is shocked with tears in her eyes'😭😭

To be continued'

Look forward for your comments..:)

Luv,

Savi..:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice FF Savi. Do continue soon. Will be waiting to read next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start, please do continue soon and please add me to yoir pm list for the story!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2...

Raj chopra looks at Kunal asking him what is going on….waise thakral aur uski beti toh tumhare peeche haath dhoke pade hei, kabhi nahi sudrenge yeh log. Pur mujhe pata hei mera beta kabhi koi galat kaam kar hi nahi saktha. Still kunal keeps staring at Siddhi as raj says these words and siddhi is just frozen as usual teary eyed😭. Raj and seema leave the room leaving siddhi and kunal alone. Kunal goes near to siddhi " Mujhe pata hei tum kya soch rahi hogi, mei kuch bhi kahunga toh tu bharosa nahi karegi mujh pe is waqt".😔 Siddhi still doesn't even react to all this and keeps staring at kunal. He just walks away into their bedroom.

Kunal at office and still thinking about what all happened that morning. Kunal kaam karne ki koshish karta hei magar siddhi ka chehra hi dikhayi deta hei use. He says to himself " aaj subah jo kuch bhi huva jo kuch bhi thakral ne kaha mujhe koi farak nahi padtha, pur siddhi mujh pe bharosa hi nahi karegi, kaise karegi mei ne toh uske saath us raat …( the kissing marathon flashes out) . He just hits the table hard with his hand. 😡😔

Its evening time and siddhi is helping seems in kitchen for dinner. Seems looks at siddhi who is just calmly cutting vegetables and says " Kya huva siddhi tu kuch bolti kyun nahi". Siddhi just says" Mei thik hoon". Its dinner time when kunal enters the house and seema asks him to join for dinner. Kunal just says he is not feeling hungry and goes to his room. Siddhi takes food for kunal and goes into the bedroom. Kunal is seated by the window, looking outside and in deep thoughts. Siddhi goes near him ,kunal looks at it and says " Mei ne kaha na mujhe bhook nahi hei, mei nahi khaunga. Mei jaanta hoon zarur seema ne bheja hoga tumhe yaha. Tumhe yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi. Tu apne hisab se reh sakthi hei ." He gets up to walk away suddenly siddhi holds his hand . Kunal is shocked and turns to her " hey….kya hei".😕 Siddhi still looking down says " aap beith ke khana kha lijiye". Kunal tries to make an angry face and says mujhe nahi…siddhi interrupts and in a strong voice says " Mei puch nahi rahi hoon aapse..bata rahi hoon. Aap beith ke khana kha lijiye. Aap jab thak nahi khayenge mei yaha se nahi jaungi na aapko jane dungi. Kunal sits down and stares at her while she just hands him the plate and both look at each other seriously. 😲

luv,

savi..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nice yr...loved it..plzzz continue soon waitin for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice work .. Continue soon 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice...plz continue soon...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good work, keep going 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great. I hope CVs are reading this forum as members seem to have better ideas keeping Parichay theme in mind than CV's themselves who seem to have drifted from original plot [ just to create more melodrama].
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ,,,vry nice ,,,,,bahat dino baad koi os mila,,,,plz cntnu

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