ManVeer OS : Prove it to me.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Pink,I loved it so much.please do write more.looking forward to the next one eagerly😃

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Poco, this was yet another amazing OS.

I don't generally read these kind of stuff, but i always read yours :)

gosh, you've got such a flair for writing.

Coming to the OS, it was amazing. You make it so real, that i could seriously see this happening. Though, i doubt the writers of this show have the ability to write as well as you do.

Truly, Manyata is going to turn UV's life upside down when he falls for he. Actually, he is falling for her, slowly. And the last dialogue was just BRILLIANT. Please continue to write more on ManVeer, i am looking forward to more :)

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Wow PC awesome OS 👏👏⭐️⭐️❤️❤️ If only this could happen in the show it would be a treat ...hope you were in CV team PC are a gifted writer...actually while reading it I was visualizing the scenes

Plzzz do write more and thx u for this amazing OS🤗

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

WOW Poco!!!Such a brilliant writer u are👏luved it to the core😛...I seriously hope CVs get some idea from ur OS...plz continue this one if u can...now I m officially a fan of ur OSs❤️

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KaShfan7

@KaShfan7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

omg that was an amazing OS! 👏

Your writing skills are just too good, it was so realistic!

I actually could see it all playing in my head.

Too bad this is only an OS, I would love to know what happens next!

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..SchnellBus..

@..SchnellBus..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

OH MY GOD
what can be beautiful than your OS poco?
Like srsly
I had a big smile while reading ur OS.
Simply AMAZING 😍👏
👏

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584898

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

as always - awesome. Pinky, I am falling in love with UdayVeer. He is such a spicier character and a mysterious one. At times, mujhe lagta hai kya writer ko bhi pata hai ki UV ke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai?😆