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Posted: 13 years ago
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I know 'fun posts' are the mantra to popularity in this forum and I completely revel in reading them myself. But the 'grandma soul' within just doesn't rest until I have let out the serious stuff.😭


It is the right time now for Arnav to see what Khushi can bear for someone who shows even a little affection to her...without bearing any grudges for the past. And this is 'ARNAV', the man she was dying to see a glimpse of affection from.

She sees it, is overwhelmed with only a very small dose of it. She should now be in a tranced state where she keeps replaying his sweetness to her. As this thought process deepens, she will also think about the times she has seen him withdraw, harden in a moment and stand alone with pain in his eyes.

This time she should come out of the trance determined to know what makes him what he is and innocently think that she can and will wipe out all his pain from his life, take it upon herself before letting it overshadow him again. After all, she is 'Khushi". That's what she does, right?

So, when she walks into RM next time with the bangles on her hand, she would want to seek out Anjali.
( really hope nothing happens to Anjali, all side characters on one side, but Anjali can play the 'cupid' most potently ).

The scene: [ Given all the morbid speculations of 'separation' desperately want this to happen before that track starts ]

Khushi walks into Anjali's room very hesitantly. She is immersed in thoughts and Anjali sees her worried,tensed face.
The hospitable Anjali sits her down and enquires what's bothering her.
Khushi, finds it difficult to take 'Arnav''s name after last night...but manages to stutter it out.
"Aa-rnav ji..."
"Haa, Khushiji, chote, kya hua use? [ yes, Khushiji, what's wrong with Chote? ]

Khushi turns to Anjali with a jerk.
"wahi to hum jaan na chahte hain Anjali ji, kya hua hain unhe...kya hua tha unhe? [ that is what I want to know, what is wrong with him, what did happen so wrong with him? ]
woh...unke aakhon mein itna dard kyun hain...kyun woh apne taqleef se bahar nahi aa pate hain...main unhe aise nahi dekh paati hun...main unhe- ". [ there...there is some kind of pain that I see in his eyes...why can he not come out of his sadness...I cannot see him like this...I want to- ]
She stops reaslising she is going too far. What would Anjali ji think of her sudden interest in Arnav?

But Anjali has tears in her eyes. She gently prods Khushi...
"Aap unhe...kya? Khushi ji, aap ko chote ki fiqar hoti hain na?"
[ You want to...what? Khushiji, you worry about chote,no? ]

Khushi looks at Anjali. She cannot hide the helpless love she feels for Arnav in those expressive eyes of hers.
"Nahi woh hum..." but emotions over take her and she decides knowing about Arnav is more important that playing these hide and seek games. [ no, i just...]
"Anjali ji, aap se behtar to unhe koi nahi jaan ta. Lekin hum bhi jaan gaye hain...aapne dil se woh bhaagte rehte hain...us dil mein itna pyaar bhara hain,,,unhe chupate rehte hain...aur khud ko hi pareshaan karte rehte hain...[ Anjaliji, no one knows him better than you do, but I know this now too...he keeps fleeing from his heart...there is so much love in it...he keeps hiding that...and tortures himself in the process..]
Anjali ji, unhe to mein yeh sab nahi pooch sakti, lekin agar aap mujhe batayengi, to main aapko yakeen ke saath kehti hun...main unki dard ko unse bohot door kar doongi...unhe..."
[ Anjaliji, I cannot ask him these things, but if you tell me the reason, I can assure you that I will take all the pain from his life as far away from him as possible ]

Anjali was listening to Khushi with tears in her eyes but then suddenly she catches Arnav standing behind the door curtain, He is looking at Khushi. His eyes...His eyes have never looked more vulnerable in years...


Do not have much time to convert the dialogues into english.
If anybody wants that, will try to do it.

But please let me know what u think.
After this one scene, I would be much more at peace with the hate directions that the CVs want to take. (although, with the amnesiac CVs, what is a scene !!! )



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wesha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am beginning to have serious doubts about my writing skills...🥺


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Posted: 13 years ago
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lets see what happens next but i really want khushi to show some interst to know asr past why he was like that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: wesha

I am beginning to have serious doubts about my writing skills...🥺




don't be heart broken dear...i liked ur post...and i think u made some very good points...👏

I don't think the CVs themselves have fully agreed on Arnav's past...i think its murky for them too...so we might not have a scene where they explain why he has become who he is...atleast not anytime soon...but i think they mentioned that Khushi has something to do with his past...lets see what happens...

But as u said, it would be nice to give away at least a bit about what really happened...😊
Edited by minihussain - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gud for d start. Will love to read more.

N baby plz don't reply in my posts just bcoz of gratitude. I am sure there r many posts of mine which u'll really to comment.

Itna bura bhi nahi likhti mein. Chk all my posts. Will love to get views im all.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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actually ...this scene wud take their relation to a new level ...it wud be nyc if CV's cud give us this sort of scene 😳

& loved ur writing 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minihussain


don't be heart broken dear...i liked ur post...and i think u made some very good points...👏

I don't think the CVs themselves have fully agreed on Arnav's past...i think its murky for them too...so we might not have a scene where they explain why he has become who he is...atleast not anytime soon...but i think they mentioned that Khushi has something to do with his past...lets see what happens...

But as u said, it would be nice to give away at least a bit about what really happened...😊


Thanku so much for the encouragement...😊 and your clapping smiley !!

I understand 'the past' is subject to 'TRPs'...:)...that we cannot dictate...but I feel Khushi's eagerness in trying to wipe away Arnav's sorrows and make it her own irrespective of what they are can certainly be shown without revealing anything.
The scene above could stop just there with Arnav's heart warming to Khushi...the thought matters...he might actually make an effort to come out of his past just so that she stop worrying about him. and then 'the past' can become inconsequential...it comes when it has to come but Khushi will certainly not want to dig it up...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushshri

Gud for d start. Will love to read more.

N baby plz don't reply in my posts just bcoz of gratitude. I am sure there r many posts of mine which u'll really to comment.

Itna bura bhi nahi likhti mein. Chk all my posts. Will love to get views im all.


Thanks Rashmi...😊 think that is your name or what people call you on this forum.
It means a lot to hear back from members like you who have been around for so long and clearly make this forum the decent, creative and friendly place that it is.

I actually wanted to reply on all your posts but thought that would look 'too desperate to get a reaction' sort..:) The particular post I replied to at that point did not have many replies and I was kind of getting the same depressing feeling that I get when I don't hear back from anyone about my posts. Hence, the reply...the 'gratitude' that I feel is fact...why hide from it? 😊

Will unabashedly comment on your posts from now on...so much so u might have to rein me in...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: natashaa46

actually ...this scene wud take their relation to a new level ...it wud be nyc if CV's cud give us this sort of scene 😳


& loved ur writing 👏


Thanku so much dear, your applause made my day !! 😃

I think you understood what I wanted to portray through this scene in the correct light.
So, thanks again!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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And a big thank you to all of you who 'liked' ur post...I am a fan of many of your OS's...trust me, as someone who is into writing, I know they require talent.
I would love to get feedback from such a talent pool as and when you guys find time.

Thank you.

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