O.S Mard he woh jo dil de, warna hai bekar w/music

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Ok guys I'm mixing some events from now and before. This is taking place a day before the sangeet.

Anjali: NK sabki tasveer aap li jiye na.

NK: Ya of course Di. Acha ladki wale ki family se shuru karte hai. Payal Bhabi kahan hai?

Anjali: Woh unki jhumke gir gayi thi kahin pe. Akash unki madat kar raha hai.

NK: Ohoho. I get it. I get it. Alright Khushiji aap apni mom ke saath khari ho sakti hai?

Khushi and Garima pose for the picture.

NK: Hmm kuch missing hai.

Khushi: Nanheji, Kya hai?

Nk: I don't know. Khushiji zara right move ki jiye.

Khushi moves.

NK: Nahi. Abhi bhi kuch... 😕

Khushi: Nanheji.

Nk: Khushiji zara peeche jayiye

Khushi: Uffo Nanheji.

Khushi moves back.

NK: Hmmm,

Arnav comes in and stand beside garima.

Arnav: Ab theek hai?

Khushi looks at Arnav with a confused expression.

Anjali: Haan. Thik hai. Lelo.

NK got the hint and he smiled. He clicked the picture.

Garima: Hum Payalia ko dhundke late hai.

Khushi is about to leave.

NK: Khushiji aap kahan jarahi hai?

Khushi: Woh Nanheji,,,

Nk: Aap ki humari bas ek hi tasveer hai. Please kuch aur ke liye ruk jayiye na?

Khushi: Nanheji. Nahi. Bohot ho gaya. Woh jiji...

Anjali: Khushiji. Leliye na.

Khushi is about to leave and Arnav pulls her hand back. They look into each others eyes and NK clicks the picture. They are lost in each others eyes.

NK: Wow what a great picture.

Both come back to their senses and Khushi says I'll go find Jiji. Arnav smiles. He knew Khushi was making an excuse. He saw her make her way to the poolside. Khushi's heartbeat just got 100x faster.

Arnav: Khushi.

Khushi turns around.

Khushi: Aap?

Arnav has a box in his hand and he opens it. Inside are beautiful gold and red bangles that glitter like the sun. Khushi had never seen such beautiful bangles until today. Arnav starts putting the bangles on Khushi's wrist one by one. She is shocked and keeps on staring at Arnav. He looks at her too. When Arnav finishes putting them on her, he is about to walk away.

Khushi: Aapne humare liye ye churiya kharidi hai?

Arnav: No of course not. Woh to upar se giri thi. Meri size ki nahi hai toh maine socha shayed tumhe fit hogi.

Arnav rolled his eyes. He couldn't believe that this girl did not have one ounce of intelligence.

Khushi: 😲

Arnav smirks.

Khushi: Thik hai. Hum poochna chahte hai ki aapne humari liye kyun kharidi?

Arnav moved closer to Khushi. He is inches away.

Arnav: Tumhe kya lagta hai?

Khushi: Humein... woh... aap

Arnav: Main kya? Bolo Khushi.

Khushi: Kuch nahi. Hum chalte hai.

Khushi is about to walk away but he grabs her hand.

Arnav: Kyun jawab nahi sunna?

Khushi: Nahi.

Arnav laughs.

Arnav: Khushi use your brain. Wait you don't have one. Shayed tumhara dil tumhe jawab daide?

Khushi: Humein pata hai. Aap bas dikhana chate hai ke dusro ko kuch nahi pata par aap ko sab pata hai. Aap kehrahe the na gari mein ki Nanheji ko humari size bhi pata nahi. Isse kya hota hai? Koi farak nahi padta.

Arnav: Acha. Koi farak nahi padta? Thik hai. Main abhi uttardeta hoon.

Arnav brings Khushi's hand closer and is about to take them off. Khushi stops him with her other hand.

Arnav: Kya huwa Khushi? Tumhe to koi farak nahi padta na?

Khushi just runs away. Arnav smiled. He loved doing this to her but enough was enough. He would end this game tomorrow

**At the Gupta house: Khushi's bedroom.

Payal: Are waah. Khushi teri churiyaan toh bohot hi sundar hai. Kahan se mile?

Khushi: Woh jiji... Bad mein baat karte hai. Kaal aapki sangeet hai na. Aapko jaldi bhi utna hai.

Payal smiles.

Payal: Haan. Tu bhi aa.

Khushi: Haan Jjiji. Ek minute.

Khushi looked at her bangles again and had a big smile. She couldn't believe that Arnav had given her something for the very first time. Was this the guy she met back in Lucknow for the first time? The guy who insults her at every chance he gets? The guy who tortures her brutally? Somewhere along the way Khushi fell asleep, engrossed in her thoughts.

In the morning Garima was very tense.

Garima: Jiji hum chahte hai ke aaj sab thik hi ho.

Buaji: Chinta na karo. Nand Kishore ki kripa se sab thik hi hoga.

Garima: Hai Bhagwan. Jiji, Akash bitwa ki sherwani bhi bhejna hai.

Buaji: Haan. Abhi titiliya ko bulate hai.

Meanwhile Khushi was getting ready. She wore a beautiful light pink lahenga which exposed her stomach a tiny bit and had a low cut back. She loved her duppatta. It seemed all the glitter in the world was on it. She had her hair curled and looked like a complete doll. Jiji had given her matching bangles but she didn't want to take off the bangles Arnav had given her. She was admiring the bangles again.

Buaji: Are sanka devi. Idhar zara aao.

Khushi glanced at the bangles one more time and then walked to the living room.

Khushi: Ji Buaji. Kya huwa?

Buaji: Woh Raizadas ke yahan Akash bitwa ki sherwani bhejni hai.

Khushi: Acha Buaji. Hum abhi jate hai.

Once Khushi got the the Raizada house, Anjali opened the door. Arnav was behind Anjali, checking if all the arrangements for the sangeet were perfect.

Anjali: Arre waah Khushiji. Aap to aaj bohot hi zyada khoobsurat lag rahi hai, hai na chote?

Anjali tried hard to compose her face. Arnav glanced toward Khushi. Was it possible that someone could get more beautiful day by day? He thought she was looking ravishing.

Arnav: Yeah Di I could just.. Uh hemm.. Haan zyada buri nahi lagrahi hai.

Khushi scrunched her face.

Khushi: Kam se kam hum aapse toh aur ache lagrahe hai. Phir se kaali suit.

Arnav became a little mad too. He went upstairs.

Khushi: Hmm phir se gussa ho gaye.

A few hours later the sangeet began.

Khushi: Nanhe ji aap toh iss kurte mein bohot hi ache lag rahe hai.

NK: Thank you Khushiji. Saari surat toh aap ke liye hai.

Khushi: Nahi Naheji. Mehnat.

NK: Haan. Wahi to.

Arnav was watching from upstairs how NK and Khushi kept talking and laughing. He was more red than a tomatoe. He was having thoughts of hitting NK. He went to his room.

Anjali: Attention. Attention. Aaj humare bhai ki sangeet hai aur hum bohot hi excited hai. Hum bohot hi khushnaseeb bhi hai kyunki humein Payalji ki jaisi nanand milne wali hai. Aur Akash pe naaz bhi hai kyunki unhone ek bohot hi achi humsafar ko chuna hai. Toh aaj ki pehli performance...

Lights go off. Anjali is confused because this wasn't planned. After some time the lights go back on and everyone from the Raizada parivaar and Khushi is shocked. Were they hallucinating or did they really see... Arnav wearing a sherwani???

Arnav: Arz karta hoon
'Naa Lucknow ka Kurta
Naa Pathani Shalwar
Mard he woh jo dil de
warna hai bekaar'

Arnav winks at Khushi.

Khushi: Haii devi maiyyaa.. Arnavji??

Arnav:: Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori
Khushi moves behind Payal

Arnav:
Chup Chup Ke Sharmaaye Dekhe Chori Chori
Khushi peeps at Arnav and blushes.

Arnav: Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori
Chup Chup Ke Sharmaye Dekhe Chori Chori
Yeh Maane Ya Na Maane Main To Ispe Mar Gaya
Arnav points at Khushi

Yeh Ladki Hai Allah, Hai Hai Re Allah
Yeh Ladki Hai Allah, Hai Hai Re Allah


Khushi couldn't believe what just happened. She was about to faint and drop to the floor:

Yeh ladka hai Allah. Hai hai re allah 😉

Sorry guys it took me so long to write my latest OS but I hope it was worth the wait! Hope you guys enjoyed it. Anyway please like or comment 😛 If you wish to receive updates for future OS's do message or add me 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice start!

do write more
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loved it 😃 the starting scene is my favorite!!! kuch kuch hota hain 😍
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thanks guys ^^ 😃 but can anyone hear the background song?
Edited by alisha0104 - 13 years ago
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Fantastic.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Continue soon. Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it loved it n totally loved it...
Na lucknow da kurta
Na pathani shalwar
Mard hai jo dil de
Warna hai bekar...
My all time fav dialogue from my all time fav movie...OMG...now i really want arnav to say these lines...now im going back into arhiland to imagine this scene...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovearhi

Loved it loved it n totally loved it...

Na lucknow da kurta
Na pathani shalwar
Mard hai jo dil de
Warna hai bekar...
My all time fav dialogue from my all time fav movie...OMG...now i really want arnav to say these lines...now im going back into arhiland to imagine this scene...



I know I really loved those lines, the song,and tht movie a lot 😊 ahaha yeh im in tht land all the time. Because the show doesnt always show the things i want, i write OS's and pretend lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!!!! I love the song took!!! K3g was so awesome and when I was reading about arnie's performance...I couldn't help but imagine the k3g song being picturized on k2g + asr 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha0104



I know I really loved those lines, the song,and tht movie a lot 😊 ahaha yeh im in tht land all the time. Because the show doesnt always show the things i want, i write OS's and pretend lol


N i luv ur os..just helps me pretend...dnt hav great imagination myself...🤔
My imagination is a tad bit besharam...so keep imagining the same thing...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol im sure u have imagination through which you can imagine the scenes in my OS coming true 😉

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