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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

smartly written. waiting for more dear

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Part 2 - liked geet's defination about love and lust...but loved the way maan proved her wrong...his attitude...arogance...wow...geet is so innocent that she thaught he will leave after giving answer...dev is coward...without listening to her or understanding the situation he left her with devil...maan took her to room...ohhh Annie awesome update...

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#563

Very interesting devil. Loved it very much.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Absolutely mindblowing update, dear….I loved their fight of words….his dialogues…his gestures….but our geet is also a bindas girl gave him good fight…

I loved the challenge…geet have 6 months to proov that love exist…..how will she …?

the game begins …it will very interesting to see how you proceeds the story….how you make them to play such game….

Update soon

PS… please go with what you have decided…continue with this….

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#565

awesome update
loving this devil maan
update soon

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dhamigeet

@dhamigeet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#566

DEAD!!! HATS OFF!!!!!!!!

each word has deep depth ,ur creativity has been 4folds enhanced by this ff

fallen shortoff words 2 praise u

the script was heart touching ,the feel of the words sinks down into blood

portrayal of character was just mindblowing

Edited by dhamigeet - 13 years ago

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anusha arja

@anushaarja

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

i want geet to fall 4 maan first... dekha jaye toh it will be always maan who falls 4 geet... but i want it to b changed... i want geet to confess her feelings to him...and den maan being a devil will b mended by her to love her... i want it to happen ...

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

Are u lyk asking us if we want u to write more?? Hell yeah!!ofc..m already in luv with devils luv..u can take d story whichever way u wish..i know it wil be outstanding.gud luck:)

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#569

THE GAME BEGINS NOW.. what a start dear..

my net troubled me..

just i came now to read ur devils desire..

i was totally flattered by this maan..

oh!so much arrogant..

this is my 1000th post..

specially waited n posted for my special friend..

just awesome..

keep on rocking..

i want my 10000th post also to be urs..

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay
Awesome update Aniee...

and oh my god... the arrogance.. the attitude and the dialogues of devil... am totally in love with this devil...

the parts where in he tells that the rule changes according to him, the sarcasm he shows while speaking about love were just brilliant...

and the best part was when devil tells "Yeah this is hell and you have dared the devil." wow... muahs to you aniee... only you can make us fall in love with a devil and ofcourse devil being MSK... 😉 (Iam just imagining MSK with arrogance and attitude... 😳)

Coming to Geet... poor soul.. she is totally stuck now... and trying to slap devil... that was such a bad idea...

but devil totally ruled the update... uff... your character portrayal was just mindblowing...

and now the game has begun, i cant wait for the next update...