Short OS: Tumhe kuch feel nahi hota?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all this is the short story made by me based on today's precap ...I hope you all enjoy it...

Arnav was busy with talking on phone to someone...at that time nani and Anjali came there ...

Nani: " Anjali bitiya ham soch rahe the k Khushi bitiya ko bhi isi ghar me hamesha k liye aa jana chahiye, kyun? "

Anjali: " haan Nani...( smiling and looking at Arnav )... arre chhote bhi yaha hai to unse bhi puchh lete hai, kyun chhote? "

Arnav: " what di? " ( being so innocent )

Anjali: " yahi k Khushi ji agar is ghar me ajaye to kitna achha hoga.."

Arnav: " matlab? "

Nani: " matlab yahi ki ghar me itni achhi ladki hai to bahar dekhne se kya matlab hai? "

Arnav: " Kis bare me? What r u trying to say? "

Nani: " Chhote ham Khushi bitiya ki shaadi k bare me keh rahe the, kyun kya khyal hai aapka? "

Arnav: " I mean ...Khushi aur..."

Nani interrupted him: " haan unhe to koi aitraaz nahi hai..." ( nani and Anjali are smiling to him )

Arnav: " what? Usne haan keh diya shaadi k liye? "

Nani : " haan chhote...aur na kyun bolegi wo itni achhi joo Jodi hai..."

Arnav : " lekin ye sab aise...kaise? "

Nani: " kyun aapko koi aetraaz hai kya ? " ( Anjali and Nani smiling to him )

Arnav: " no.i mean...matlab k...khushi..." ( couldn't speak properly )

Nani: " Chalo accha hai vaise aapko Khushi pasand nahi hai fir bhi aap maan gaye...hame bahut Khushi hui...Ab to NK naa kyun kahega jab chhote hi maan gaye hai to kyun Anjali bitiya?"

Anajli: " haan Naniji... wo dono to waise bhi ek dusre k sath bahut ache se ghul mil jate hai..." ( both are smiling )

Arnav: " NK ? I mean what? Aap log kabse NK k bare me baat kar rahe the? NK aur Khushi? "

Anjali and Naniji : " aur nahi to kya? Kiske bare me? "

Arnav angrily goes from there throwing the file on floor and giving evil look to Anjali and Nani...They both are laughing...Nani: " Dekha Anjali bitiya, ab chhote Khushi bitiya se apne dil ki baat zarur karenge dekhna aap..."

Arnav is very frustrated knowing this... he is thinking how can Khushi say yes to NK...i mean he is not good for her...i mean i must talk with her... He is searching for Khushi next day ...He saw Khushi coming with black and red with silver work on her outfit... open hair...light makeup and looking like an angel..he couldn't take off his eyes...suddenly he came back in reality and went to talk with her.Khushi was at pool side and doing something...Arnav comes near her and Khushi is shivering and her dhak dhak is going on and on...She tries to go from there but he stops her holding her hand ... She closes her eyes ...

Arnav: " Khushi tum mujse itna darti kyun ho? "

Khushi :" nahi wo ham...matlab..sirf..hum to...aapse..." (couldn't finish her line)

Arnav: " Tumhe mujse koi fark to nahi padta i hope.." ( with hard voice and angrily looking at her )

Khushi: " aap baar baa raise kyun puchhte hai? "

Arnav: " to tum mujse dur kyun bhagti ho? Aur tumne muje batana bhi zaroori nahi samja? "

Khushi: " kya bol rahe hai aap? "

Arnav: " wahi jot um kehna nahi chahti Khushi..."

Khushi talk in her mind: " inhe kaise pata chal gaya k me kya chahti hu? Mene to kisise bhi nahi bataya fir inhe kaise? "

Arnav: " Khushi...me tumse baat kar raha hu... tumne ye kyun kiya? "

Khushi: " hamne to kuch bhi..."

Arnav: " jab me tumhare kareeb ata hu to tumhe koi fark nahi padta? " (and he comes near her and he holds her both hands in his) " agar me tumhe chhuta hu to tumhe koi fark nahi padta?" and he holds her from her waist and Khushi is getting very nervous and stares at him with moist eyes..." he slowly pins her against the wall and an inch away from her, " kya tumhe ye nahi lagta k me tumse dur nahi jaun jab me tumhare kareeb ata hu to... ? kya tumhe ye nahi lagta k tum muje gale se laga lo? ...jab mene tumhe kis kiya tha to tumhe kuch feel nahi hua? Jab tumne muje kiss kiya to tumne sirf shart k liye kiss ki thi muje? Tumne kuch mehsoos nahi kiya? Bolo Khushi tumhe koi fark nahi padta? "

Khushi listening all this crying and tears falling from her eyes and in a very low tone: " jabse mene aapko pehli baar dekha tha tabse meri lifa badal gayi hai...aapne hamesha muje bhala bura kaha...muje bahut bura bhi laga par fir bhi me wo sab bhul gayi...par ab kuch din se aap mere sath aise...me khud ko rok nahi pati aapke paas ane se...jab bhi aap mere paas ate hai to mere dil ki dhadkan tez ho jati hai... jab aapne mere cheek par... aisa ehsaas muje pehle kabhi nahi hua...isiliye mene bhi aapko kiya tha... par muje laga k aap sirf ye sb muje pareshaan karne k liye..."

Arnav getting emotional hearing all this and feels so happy from heart...

Khushi: " mene aapko hamesha se...matlab"

Arnav: " what Khushi? Bolo." Khushi :" hamesha ...se..matlab..." Khushi sees Arnav getting excited to hear that words from her...she loose her control looking his eyes moist and painfull and wants to be with her...She suddenly hugs him and starts crying : " ham aapse pyar karte hai Arnavji hamesha se..." Arnav becomes so happy and hugs her back tightly and more tightly...both are pressing each other passionately as they could...

Khushi: " hamse kabhi dur mat jana.ham seh nahi payenge Arnavji..."

Arnav: " I LOVE YOU TOO KHUSHI..." and presses her more into him...

Arnav: " to tumne NK k sath kyun? "

Anjali: " unhone kuch nahi kaha chhote unhe to pata bhi nahi hai ye sab...wo to hamne hi ye sab plan kiya tha aapse aone dil ki baat kehne k liye khushiji se...aur kaam ho gaya"...Anjali smiling and coming with naniji...both are happy...Arnav and Khushi smiling and feeling shy and looked down and Khushi runs away from there in a shy...Arnav to anjali : " Thank you di...thank you naniji..."and hugs them...all are smiling and happy...

😊 🥳

Please do comment that i can improve my writing...and press like atleast no comment...Thanks in advance...😊

Edited by thelondon12345 - 13 years ago

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MsCeylon thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww this is sooo beautiful :)
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loved it!!!!
it ws so sweet!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh that was Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Loved it.
Thanks.😃
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it was amazing do write more
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Awww loved it was sooo beautifyl <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all for commenting...I'll try to write more...once again thanks...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooohoo..its party time...(i just luv this emoticon..so use it very rarely..this os deserves one)...
They confessed...hmmm..clever planning..,beautiful confession...i luv confessions in which khushi confesses first..hope they show that in the show..
Very nice s..

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